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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

rishu how can u write so much that too this good, woh bi parents se chup-chup ka???

but really ur works r amazing n so r u🤗

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sravya

@rocksravya11

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

awesome yr but i want more RaHi

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: priya00147
loved kd-kiya ka nok jhok 😊 awww!!
and the calling of camera was. mast 😊 sacchii??
sirf ranveer hi panchi ko shant kr skta hai 😊 han yrr... i agree!
and panchi's dialogue at last "am i in love" my fav 😊 aww!!
do continue and thanks for the pm 😊 itz k yaar!

thnku!

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@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: keshiya
IT WAS AWESOME 😊 thnku!
LOVED KISHA AND RAHI SCENES awww!
THANKS FOR PM itz k yrr!
PLZ CONTINUE hmm pakka!

thnku!

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chmclg

@chmclg

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Hey I just went through all your updates of this OS and I must say they're awesome
Update soon...

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@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Roxxy47
Phir Mom Dad se bach ke update kiya , tumhara kuch nahi hosakta 😆... sach me yrr!
Acha now coming to the part... chalo...
It was Nice 😃... sacchii??
KD aur Kiya kar rahe the aur uski wajha he bhool gaye , koi haal nahi hai inka 😆... sach me dey r jus PERFECT!!
KD talking to Ranveer , that was interesting... Hmm...!
Sab apni apni 'Feelings' ko le kar pareshaan hain... han sach me!
Hope they realize them soon... hmmm...!
N the camera calling thing was Funny 😆. really?

thnkzzz!

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@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: -shenz-
rishu how can u write so much that too this good, plyz! gud? n me? stop joking!
woh bi parents se chup-chup ka??? hmmm...!
but really ur works r amazing n so r u🤗 kitta accha juth bolte ho yrr!

ThnkzzZ!

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: rocksravya11
awesome yr but i want more RaHi

ok pakka! n ThnkzzZ!

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@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: chmclg
Hey I just went through all your updates of this OS and I must say they're awesome
Update soon...

umm...itz an SS...!

well,

m glad u lyked it...!

ThnkzzZ!

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@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Part 5

banner credit- Kinjal..

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Several weeks passed...

kiya never talked 2 KD... finally one day...

Kiya entered d school she was passing wen...

k: KD! LEAVE ME! kar kya rahe ho tum?

yes, kd had pulled her in a old attic kind room... nd pinned her 2 wall...

kd: me kya kar rha huh? ye to mujhe tumse puchna chaiye na kiya?

k: mene kya kiya?

kd: hafton se mujhe ignore kar rhii ho..

k: wht r u talking kd? i'm not ignoring u!

kd: m suprised 2 see ki tum itna accha jhuth bolti ho...

k: mene koi juth nhi bola...

kd: plyz stop acting, sorry na baba!

k: NHI!!

kd: sorry!

k: tum nhi samjhoge kd..

kd: samjhao...

k: please! behave n let me go!

kd walks ahead his back towards kiya...

" i like you, aur shayd jab me tumhe bachane aaya tha tab btaya tha?" he said...

k: huh...

kiya blushed wen remembered dat "HUG"

K: but i LOVE you... kiya said wid wet eyes...

kd turned back n faced her

kd: wat?

k:kaha tha na nhi samjhoge...

tears rolled down her cheeks...

kd: kiya... he cupped her face...

kiya came out still crying...

kd: kiya sunno...

kiya turned... giving him -ab-kya-ha? vala look...

kd: I LOVE U TOO!!

K: wat? ye sab chup karane ke liye hain na?

kd: nhi i mean... i mean... i ... i ...

he leant closer.. kiya's breathes rushed she saw kd wid her big eyes ..

kd: close ur eyes..

k: par..

kd: aankh band karo...

kiya closed her eyes nd...

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i know, end was too soon!

but ur cmmntz were vrry depressing guyz!

i could not continue it sorry...

i wantd dis FF to continue bt maybe u guyz never lyked it... so i turned it into an OS..!

m really sorry bt i cudnt continue!

sorry!

luv u guyz! bye!

Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago

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