Am I in LOVE??... Completed (OS)

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@SheLooks18ToMe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Ashley007
amazing loved it ❤️ update soon😊😊

thnku!

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sneha

@Sneha113

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

it was awesome!!!
rahi are too funny and they know each other so well!!
kd is soo sweet 😊 always there for kiya when she needs him..
loved their date 😊
piddi kabab mei haddi bn gya 😃
do pm me when you update..

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: priya00147
it was awesome!!! thnku!!!!!!
rahi are too funny and they know each other so well!! hmm...
kd is soo sweet 😊 always there for kiya when she needs him.. awww...yes~!!!!
loved their date 😊 it wasnt exactly a date...
piddi kabab mei haddi bn gya 😃 haha!!!
do pm me when you update.. pakka!!!!

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@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

PART 4

Ki: nhi kd tum galat ho!!

kd: accha me galat huh, jese tum toh thehri badi sati-savitri...

ki: tumse toh bttr hi huh...!!

nd dey continued argueing...

crowd gadered every1 ws luking at dem...

wen,

panchi enters...
p: kiya kiya chill...chodo..

k: nai panchi tu nhi janti bahut ho gya ha aajkl iska...

kd: bol toh ese rhi ho jaise sari galti meri hi ho...

k:tumhari glti thi isliye bol rhin huh..

kd: han-2 tum toh thehri sati-savitri me hi pareshaan krta rhta huh

k: chalo kabhi toh sach bola...

p: kiya kiya bahut ho gya chalo chodo b ab...

k: tu bol rhi ha isliye chod rhi huh...

kd: panchi kiya ko bolo bye..

k: panchi kd ko b bol gud bye...

...

kiya nd panchi alone-

ki: samjhta kya ha apne aap ko!!?

p: kon?

ki: kd aur kon...

p: tu abhi b usike bare me soch rhi ha!?

k: ab...

p: vese, tum dono lad kyu rhae the?

k: vo...

p: bol...

k: vo...

p: bhul gyi na??

kiya nods..

p: man jaa kiya tri aankhon me saf dikhta ha dat u lyk him...!!

kiya calls camra near..

"ho skta ha panchi sach keh rhi ho?... bt no its all crap!!" kiya says

camra bak on place...

p: kahn kho gyi? kd ke khayalon me??

k: nhi... ( blush )

p: aye haye blush krna toh dekho...

k: wht crap panchii...

nd leaves..

p: god knows apni feelings ko regrt kyu krti ha ye ladki...

ranveer enters...

r: tum bhi toh vahi krtii ho..

p: wht rubbish!...mene kya kiya?

r: regretting ur feelings PANCHI!!

p: all crap... me apni feelngs kyu rgrt krne lagi...

r: kyun? kab? aur kiske liye toh tum hi sochna panchi think about itt...

nd he leaves...

p: suniye... ( calls camera )

" ye nonu ko kya hua?

aur bhala me kyu feelngs rgrt krne lagi?"

she says...

p: jaiye...

bak dere ranveer ws upset...

r: usse ab tak nhi samjha...!!

wen...

kd: hi..

r: tu? yahn?

kd: han vo dekha ki tu upset tha toh aagya... kya me baith skta huh?

r: han sure...

kd: ranveer vese toh me or tu dushmn hain firbhi me ek bat kahunga... 'jise sabse zyada pyar krtein hain unhe rulaya nhi karte'...

r: kya dialogue mara ha yrr... firse maar..

kd: sale me tujhe samjha rha huh aur tujhe dialogue ki padi ha...

both laughs...

r: dekho toh bol kon rha ha... subah hi kareli ke sath jhagra hua ha aur mujhe aake padha rha ha...

kd: han toh jhagra hi hua ha pya... ( he stops.. )

r: aye haye, mt chinta kr pyaar b ho jaega..

kd: bull shit!

nd leaves jab...

r: thnx buddy, i really needed a company...

kd nods nd leaves...

...

kiya found panchi sitting in lawn...

k: panchi!? kya hua?

p: nonu se jhagra..

k: nonu as in ranveer?

p: hmm... u know hes my bst frnd aur vo ese rudely bat krke chala gaya...

k: tu toh uski bst frnd ha na?

p: ya bt he hates me!!

k: hate! nafrat... vo toh suni hi hogi...

' khuda unhe salamt rakhe jo hamse nafrat krtein hain, pyar karein na karein kuch toh hmse krtein hain...'

nd kd who ws passing by heard dis...

kd: kya khub farmaya aapne..

k: panchi isse kho ki mujhe bat nhi krni

kd: panchi isse b kaho sorry!

bt kiya leaves

kd: arrey suno toh...

...

panchi at d odr hand starts crying...ranveer saw her...

r: moti, moti tu ro kyu rhi ha?

p: nonu..

r: dekh moti me aa gya na ab toh bol...

p: nonu...

nd he hugs her...moment ws silnt... bod knew wht dey wer thinking...

aftr d hug-

r: chalo rona toh band ki tu... ab chal verma sirr ki class ha..

p: tum jao me aati huh

r: ok..

ranveer leaves

"suniye" pnchi calls camra..

"AM I IN LOVE?"

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Ye update bada tha na? ab plyz nhi mat khna...

hop ki u all lyked it...

agr nhi tab bhi btana ok?

iss bar vale me RaHi b the...

last vale me sab bol rhe the ki rahi also rahi also

iss bar satisfied?

plyz plyz plyz btana? nd dnt frgt 2 hit d tab...

for pms buddy me!

Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago

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sneha

@Sneha113

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

loved kd-kiya ka nok jhok 😊
and the calling of camera was. mast 😊
sirf ranveer hi panchi ko shant kr skta hai 😊
and panchi's dialogue at last "am i in love" my fav 😊
do continue and thanks for the pm 😊

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keshiya

@keshiya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

IT WAS AWESOME 😊

LOVED KISHA AND RAHI SCENES

THANKS FOR PM

PLZ CONTINUE

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Latika Gurung

@-Latty-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

amazing update... i liked it... KiSha nok-jhok was superb... thanx for the pm:)

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Aanchal singh

@Artistic_Stroke

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

update was amazing

thanks for pm

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

***superlyk***
Amazing part...
loved it
kiya-kd fight... nice
ache se fight bhi nahi kar sakte, kyuki itna pyar joh karte hai
ranveer nd kd convo was good...
love to see them talking... bcoz serial me toh fight hi karte hai..
Rahi were awesome... cute couple
update soon
thnx for pm