arranged marraige (KiSha ff) (CH4 updated)pm later - Page 10

Originally posted by: Aditi_4ver

Wow osum safu!!!!!!! 🤗 thanks a lot...Ditz🤗

Thnx fr d pm dear! dnt thankme...you liked the CS and thus i PMed you!!

Luvd Kiya's "i dont care whoever you are. now pick up the damn books like you should have" wala dialodg! hehe i am glad you luved it...even i was imagine all of it happening as i was writing it!

Conti soon dear! 👍🏼 i will!! :)

Originally posted by: -Haari-

Safu🤗 Rica🤗

Wow nice update yar.. thanks a lot yaar!!!

Kisha first meeting was interesting..loved it i am glad u did..!

waiting for next update keep waiting😉

Originally posted by: Crazydevils

I mean this is the best chappy i've ever heard!!! really?? i am glad it is!!

Amazing di how do u all make such a amazzing ff ! i dont know...and its not that amazing!

I mean I do wanna try em The Riich peoples wala dialog hehe do try then😉

what a nice thing.. Kisha first meet was amazing avantika awhh.. she was too cute ! :D hehe yep she is tooo cutee...!!
Amazing vala chappy update more soon 😃 ! hehe you soo have to wait for that

Originally posted by: sweetz1204

Saf it was awesome! Shwetz...thanks again!!

I donno why you always underestimate urself🤔 cause i am not that great sweety!! bas u think i am!

I was fab girl👏i am glad u felt soo!!

I also loved the colour code system😳 hehe i have seen in a lot on IF and thought to included it!

Kisha first meet ...

Tht too stoneface chicklet one eh? Nice !! i miss them damn too muchh!!!

Update soon and do pm me! update soon...would be a doubt...bt PM you know i will!!

Originally posted by: Adry

I'm loving this...the tables have turned...Kiya as the scholarship student and KD as the rich brat hehe yea i wanted to change the concept!!

but some things are still the same...Kiya's family and Ruby😡😡 hehe yea i just wanted to include them...dont worry...Ruby mostly will be tot a huge lesson!!

Avantika seems a little tame here😆 hehe she is KDs sis...and well protected so she is damn tamed and a complete sweetheart.

Thnx for the PM Safi😃 dont thankme...as you liked the CS i have PMed you!!

Do update soon😳 i will when i feel like!

Originally posted by: PrincessD

hey nic update, it surely was not messed up. wanna c more of kiya n KD together, so pls update soon, waiting😊

Originally posted by: nishal310

safi that was the awesome start aweee thanks a lot Di...it means a lot coming from you!!

first of all the character sketches are describe very beautifully

now coming to the first part you nailed it yaar

everthing is just perfect i am glad you liked it...!!

you wrote everything is very beautifully

and i enjoyed the every bit of it

good work safi👏

thanks for the pm dont thank me di i should thank you for taking out time and reading and commenting on this since you dont watch TBP!!

take care you too take care and i luv you too di!!! 🤗

love

shivali

Originally posted by: safi_kisha