THAHAAN OS INCOMPLETE!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Bihaan and sankar completes the seven rounds panditji asks bihaan to fill sankar s hairline with vermillon and put the mangalsutra in her neck bihaan hold the mangalsutra and remembers his and thapkis wedding(imagine the first weddingšŸ˜‰šŸ˜³) he abruptly gets up and says i can't do this sankar panicks and everyone looks on
thapki comes forward and says you were already a cheater and now you became coward also and she laughs her evil smile😈 bihaan looks at her with a fury and comes face to face and says who the hell are you to judge me what you know about me thapki/vaani yells at him by saying i know your deeds mr bihaan pandey how you slapped your wife and tell her to leave the house in the night

furthur she says do you have any idea that she was pregnat at that time and stps as she register what she has said bihaan looks at her in confusion and in shock at the same time he holds her by her arms and says how do you know about all this he shakes her continiously in a fit of rage vaani says becuase ia am thapki not vaani bihaan looks at her with happiness

further she says i came here to take revenge on you foe my unborn baby death

meanwhile sankar panicks and says you cant be alive its impossible everyone looks at her bihaan looks at her and says how you can be so sure he yells at her due to the intensity of anger she blabbers the truth that she has done thapkis accident on that fateful night as she was aware of her being pregnat

everyone is shocked especially thapki bihaan looks at her after few moments she approaches bihaan but he goes backwards he raises his hand telling her not to come near furthur and laughs humourlessly
everyone gets confused

bihaan says so that was the reason you came here ina changed look and name for the purpose of taking revenge on me but how can you thapki

how i can forgot you never trusted me from the day one oh sorry why only you he looks aroud and says these all people also have the same thing with me in the past

he goes to vasu and says this is my maa whom i regarded and respcted inspite of her indfferent behaviour toward me she never loved me like her own son and why wouls she i am not her blood related son but a adopted son she always have perrioritised dhruv over me but i never complained as i used to fellthat she is concerned toards me but i was wrong

he moves towards bauji and says he also spported you and choose you over his own son
he moves towards dhruv and says i always admired him no matter what but what i got atlast he also finally wanted to kill me
everyone looks on feeling ashamed and guilty themselves

he comes to thapki if my family itselt never cared or cosiderd me than what would i exopect from you

you also did the same wit me from the start and few minutes back also

he says yes iam uneducated impulse and most important adopted but i never try to play with emotions of others
you accused me of our unborn child death but you forgot i dont know that day when that children broke my bike headlight and you were telling about me that when we will be parents you will love them more than me and i asked you also that when we will be parents and ater that also you thought iam the culprit for our unborn baby he looks at her with more rage and fury thapki flinches seeing his this much fury

thapki says listen bihaan but bihaan cuts her off and says enough is enough now i dont want to listen your single plea nor your these tears now they make me hate you more

he turns and folds his hands and says i am sorry for the insuls you all go through because of me but it will not happen anymore

he turns and heads towards the door thapki asks where are you going on that bihaan says i am leaving house forever tthapki says where you will go pon this bihaan says where ever iwill live but atleat i will live in peace and harmony which matters a lot for me now by saying so he leaves pandey niwas forever

But bihaan turns back and ssys don't worry i will not come bavk to take revenge whatever you all did with me because its not the nature of B phor Bihaan Pandey ohh sorry not Bihaan Pandey only Bihaan and by saying this he leaves pandey niwaas forever and ever

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Posted: 9 years ago
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But what about Shankar? Will she be punished?
Good, Bihaan must take a break from them.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one poo...😊
I like the last para..😃
Keep writing...šŸ˜‰
Love you...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This one is too good pooja... šŸ‘ šŸ‘

Loved it...!!! Mujhe bilkul aisa hi chahiye show me...!!!
I want bihaan to go away from Paagal Nivaas...!!!!

I felt so happy after reading this...Thanks for writing... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one...😊
Amazing...šŸ˜‰
PZ should realize his importance as well thapki..šŸ˜•
Ending is too good...
Keep it up...šŸ˜‰
Posted: 9 years ago
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Liked it a lot. Bihaan had gone through so much insults. Thapki should get the taste of her own medicine too...
Great story... šŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for the late reply.. I bookmarked to read this but then forgot...šŸ˜•

First of all, I donno whether this is ur 1st attempt or u have already written few more, if yes then I would dig it out from ur profile... And about this one, aahhh... Sukoon.. Dil ko sukoon mila isse padhke.. And the way u have described minute details about his expression, I can actually imagine Manish acting on it..


I just wanted one addition to this.. If you don't mind.. The one in red.. I alwez wanted bihaan to use this line but being a poor story writer couldn't fix this anywhere in my topics..



"he turns and heads towards the door thapki asks where are you going on that bihaan says i am leaving house forever.. tthapki says where you will go pon this bihaan says where ever i will live but atleat i will live in peace and harmony which matters a lot for me now..Dont worry, i will not come back for revenge for whatever you guys did to me.. Coz that is so not B phor Bihaan pandey..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rumsss_01

Sorry for the late reply.. I bookmarked to read this but then forgot...šŸ˜•

First of all, I donno whether this is ur 1st attempt or u have already written few more, if yes then I would dig it out from ur profile... And about this one, aahhh... Sukoon.. Dil ko sukoon mila isse padhke.. And the way u have described minute details about his expression, I can actually imagine Manish acting on it..


I just wanted one addition to this.. If you don't mind.. The one in red.. I alwez wanted bihaan to use this line but being a poor story writer couldn't fix this anywhere in my topics..



"he turns and heads towards the door thapki asks where are you going on that bihaan says i am leaving house forever.. tthapki says where you will go pon this bihaan says where ever i will live but atleat i will live in peace and harmony which matters a lot for me now..Dont worry, i will not come back for revenge for whatever you guys did to me.. Coz that is so not B phor Bihaan pandey..

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