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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello, Namaste, Shatrikall, Adaab to all of you.

My first OS on Rahi. I am badly addicted to them. Just love them Madly.
So here i am with my OS.

Characters are same.
Just small Intro Of the story.

College has completed and they are doing job in same company.
Morning time :

The phone ring. Its RV. panchi picked the phone.

RV : gudmrng moti.
P : Gud morng nonu. Kya baat hai aaj itni subh subh u called me.
RV : ab kya karun teri awazz sune bina mere din hi nhi guzarta.
P : bas bas. bata kya baat hai.
RV : tu mere dil ki baat kaise jaan jati hai.
P: best frend hun teri.
RV : Best frend hai par khayal girl frend jaisa rakhti hia. Acha sun '' I AM IN LOVE ''
P : wat ???? Kaun hai wo 😔 ??
RV : tu mere ghar aajaa i'll tell you. chal ok bye.

Panchi in tears. kya mujhe apna pyaar milega.

Precap : panchi opens the door and it was dark 😲

I know its a crap. Bt promise to make it interesting in first update.
Plzzz give feedback and like the post.
Suggestion, chappals tomatoes all welcome 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow Kamya
It seems interesting
can't wait to read more
plz continue soon

Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nicee start👏
continue soon😊
and thanx for d pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start Buddy ! Its looking interesting. Do continue soon.Thanks for the PM. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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tanx luved it thanx for the pm 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kamya, its adorably Rahilicious, it looks intresting.
Give a bigger update and just work a bit on your Grammar, upd soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhura..

Kamya, its adorably Rahilicious, it looks intresting.

Give a bigger update and just work a bit on your Grammar, upd soon.


update coming tonight 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 03Kamya


update coming tonight 😊


Plz continue soon😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1 :

The phone ring. Its RV. panchi picked the phone.

RV : gudmrng moti.

P : Gud morng nonu. Kya baat hai aaj itni subh subh u called me.

RV : ab kya karun teri awazz sune bina mere din hi nhi guzarta.

P : bas bas. bata kya baat hai.

RV : tu mere dil ki baat kaise jaan jati hai.

P: best frend hun teri.

RV : Best frend hai par khayal girl frend jaisa rakhti hia. Acha sun '' I AM IN LOVE ''

P : wat ???? Kaun hai wo 😲 ??

RV : tu mere ghar aajaa i'll tell you. chal ok bye.

Panchi in tears 😭. kya mujhe mera pyaar milega.

Evening time :

Panchi goes to Nonu house. she knocked the door bt there was no response. later she find that the door was open.

P : itna dark kyun hai. nonu. nonuuu. listen nonu agar you are playing prank with me, then i am not gonna spare u.

The light focus on panchi and on other side on ranveer. Barish song was playing in the background.

RV comes near to panchi.

P : nonu ye sab ...

Ranveer put his finger on her lips.

R : moti tu mere life ka sabse important part hai and i can't leav ewith you. Tu duniya ki sabse achi bestie hai. Tu mere saath hamesha har situation mein rahi hai. Maine tujhe bahut hurt kiya hai par u always forgived me. I can't leave without you moti. You are very imporatant to me. Moti i want to say something to you today.

P : bolo nonu.

R : moti... I LOVE YOU. I really really love you. And mujhe pata hai ki tu v mujhe chahti hai. I can't be with you frends anymore. I love you alots. I can't imagine my life with you.

P : ( in tears, not able to speak ). Nonu. Jo v tune kaha wo.

R : wo sach hai.

Panchi runs and hugs him tightly. Ranveer hugs her too tightly. They break the hug.

P : am i dreaming.

R : nhi re moti, its all true. Chal ab rona dhona band kar aur Wo 3 magical words bol de. Can't wait anymore.

P : I love you nonu. I really really love you. Dun ever leave me alone.

Ranveer hugs her and she too.

HOPE YOU ALL LIKE THE UPDATE. SORRY FOR THE SHORT UPDATE.

EXAM GOING ON. PROMISE TO GIVE MORE ROMANTIC UPDATE IN UPDATE 2.

SUGGESTIONS WELCOME.

TOMATOES TOO WELCOMED.

Dun not forget to give likes and omments 😊

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