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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Crazydevils

Ok, ok calm me down please... beacause this was as perfect as i thought.

I mean it was way better than the 1st chapter LOL 😃
I mean 1st chappy + 2nd chappy = Pawffect ! ? 👏 👏 👏
I mean the Kisha meet was amazing with those chit-chat talks small fights and they were amzing.. 👍🏼
But the road map thing shiitt..! Now, the story beholds me, the wrong route ab kuch hone wala hai and I ssly cant wait 😲 😕 😃

Thank you so much dear.
I am so glad that you liked it.
will try to update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Anikz003

Awesome!!!!!!!

please do pm me

Thank you so much.Will defo pm you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Tulip.

Awesum ff yaar. Pls pm me when u update next.

Thank you so much.will pm you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Aditi_4ver

Aish,Aditi🤗. I hav 1 q juz 1... only 1... 1 n only 1 (fr nw =P) Y is there only a button?? Not a LUV button?? Seriously I don't know.But we will create one later. 😛 😉 Anyways, now kisha r gonna gt lost!! Oooya!! [/:D\] [<:P]yes😆😉

Amazin, rokin fab n mind blowing updt!!.Thank you so much
Cant wait fr d nxt ch yaar!!! 😃
Ur xams r ovr na?? So keep updting both ur ffs k!! 😊
Will be eagerly waiting 4 both d updts!Will update soon.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: 100littledevils

HAHAHA Awesome start yaar. they are gonna get lost... yahooo!!!
really loved kisha scenes!! update soon!! <3

Thank you so much.Will update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
aishu🤗
haha awesome chappy yaar!!!!
stoneface-chicklet are back😎
gosh KD nearly ran over her , but nthng happened thnk god!!!
KD is cute and his smile is more cuter *soo true*
ohh KD had bad luck (dnt worry KD now kiya is there to turn ur bad luck to good luck)😳
KD a gentlemen
lolz my kisha will get lost now , like literally🤣
ohh i m soo looking forward to next chappy aishu!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: arhadlove

aishu🤗Razzie🤗
haha awesome chappy yaar!!!!Thank you.😃
stoneface-chicklet are back😎Yes😉
gosh KD nearly ran over her , but nthng happened thnk god!!!
KD is cute and his smile is more cuter *soo true*.Yes I love his smile😳
ohh KD had bad luck (dnt worry KD now kiya is there to turn ur bad luck to good luck)😳You are right.😳
KD a gentlemen.yes he is.😳
lolz my kisha will get lost now , like literally🤣.More fun on its way.😆
ohh i m soo looking forward to next chappy aishu!!!!.Will update soon.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Adry

Ash!!!! I'm in love with the story...its so unique👏 the whole road trip sounds so exciting😃 thank you so much Adry.

KD's a lot more open here and willing to start a conversation😆.yes I always wanted him to be like this.😳
the description of the truck was hilarious..."she opened the glove compartment expecting a rat or a snake to crawl out!!!🤣yes😆
RanSh tashan here as well ohh the R&K locket was a nice touch😳Glad you liked it.😊
And the trip begins with a wrong turn😆
Awesome yaar...can't wait for the update😳Will update soon.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: safi_kisha

UNRES:

i know i am damn late...!!! sryy for that...!!
but both the parts were amazing...!!
i am loving the way this story is going...!!
KiSha...OMG to get lost soon!!
continue sooonnn!!!!
love
safrena

Safre 🤗
No sorry between friends.
thank you so much,glad you liked it.
Will update soon.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Chapter 3(a):
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The road started out like any other Los Angeles road.Straight,lined with stores and filled with traffic.But the further we drove ,the more barren things became.I tried to convince myself that we were only going to be driving through a little bit of isolated farmland before we'd find ourselves in civilisation again.but when we didn't pass a single gas station for ten minutes and it began to get dark,I started to worry.

Apparently KD was worried too.

"Let me see the map" he told me,leaning over my shoulder to read it.i pulled the map away so he couldn't see how lost we were.i knew we would figure out how to get to San Diego eventually.But I wasn't about to tell him I got us lost .

Which I didn't,because it was all the maps fault

Stupid map.

"I am the navigator" I announced.

KD rolled his eyes and sighed.

"Just let me see it for one second"he said,holding his hands out.

"No"I slapped his hand away.

"Chicklet"he said,"I just want to see where we are"

I shook my head and hugged the map to my chest.

"You are acting like a five year old"

"Nu-uh"I cried.

KD rolled his eyes at me again.

"Chicklet,give me the map right now"he demanded.

Even in the flash light I could tell he was glaring at me.

But I didn't move.

So KD decided that it would be a good idea to grab the map from me.Ofcourse he didn't take into account that he was driving.i started screaming as he lunged for the map.,grabbing it in one hand and released the steering wheel.we both jolted forward as the truck swerved off the road,lurching and rumbling over the dirt.and in the trucks headlights,I saw that we were barreling towards a grove of trees.

When you are about to die ,your entire life is supposed to flash before your eyes.

But all I saw we're some trees,a road map and that idiot Stoneface.

But suddenly the car lurched downwards.my seat kept me from flying forward,but I lost all air in my lungs.i sat for a second,trying to breathe normally,before it dawned on me that we had stopped moving.

And we were in a giant ditch.

"KD?"I asked,my voice shaking .

"Yeah?" He replied,his voice equally hoarse.

"You...are ...an idiot!" I screamed lashing my hand out to hit his chest.

"I am sorry"he cried,"I told you everything always goes wrong for me"

"This has nothing to do with lick"is etched,"you are the worst driver that I have ever met"

"I am sorry okay!here let's get out of the truck.,"he offered,reaching over to unbuckle me.the second the seatbelt retracted,I fell forward and smacked my forehead against the dashboard.I heard KD snort as he tried to suppress a laugh.

"You did that on purpose!"I hollered.

"Calm down Kiya,you are going to give yourself a headache,"he told me,adding under his breathe,"I know you are giving me one."

I cursed under my breath and turn to my side,eager to get as far away from KD as possible.But the ditch was so narrow that I couldn't open the passenger's side door more than an inch.and even though I hadn't eaten my dinner yet,I wasn't that skinny.i turned around to see that KD had unbuckled himself and was trying,with no luck to open the driver side door.

I groaned and threw my head back.

"Great,"I threw my hands up,"weare stuck!"

"Calm down.i have got this,"KD said,throwing me a cocky grin.

I glared at him.

"Look"he explained,"we can crawl out the back here"

KD pointed to the small window that led out to the trunk of the car.i looked at him,then at the window,and then back at him.i folded my arms over my chest and glared at him in disbelief.

"Come on,ladies first,"he urged.

I rolled my eyes at him.

"When we get out of this,I am going to murder you,"I hissed before climbing up onto the dashboard and pushing myself towards the tiny window.

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I know this is short.As I was writing this I got a important work to do so I thought of posting this now and the rest in the evening .Pm's will be sent later.sorry for the inconvenience.

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