SS BUDDIES FOREVER UPDATED PART 8 PG 25 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: s2singh

Hi Ishita...very nice update...

Panchi - Karan...i liked it a lot...and a jealous ranveer...😃

Kisha scene was awesome yaar...😳😳

Thanks for the PM...

smriti

thanks smriti😃

I am glad u liked it😳
KISHA AND RAHI ARE ALWAYS AWESOME😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
thanks guys for your comments
here comes part3 hope u all will like this


PART 3
Panchi,karan,kiya and kd came out ranveer was standing there
''non...un..Ranveer tum yaha kya kar rahe ho''said panchi''tumhare liye wait kar raha tha c'mon let's go to canteen''said ranveer ''tum jao mujhe karan se kuch bat karni he I'll meet u after 15 mins ok''said panchi RV wanted to say some thing but kiya started to speak wit KD in between ''listen me sare ways khud he dhund lugi I dan't need u so u can go '' ''pata tha tum aesa he kuch bologi aur mujhe bhi thume school ghumane ka koi shock nahi he sir ne kaha isliye chup chap chalo thodi hi der ka kam he''said kd lying to her and himself bcoz he knew it will take time to show her whole school.''I don't care par me tumhare sath nahi ane wali ''said kiya with whatever look ''dekho tum sidhe sidhe chalo ya...''said KD getting angry but before he can complete panchi said ''guys guys guys plz don't start again kiya plz KD ke sath chali jao I promise vo tumhe pareshan nahi karega'' KD looked at panchi with big eyes and a open mouth ''what do u men panchi me ise pareshan karta hu'' panchi looked at KD with shut-your-mouth-and-listen-to-me look ''hey u fatso hamare beech me mat aoe we will solve our problem'' said kiya ranveer was now boiling with anger how dare her she called panchi fatso now she is gone but before he can speak karan said ''hey u can't call her fatso ok '' and this was a suprise KD also forgot his anger and was looking at karan and then ranveer because usually ranveer stand's like a shield for panchi but now ...ranveer was standing like a statue he was not able to digest whatever happened
everybody was looking at karan then karan said''what??tum sab mere taraf aese kyu dekh rahe ho'' ''nothing '' said panchi and looked at ranveer
and he was still shocked '' aaa ok thik he me tayar hu '' said kiya and kiya and kd went from there ''panchi agar tum free ho jao to plz mujhe canteen me milna ok''said rv looking at karan with angry look and went from there
''ye mere taraf ase kyu dekh ke gaya'' said karan '' vo actually mera best friend he leave him vo thoda pagal he .karan aj mujhe thoda important kam kya tum school me kal 1 ghanta pehele aa sakte ho me me thume kal school dekhaugi''said panchi''ya ofcors to thik he kal subhe me ajauga '' said karan
panchi and karan looked at each other no one was ready to move ''ok ..then..buy..''said panchi ''han... han... bye'' said karan and panchi went from there
Corridor
''aur Yahase principle ka office aur bus khatam'' said kd he had tried his best to make this school showing thing short ''thank god khatam ho ab tum jese garib looser ke sath itni dher my god''said kiya and just took one step and kd hold her hand tightly and in a sec kiya's back was on a pillar kd was standing in front of her with his most dangerous angry look he was very close to her ''kya kaha tumne garib looser listen I am warning u ''said kd coming closer and closer to her ''mujhe tum jese amir nakchade logo se bohot nafrat he jo bas kisiko bhi uske financial condition se judge karte he ''said kd coming more closer ''aur aj tumne mujhase panga leke bhohot galat kiya he now u will suffer C-H-I-K-L-E-T''said kd in her ears he was so close to her that he could feel her warm breath on his cheeks ''leave my hand its hurting''said kiya kd leaved her hand and giving her a angry look went from there kiya holding her hand which was red now just looked in the direction from where kd disappeared .
Canteen
Ranveer was staring at his coffe cup lost in his thoughts panchi came there and said ''tumhe ho kya gaya he nonu tum karan ke sath aesa kyu behave kar rahe the '' ''mene kesa behave kiya us KIRAN ke sath kya thumare us naye dost ko bura laga ''said rv with a combination of inocent and angry look .samar and juhi came there ''OMG RV aur panchi jagad rahe he ye to breaking news ''CLICK!!CLICK!! and she took some pictures of angry ranveer and panchi ''juhi saheba ap bus 5 min ke liye phota nikalna band karegi bus 5 min ke liye ''said samar ''ok samar'' said juhi
''kya hua ranveer janab ''asked samar ''ek min samar .ranveer tumn karan ko kiran bulana band karo aur agar tumne phirse karan ke sath aesa behave kiya to mujhase kabhi bat mat karna''said panchio with a sad look rv looked at closed his eyes he can't see his moti sad and went to her wraped her small hand in his both the hands and said only 2 words from his heart which were enough to cheer up panchi he said''soory panchi'' and there panchi's cute smile was back they both hugged each other CLICK!!CLICK!!''5 min ho gaye samar ''said juhi samar just smiled at her innocence kd came there he saw his buddies happy he didn't want to tell about kiya and spoile everybody's mood he felt a hand on his shoulder and saw piddi and bobby beside him ''kese ho kd bhai me aur bobby abhi basketball date se a rahe he ''said piddi with his old shy look bobby slaped piddi on his head and said''abe chuhe hum basketball khel rahe the jisme ek hi round me tu mujhase 3 bar har gaya bakhi 2 round khelne ki zarurat bhi nahi padi aur ye date kese hue''kd started laughing everybody else also heard their conversation and started laughing
kd,piddi and bobby joined others ''salo kamino has rahe ho mujhpe sharam nahi ati''said piddi''vese hum soch rahe the ki inter school competition me hum bhi hamara nam de de ap sab ka kya khayal he ''said samar and thought hum to bus juhi saheba ko impress karne ke liye part le rahe he''me bhi participate kar raha hu ''said ranveer and thought new schools ane wale he matlab new girls bhi''me bhi part le rahi hu '' said panchi leaving everybody shocked panchi never took part in competitions like this panchi thought this time I will prove everybody ki me bas ek darpuk moti ladki nahi hu ''me bhi le rahi hu''said bobby and piddi quickly said me bhi le raha hu'' and thought sirf bobby le rahi he isliye ''me bhi le leti hu agar samar le raha he to ...mera matlab he tum sab le rahe ho to ''said juhi
(kiya has given her name first only to prove her mother that anya is not the best and kd know this)''me bhi part le raha hu ''said kd and thought
sirf us kiya ko sabak sikhane ke liye akhir use bhi to pata chale ki garib looser kya kya kar sakta he to.
Everybody is paticipating for their own reasons

guys tum sab ko mere taraf se salam yeha tak padhane ke liye
I know this was really bad 🤢
tomato ande jo bhi marna he maro guys
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Ishu🤗
Yayyy I am first one to comment🥳


Love the cahpter dear
Awwwiee My nonu is so jealous
But love the way he calm himself after seeing his moti upset
they both are just too cute

Karan is sweet
but I am not liking him😳
ab reason toh u know na😉

KD and kiya ke kya kehna
typical KiShaish😆

Waiting for inter collage competition now

so do continue soon

Thanks for the PM

take care

Lots of Love
Geet
Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Ishu 🤗 loved it👏
cvs shud learn frm u hw to give equal screen space 😆
i am loving jealous rv more n more...;)
RaHi <3
waiting for the next part ...thank u for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Wowww Ishita... 👍🏼 👏
Dis was sooo good...😃
D buddies masti... FINALLY
❤️d it...
D Kisha scene... AH-MAZING... 😳
Watin 2 knw what happens next... 😊 SO UPDATE SOON...😆
Thanx 4 d pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Ishu why are you saying that its bad,in fact i like it my kisha and their tashan.Thanks 4 PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Hey. I am anjali. Loved d update... U r a gr8 writer. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
y do u say its bad..me likes it...ranveer s so cute...
nice update
keep going dear...
neha
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
SORRY! I AM VERY VERY VERY LATE TO REPLY!! 😭
Loved the small Kisha scene!!! Yay KD is taking part in the competition for Kiya.. LOL😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
HEY ISHITA IT WAS AMAZING !!!!!!!!!!!! NONU JEALOUS COMPETITION !!!!!!!!!! EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER

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