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Posted: 8 years ago
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I always crave for ffs os ts..but wala ff bhi hai yaha kisi ne bataya bhi nai..chalo i will read and then comment
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ayaan78

I always crave for ffs os ts..but wala ff bhi hai yaha kisi ne bataya bhi nai..chalo i will read and then comment

Hi Ayaan, im not a native hindi speaker, im using Google translate. To understand you better can i request you to post in English please. Thanks alot. Mala
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi All, Thank you for your encouragement, it really means alot to me being a novice. Im glad to know, i shared the same sentiments as all of you. I have to apologize for dragging Thahaan's union, I dont want to rush everything, that need to be expressed and said (eagerness, confession, confusions, forgiveness) that occurred in the past 4 years into one chapter.

Pooja2109: Thahaan are meeting after 4 years, so i wanted to display their anxiety first, since its not a planned meeting. The reason Chiara is a toddler instead of a baby, because i wanted to create the communication factor between Bihaan and Chiara. Glad it worked out. Yes, you are another smart cookie, eventually i have plans for Adishok but for now my focus is only on Thahaan+Chiara.
Maya, Maya & Maya... i will certainly do something with her..

Tlksiva7879: Have no fear of Bihaan ... your wish for an emotional chapter will be granted, i will try my best.

Rinka: I wanted to portray a connection between the 3 of them, with my limited imagination thats the best i could come up with, glad you like it. I will try to inject couple of cuddling in my future chapters between the father and daughter. Do you want Thahaan cuddling updates as well ☺️-im trying tobe naughty here LOL. Thank you for your hugs and my return gift 🤗 to you.

RedOne: You have been reading my mind lately, you are indeed a smart cookie 😉, AdiShock it is but will be revealed in a later chapter, for now Thahaan is my focus. When the mask is unveiled i wanted to insert a song, but me with limited knowledge of Hindi songs found it difficult to choose the right song - spent about 2hrs going thru the listed sad songs eventually i gave up. sorry to disappoint. To portray the bonding between Chiara and Bihaan, i chose her to be in toddler stage to communicate instead. Be patient the misunderstandings between Thahaan will be cleared in the coming chapters. As for Maya, i have some plans for her as well.

Dynamic-doll: Another smart cookie to analyse AdiShock 😉. I've planned it as such that i wanted Thapki to witness Bihaan's emotions with Chiara. Pls dont be mad at Bihu.. he's not thinking straight, meeting Thapki after 4 years is already too much for him to takein and with a child confuses him more. Maya, yes i will deal with her later.

Sanjay: Thanks for your comments. Thahaan forever.


Edited by RatanaMala - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: RatanaMala

Hi Ayaan, im not a native hindi speaker, im using Google translate. To understand you better can i request you to post in English please. Thanks alot. Mala

hey ratana how are you ?
I said i never knew about this ff.. as ireally crave for good writing pieces so i will definetely read it and then comment 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 7

On November 20th, Chiara was asleep while Thapki was getting ready for work, wears a burgundy red Pencil Dress and heels. Though Bihaan occupied her mind since morning, she decides to preoccupy herself at work. She gave instructions to her Nanny Aisha on Chiara activities for the day and left for her office. She knew it'll be another busy day at work.

Thapki and Kabir were meeting the rest of the hoteliers in a tight schedule, they took a lunch break and resume with the meetings.

Kabir: One more meeting to go Thapki, then we are done.

Thapki nodded and looked at the clock it was almost 3.30pm. Kabir's assistant informed the owner of Raj Villas has arrived and is waiting in the meeting room. Thapki and Kabir grabbed their laptops and files, entered the room.

Bihaan was sitting in the meeting room reviewing his notes on the agreement when Thapki and Kabir entered the room. Bihaan did not expect to meet her in this meeting and Thapki was surprised to see him as well, but they managed to stay composed. Kabir introduced himself and followed by Thapki. Bihaan gazed down at her, frowning as his eyes flickered critically over her, Thapki averted his gaze. Bihaan in this mind, Thapki is looking gorgeous, he's unable to take his eyes off her. And then he looked at Kabir, he was at the party too? Is he Thapki's husband? Kabir interrupted his thoughts: Mr Bihaan Pandey hope you have reviewed the agreement and do you have any questions before we get into the formalities of finalizing the agreement.

Bihaan switched his thoughts to business mode, and started asking several questions related to the partnership and trade partners model. Both Kabir and Thapki explained the business models to him. Then Bihaan said: Im good now, let's finalize the agreement. Thapki signed on behalf of OHG as the Managing Director and Bihaan signed as the owner and Kabir signed as the witness. To signify the partnership deal they had a firm handshake and Kabir returned Bihaan's copy of the agreement. Thapki said thank you for being part of OHG partnership. Bihaan nodded and smiled.

Kabir: Mr Bihaan join us for dinner to celebrate our success and our partnership

Thapki: Kabir, I still have to catch-up with my work, please proceed without me.

Kabir: Thapki you promised to celebrate this success with me, grabbing her hands.

Bihaan was stunned to see Kabir holding her hands and was staring at Thapki angrily

Kabir: Thapki don't go back on your promise

Thapki: OK, Kabir but I will pay for today's celebration, do you agree

Kabir: Deal. Bihaan, you are joining us right?

Bihaan: Yeah, sure I will join you guys, looking at Thapki

Thapki: I have to grab my stuff from my office, we'll meet near my car.

Kabir: Thapki, we will meet you there.

Thapki informs her driver the restaurant address. Kabir sat beside the driver, Thapki and Bihaan sat at the rear. Though the men were discussing about general stuff, Thapki felt the drive was the longest ride ever, Bihaan was gazing at her with a smile. As a savior, Thapki's phone rang, Chiara was on the call giving details of her activities for the day. Thapki was engrossed in her conversation with Chiara and informed her she's out for dinner with Kabir and a client. Thapki informed nanny Aisha, she'll be late and not to wait up for her. Chiara came on the call again asked if she could speak to Kabir,

Thapki: Kabir, Chiara wants to speak to you, she passed her phone

Bihaan was on the verge of confronting Thapki while Kabir is in the phone but decided against it. Thapki glanced at fidgeting Bihaan and knew she had to deal with him eventually.

In the restaurant, while waiting for the food to be served, Kabir was enquiring about hotel industry in Agra, Bihaan was explaining but kept his discussions short and sharp and spoke only of business related matters. Thapki was admiring Bihaan's confidence and business acumen. Thapki (in her mind voice) these 4 years has changed him for the better. He looks presentable, well gloomed, matured, and charismatic. I'm still infatuated by him, she smiled at her silly thoughts, but stopped her grin when she remembered Bihaan has moved on in his life. She tried to hide her disappointment but Bihaan was observing the twinkle in her eyes disappearing. He decides to provoke her;

Bihaan: Thapki tell me about yourself and your family, with sarcasm

Thapki knew Bihaan's intent, she responded

Thapki: I have a small knitted family.

Smiles at Kabir, Kabir acknowledges

Thapki: our love is only for her daughter Chiara.

Bihaan was fuming but kept calm and asked

Bihaan: That's a unique name, why the name Chiara

Thapki: Chiara means Light, She is the Light in our lives when darkness engulf us.

And she's the symbol of our true love.

Bihaan clenched his fist in anger, (poor guy did not realize she was hinting him).

Bihaan: What do you do in OHG and how long have been working with them

Kabir: Thapki is the Managing Director of OHG and she has been with the company for 3 years plus. She has revolutionized our business and infact the partnership with boutique hotels is Thapki's initiative.

Bihaan feels happy and proud of Thapki's achievement, and said

Bihaan: You have set yourself up for success

Thapki: My ma, Vaani Oberoi, the president of OHG is reason for my success

During dinner, Bihaan and Thapki were exchanging gazes at each other, and it turn out to be casual and relaxed. After dinner Kabir wanted to alight first since his residence is nearby, Thapki's driver drops him off. Shortly after Thapki informs her driver that she will takeover and asked him have an early night and she will call him if needed. Thapki moves over to the driver seat and Bihaan sat beside her.

Bihaan (in his mind voice) Kabir is not Thapki's husband! Why did I assume as such, he chided himself? My Thapki didn't remarry but she said Chiara is her daughter! Just when he thought he unraveled a knot, he was stuck with another one. But he was keen to speak to Thapki to understand whats in her mind and why she's reacting aloof.

It was a quite drive for the first 10mins, then Thapki asked: Bihaan where shall I drop you? In your Hotel or elsewhere?

Bihaan: (looking at her) I need to talk to you. Stop the car where we can talk.

Thapki's stomach clenched at the thought of what's going to be transpired.

She kept a bold front, while driving dialed to the hotel reception where Bihaan stays, to check if the rooftop terrace was available immediately for a short meeting. The reception confirmed its availability and blocked the space for Thapki. Bihaan was listening to the conversation. Thapki: We'll talk in the hotel terrace.

Thapki drove into the hotel, alighted from her car and passed the key for valet parking. Bihaan followed her into the elevator, the hotel terrace was on the 20th floor, the last guest who was with them in the elevator alighted at 10th floor. Once the elevator door shut closed, Bihaan pulled Thapki swiftly to him making her loose balance. And started to embrace her tightly, breathing in her nape, Thapki was stunned and paralyzed to stop him. Bihaan felt alive wrapping arms around his valuable possession and not wanting to let go of her. The elevator door opened at the terrace rooftop, DAMN that's quick he thought and let her loose.

Thapki walked out to the Terrace in a trance state. The terrace was designed as a garden with gazebo decorated with dim night lights and observation deck of the city. Both Bihaan and Thapki were distracted to admire any of it. It was an intense moment for both, as they walked towards the end of the terrace and stopped, Thapki was facing the city view and Bihaan was watching her.

Thapki: Bihaan what do you need to ...

Bihaan pulled Thapki into his arms and started kissing her passionately, her heartbeat raced, she tried to resist but he was embracing her tightly. He was not ready to let her go, he wrapped his arms around her in a strong grip, and eventually she stopped resisting and melted in his arms. Thapki was yearning for his love for the past 4 years, she let her softer side be exposed allowing him to get close both physically and mentally. But the deep rooted affection didn't last long, she trembled down when she had flashes of the fateful day in Noida. Bihaan released Thapki from his embrace, when she started to breakdown involuntarily.

Thapki controlled her emotions and asked,

Thapki: Why Bihaan, why are you hurting me over and over again. You threw me out of your life and told that our relationship is broken and I don't exists in your life ever. You wanted me out of your home. After 4 years I'm picking up my broken life and you are inflicting the same pain once again. Why are you torturing me and what do you want?

Bihaan was devastated to see his Thapki's anguish. He kneels down to her and says;

Bihaan: each and every day without you was a torment for me, Thapki. I made a huge mistake by hurting you physical and emotionally, please forgive me. Life without you has been hell and I have been in abyss for a very long time. Please give me a chance and come back to me. He begged.

Thapki: It's too late Bihaan. I tried to tell you many things prior to the incident but you refused to adhere. You chose to only trust and believe your mom. You did what's right for you and I know you have moved on with your life and married Shankar. And I'm no longer part of your life anymore.

Thapki: Yes we loved each other as soulmates. I'm such an unfortunate person where I lost my husband's trust, support and love. Here I am deprived of all happiness in my life and I am not sure why I am holding on to this meaningless relationship.

Thapki: Your trust on me is broken and shattered into pieces, it cannot be mend together.

Bihaan stands speechless with tears, hearing the pain he has inflicted to his Thapki.

Thapki: You chose your happiness, to share your life with another. I'm very happy for your new found bliss. Do not duel on the past, when there's a better future ahead for you with Shankar.

Thapki walks away from Bihaan once again. Bihaan lost courage to stop his Thapki.

Bihaan: (cries) what have I done to my love, I've broken her, how do I assure Thapki that I'm still her Bihaan. She is my breath, my life and my everything, he crumbles in pain and was desperate to seek forgiveness.

Thapki cried all her way home recalling all the events leading to her separation from Bihaan and the pain she endured for the past 4 years of her lonely life. She once again enters into the shower of flowing water to dissipate her sobbing.

(Song plays in the background)

Lo maan liya humne / okay, fine, I agree

hai pyar nahi tumko / that you aren't in love.

tum yaad nahi humko / that I don't remember you.

hum yaad nahi tumko / that you don't remember me.

bas ek dafaa muDke dekho / just turn once and look

aye yaar zara humko / at me once, O dear one

lo maan liya humne / I agree

hai pyaar nahi tumko / that you aren't in love (with me)

lo maan liya dekha hi nahi / I agree that I have not seen

tere kaandhe ka wo til / that mole on your shoulder,

lo maan liya toota hi nahi / and I agree that

tere hathon se mera dil / my heart didn't break in your hands

chhaaon mein teri beeti hi nahi / those talks of summer didn't happen

wo garmi ki baatein / in your shade

baahon mein teri guzri hi nahi /and those nights of winter didn't pass

wo sardi ki raatein / in your arms

lo maan liya humne / okay, I agree

aitbaar nahi tumko / that you don't rely on me

tum yaad nahi humko / I don't remember you

hum yaad nahi tumko / and you don't remember me


Next day early morning, Bihaan checks-out from his hotel and his taxi was waiting to drop him off at the airport. Bihaan boards the taxi while on the phone and the taxi drives off from the hotel.

Precap: Ashok tells, Thapki is very special for me

PS: Im super excited today after watching Thahaan union, wanted to celebrate it so here you go early release of the chapter, my treat for all Thahaan fans out there. Thahaan forever 🥳 /Mala

Edited by RatanaMala - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update.👍🏼

I'm very glad that at least Bihaan's MU about Thapki being married to Moneybags Kabir is cleared.😃 But the poor guy still hasn't a clue that cutiepie Chiara is HIS daughter.😔
Hope he comes to know about it soon.😊

Thank you so so... much for the passionate ThaHaan moment.😳 ThaHaan pining for each other and their passionate urgency...... but it culminated on a very emotional note.😔
Thapki is still living in the MU that Bihaan is married to GD🤢 and he moved on in his life. If only the poor guy wasn't so shattered, he would've sorted their MU and asked about Chiara.
Thanks for adding the song.😊 Again, your song selection for the situation was apt.👍🏼 I could connect to it very well.

This Ashok guy is irking me already.😡 Hope he soon finds his love in Aditi😉
BTW, where is despo chic Maya...??( I'm curious to know what she's upto🤔)

Can't wait for the next part. Please update ASAP.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Why didn't Bihaan tell her that he didn't marry???? I am gonna chide Bihaan for this...Moti buddhi as ever... Am waiting for the next dear...update soon and yes I am also too much excited for today's episode...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: RedOne_Zzz

Superb update.👍🏼

I'm very glad that at least Bihaan's MU about Thapki being married to Moneybags Kabir is cleared.😃 But the poor guy still hasn't a clue that cutiepie Chiara is HIS daughter.😔
Hope he comes to know about it soon.😊

Thank you so so... much for the passionate ThaHaan moment.😳 ThaHaan pining for each other and their passionate urgency...... but it culminated on a very emotional note.😔
Thapki is still living in the MU that Bihaan is married to GD🤢 and he moved on in his life. If only the poor guy wasn't so shattered, he would've sorted their MU and asked about Chiara.
Thanks for adding the song.😊 Again, your song selection for the situation was apt.👍🏼 I could connect to it very well.

This Ashok guy is irking me already.😡 Hope he soon finds his love in Aditi😉
BTW, where is despo chic Maya...??( I'm curious to know what she's upto🤔)

Can't wait for the next part. Please update ASAP.😃


HI RedOne, Thanks for your comments.

When i wrote their romance scene, this were my thoughts "If lost/separated lovers meet after a long time, i believe the first emotion is to ensure his/her is still theirs, Bihaan kinda confirmed it mentally.
So obviously he is eager to show his affection and eagerness to his love of his life. He had to feel her in his arms as if she was his savior. Next he had to convey his affection. He knows how much they love each other, so he did not seek her acceptance to show his feeling for her." i hope i did justice to convey their feelings.❤️

Their MU will be cleared soon, i assure you that. I will try to update the next chapter by end of the week. Thanks for reading. TC/Mala

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rinka_Ritz

Why didn't Bihaan tell her that he didn't marry???? I am gonna chide Bihaan for this...Moti buddhi as ever... Am waiting for the next dear...update soon and yes I am also too much excited for today's episode...


Hi Rinka, Thanks for your comments.
Bihaan being a Moti Buddhi knew Thapki is upset with him but wasn't expecting such a huge blowout from her. But i can assure you their MU will be cleared soon. I will try to upload the next chapter by end of the week. Thanks for reading. TC/Mala
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Posted: 8 years ago
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brilliant update Mala...again a very well written chapter 👏
phew at least Bihaan knows that Thapki didn't re-marry
but why he is going back to Agra so soon. i don't want him to go back to Agra...that psycho Maya will surely do something 😡
I hope he gets to know that Chiara is his daughter...then he will try to manaofy Thapki
i hope Ashok realizes Thapki's true love and happiness...he should get out of their way asap
eagerly waiting for the next update 😊 thanks for the pm


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