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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
First Of All Thanx For The Lovely Response Guys..
It Inspire me to write more and more.
Will reply all of you soon.

Here u all go with the Update.

Part 5 :

Everyone was praising Rah for their choices. Everyone tod that they look damm cute together, they shud also do the engagement soon. Panchi's mom was loving this enviroment. Rahi went to panchi mom.

P : maa mujhe sabko batana hai ki hum dono couple nhi hai.

R : chup kar na moti kis kis ko pakad ke bolegi, hum dono coupl enhi hai.

P : par nonu.

R : let it be na. Waise v iss function hum kaun sa inse milne aa rahe hai.

One lady came to panchi mom and said ' aapka SIL toh bada hi changa and she pulled RV cheek. Haye kinna sona munda hai.

RV was nt liking his cheek pulling. He ran To KD.

R : are bhai jaldi se engagement kar aur hume baksh de nhi toh ye log meri aur moti ki shaddi kara dengein.

KD laughed.

The ring ceremony started. Both KD and Kiya exchanged their ring. KD kissed kiya on her cheek and everyone congratulate them. The function gt over. And everyone head to their home.

R : aunty panchi chalo main aap dono k ghar drop kar deta hun.

Piddi comes there.

P : mere bhai tu itn atension kyun le raha hai. I'll drop aunty aur tu panchi ko chod de.

P : kyun maa tere saath akele kyun jayengi.

Pi: tu har baath mein apni tang kyun ara ti hai MOTIII.

R : oye.

Pi : chill. Mujhe aunty se kuch kaam hai. And he wink to panchi maa and she winks to piddi same.

P(M) : ha chalo piddi.

R : chal moti i'll drop you. They hugged Kiya KD and gt back into the car.

KD : hope hamara plan successful ho jaye.

Kiya : Finger crossed.

P(M) : ye mere idea kam toh karega hi.

Rahi were on the way. Panchi was peacefully sleeping. And rv was driving, but suddenly the tier gt punchered.

P : nonu ye kya hogaya.

R : main dhekhta hun.

He checked all the four tiers and found one tier punchered.

P : kya hua.

R : tier punchered. Main dicy mein stepeni dhekhta hun.

He opened the dicy and found no stepeni.

R : Shit man !! Stepeni toh hai hi nhi. Panchi tu ek kaam kar jaake car mein baith aur andar se lock karliyo. Main dekh kar aata hun, ki yaha ki gargage hai ki nhi.

P : hmmm. She went to open the car door and it was unable to open.

P : nonu, gate nhi khul raha hai.

R : kyaa... he also try to open it bt then he saw that he had left his inside only. Moti car toh auto lock hogaya hai.

P : whattt. Ab hum kya karenge.

It started Raining.

R : issi ki kami thi. Dhatt teri. He saw some light coming from on eplace.

Moti chal yaha barish mein bighne se acha hai ki waha chalte hai.

Done for now.

Hope you all lik ethe update.

Romantic an dromantic scenes are coming in nxt update.

Need hlp. I ma just gting 5 6 comments.

If you all guys are having some new rahi fans in your buddy list plzzz PM this Story to them.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Yippiee me to reply 1st... 😆
👏 👏 👏
Loved it Kamya...
Yeh... my Kisha got engaged... & d kiss...
Toh tire puncture was d plan... 😲
Bt seems ki problems & twists TBP ka peecha nahi chodenge... 😆
Yahan bhi haunt karne aagaye... 😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Kamya loved the update 👏
plz update soon
want some romance in the rain😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Okie so buddies at it again...😆.. panchi n nonu hain hi duffers... like the way it's building up kamya...n waiting for the next romantic update... thanks for this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Woww its so gud. The buddies plan for rahi.. Eeep. Yaar u sent me back to rahiland. Loved it. All the while i kept on smiling and blushing... Pls update soon. Its damn amazing... 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Plz continue!
It was written beautifully..!
Edited by tinaswea - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Hey dear

Wow just love the update

RaHi alone

Car puncture

And Rain

Hayeee

Kya situation hai

can't wait to read more

So plz continue soon


Take care

Lots of love

Geet

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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey dear

Wow just love the update

RaHi alone

Car puncture

And Rain

Hayeee

Kya situation hai

can't wait to read more

So plz continue soon


Take care

Lots of love

Geet


Thanx sweetheart for liking the update.
Bt i am sad that i am gting very less response.
I dun feel to wr8 ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Nooo. Pls kamya dont stop. I am dying to read it. It is so good. Plsss
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: anjali1805

Nooo. Pls kamya dont stop. I am dying to read it. It is so good. Plsss


Anjali dear m nt so hapie wid d feedbcks.

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