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This is awesome ! Loved it

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And if possible do pm me :)

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awesome part yaar loved it

panchi the way seh is behainving is soo awesome hot guy ko dekhkar yehi hota hai😆😆😆😆

but still tried to focus ohh shit loved panchi's attitude n loved the last part payakl not giving bhav to RV lol tht waas funny

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CutielovesChocs

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Originally posted by: ..Babydoll..
Welcome to the forum =)

Hey!

Thank you! I didn't realise you were a KiSha fan, I do know now :P

Sorry! :P

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CutielovesChocs

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Originally posted by: Let-It-Go

This is awesome ! Loved it

Originally posted by: Let-It-Go

And if possible do pm me :)

Hey!

Thank you! And most definitely! :)

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CutielovesChocs

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Originally posted by: dmg_mjht_d3_rox
awesome part yaar loved it
panchi the way seh is behainving is soo awesome hot guy ko dekhkar yehi hota hai😆

but still tried to focus ohh shit loved panchi's attitude n loved the last part payakl not giving bhav to RV lol tht waas funny

cont soon

Thank you SO much!

I love you feedback! It always let me know what part is awesome and what needs work :) So, thank you again!

Hahaha, it's so true! And 16 year old ke dimaag mein to especially! :P

Yep! RV's gonna have problems pataofying this one! :D

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sourmisery

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Posted: 12 years ago

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oooh! RV was jealous! :D Me likey! Nice chapter, Panchi is acting like a total bimbo-ish teenager from those Hollywood chick-flicks. Different from what I've thought of her so it's a bit nice. Didn't quite like the way Panchi insulted RV at the end...it didn't seem good or RaHi-ish to me. Anyway! Liking this Arjun guy, he's sweet! Curious to know how the things will shape up now! :D

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CutielovesChocs

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mais
oooh! RV was jealous! :D Me likey! Nice chapter, Panchi is acting like a total bimbo-ish teenager from those Hollywood chick-flicks. Different from what I've thought of her so it's a bit nice. Didn't quite like the way Panchi insulted RV at the end...it didn't seem good or RaHi-ish to me. Anyway! Liking this Arjun guy, he's sweet! Curious to know how the things will shape up now! :D

He doesn't know it's jealousy..YET! :D

Yeah, I've tried to portray Panchi a bit differently here. I don't like it the way she's always treated like a doormat by RV and how she always ends up doing what he expects of her, not what she wants to do. So yeah :)

The insulting I guess because of Panchi trying to give RV a piece of her mind! She's tired of being treated like garbage and it's about time she answered him back! :)

Thank you Mais! I like the review! :D

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abhi_arshilover

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awesome update. Loved it. So, Rv had started feeling jealous and it may turn to insecurity! Good for him, now he'll understand what panchi felt! Please cont soon. Thanks for pm.

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CutielovesChocs

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: abhi_arshilover
Awesome update. Loved it. So, Rv had started feeling jealous and it may turn to insecurity! Good for him, now he'll understand what panchi felt! Please cont soon. Thanks for pm.

Hey! Thank you so much! :)

Yes,he has but he doesn't it yet! :D

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