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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sabina_Ansari :- Thanks! :D Haha.. XD

..DamonCrazy.. :- KiyaRa bahut hai next part mein. xD You'll lovee it! XD Yes you got it right, Kiya is the sister of Ranveer! :P And Panchi is the sister of KD! :D

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..-Chabhilal-.. :- Thanks dear! :D Welcie!!

tiara_magic :- Thanks for reading!

JaseTBP :- Thank you for reading! :D

*Prachi* :- know, its more than 10! 😃 I am happy as hell! I will post it soon! I have this religious thing, so because of that i am so busy! I'll upload soon! I write beautifully? I write CRAP! There will be more KiyaRa n PanSh scenes than Rahi and Kisha. x)


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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey... nyc start... witing to read more... liked KiyAn friendship... its so beautiful and pure, and innocent... wanna see all the bonds and their chemistry... plzz, upload soon... 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1
'You are so screwed Mr.Ranveer Shergill!' - Kiya 😡

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"Hello?..Whos this?...You are kidding me right?.. Now?..Where?...Okay, I'll be there in 5!"
God! This Ranveer! He got into a fight

Whom should I call? Panchi? She is babysitting. Mom and Dad, no way! They will come across the town in just 5 minutes to shout at me, whereas its not my fault. KD!!

I picked up my cell phone and dialed KD number which I haven't for a very long time.

"Pick up KD, pick up!" I glanced at the clock, '2:37 AM'

"What the hell Kiya!?" KD screamed from the other side of the phone.

"Shut up sleeping beauty and help me!" I was near the urge of crying! Ranveer was hurt, my TWIN was hurt!

"Whats wrong Kiya??" He asked me.

"Ranveer got into a fight. And he got hurt really badly." I was biting my lip, to control my tears.

"Ok, where is he now?" He asked me gently, understanding my position right now.

"At Piya Chachos house. You know the party, he got into a fight with Shaurab Sharman." I kept the phone on speaker and started to change, if I had to go to that party, I had to look cute. I would really look stupid in my pajamas.

"Oh God! Lets go there. I'll be at your house in 5!"

"Okay, thanks!" I ended the call.

I called Panchi and explained her whole thing and asked her to come with me.

Soon later KD arrived and we went to his car.

"KD first we have to pick Panchi up from her babysitting." I told him.

"Why?!" KD asked me.

"Cause she is my best friend and we never ever went to any party alone and I need her."

"Ok!" He drove to the house Panchi was babysitting.

I called Panchi and told her to come outside.

"Kiya! Is Ranveer ok?"

"I have no idea." I replied, a tear fell from my eyes.

"Oh no" Panchi hugged me, "Its okay.."

I quickly wiped the tears off and turned to KD, "You are babysitting the kids while me and Panchi go see how Ranveer is."

"No, NO! I am NOT babysitting them." KD shook his head.

"They are sleeping and they are very nice and sweet." Panchi told his older brother, by 5 seconds.

"No I am not-" I cut him off.

"KD! Ranveer is hurt there, stop being so over dramatic and just sit there for 5 mins." I yelled at him.

"Okaay." KD gave the keys and walked inside the house. He was always the grumpy one.

"Lets go." Panchi said and we walked towards the car.

We arrived there in 15 minutes. Everyone was knocked off. I asked Panchi to check on the ground floor and I would check on the top floor. I checked almost everywhere, I headed downstairs and found Panchi running towards me, "he is in the kitchen with ice on his face."

I ran towards the kitchen and saw Ranveer with green peas pack. He looked crap! He got bruises almost everywhere.

"You are so screwed Mr.Ranveer Shergill!" I screamed at him.

"Shut up Kiya, my head is paining." Ranveer said in hush voice.

"You--!" I controlled my anger, "Lets go, before I punch you!"

Panchi and I helped Ranveer walked to the car. Panchi decided to sit with Ranveer in the back and aid him. I gave her the first aid box, the one KD had in his car.

I drove to Mr. Kumar's house, the babysitting house. Me and Panchi climbed out of the car and knocked on the door. We saw KD covered with food.

"What the hell!?" Me and Panchi said in unison.

"The'kids..they..are'evil!" KD said in a scared voice.

Me and Panchi started to laugh.

"I am scared to ask what happened." Panchi replied.

"They..woke up.. asked...food..no.. food..there..in..the..house." KD replied, still scared.

"Haha, the food was on the dinning table KD!" Panchi walked inside the house, "Bye Kiya and KD." And shut the door quietly.

"How is Ranveer?" KD asked as he sat in the passenger's seat.

"He is right here.." Ranveer replied.

"You look crap!" KD said.

"Thank you?" Ranveer replied. And knocked off.

"He is tired after the whole fighting, our parents are gonna come tomorrow night, I don't know what I'll do!?" A tear slipped from my eyes, a angry tear, a sad tear, a scared tear.

"Don't cry Kiya, I am in a worst position." He pointed to himself. Everywhere food! His car was a mess and so was his clothes, "but am I crying?" He smiled showing his white teeth, I was always jealous of his teeth.

I sighed and Me and KD dropped Ranveer into our house. Mr. Rastogi's house and our houses were side-to-side, we were neighbors in short.

"What now?" I asked KD.

"I lost my house keys. I am sure I kept it on the table when I was babysitting those-evil chota kids!" KD checked his pockets.

"Oh, well you can stay here." I gestured to our house.

"Duh." KD replied as he walked upstairs.

"What are you doing?" I asked him.

"Going to take shower..?" He pointed towards himself. And I giggled.

"okay."

Mr, Rastogi's house is like our house. He is my dad's best friend. And my mom eventually became the best friend of Mrs. Rastogi.

I decide to aid Ranveer. Soon later KD came down in wet hair and a pair of black tight jeans with no t-shirt on... oh my!

KD walked towards me and I kept moving back. He walked a little more and I moved backwards.

"Kiya will you stop moving?" KD asked in irritation.

"Uh, yeah.." I stutter a bit.

"Thank you for helping me its just like the older times-" I was cut off.

"I don't want to remember anything from the olden times, Kiya." KD said in a soft whisper, "You hurt me.."

"I never meant to.." I whispered back.

KD walked towards me, "Kiya, you never meant anything you said.." His eyes had hurt in it.

He walked up to the guest room and closed the door.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was an amazing part.

Loved iy, all emotions were beautifully conveyed. AWESOME

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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Awesome update.
Really loved it.
Update soon and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Good concept and chapters
There is a small mistake though.
KD can't be called that
His name should end in Rastogi na, so KD will look awkward
NidhaA thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Good concept and chapters
There is a small mistake
KD can't be called that
His name should end in Rastogi na, so KD will look awkward
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
KD-Kiya hd a history??
Wow this gets interesting...
Kd shirtless wet hairs ( faints),..
Wen r they going to show dis in show..
Thnz for pm.. Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Alia-

*Prachi* :- know, its more than 10! 😃 I am happy as hell! I will post it soon! I have this religious thing, so because of that i am so busy! I'll upload soon! I write beautifully? I write CRAP! There will be more KiyaRa n PanSh scenes than Rahi and Kisha. x)



You're beng modest! 😆 And as long as KiyaRa and PanSh are siblings, I am all eyes to read them! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey... awesome story... loving this bro-sis duo...

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