FF: Lootera ~ Last Chapter on page- 85~ - Page 52

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Beautiful as always!!!! 😃 if thapki is bihaan's ray of light, then you are our beam of light dear Brishty... Esp.after the miserable track in reality, your sweet ff brings happiness to us all. Thank you very much.. ⭐️

I loved the shower romance... 😉😳 it was hot and sweet and desperate (on thapki's part! ) lol... Poor thapki..how hard shes trying to secure her present and future with Bihaan.. it breaks my heart that its happening in the show as well.. thank God your Bihaan in the ff is not as dense and pea-brained as real Bihaan is.. 🤢

Ufff Dhruv is soo despicable! 🤢 I know i once told you that i wouldnt want dhruv to die...but now i want him away from ThaHaan... please either make him kill Imly and go to jail for it and then be hanged to death, or kill him just like that.. afterall hes having much heartache! Make him watch thaHaan make torrid love and then make him have a heart attack and then make him die!!!! 😡🤢

Originally posted by: shorts

Thanks to you for the update...and pls don't be sorry.

It's the track in the serial that is making us sick.🤢

Very beautiful written. Thanks dear.I love Raja👏 he is loving , passionate, wild and intelligent not like bihaan (current bihaan) I am in love with him whatever he is daku...awww.

Shower scene was superb...first time to see thapki passion for bihaan and her boldness wow.

I am confused at one line😕. You have written something honhari of bihaan...What that means? Pls explain in English because I am good in Hindi so may be I can understand.

Yesss both are ready from their side for action.now ball is in rain courts that how you make story turn but Raja is ready to fight smartly plsss every time make sapola defeat. I know it's not your style but I think we are part of your story now.

Take care

Originally posted by: Tabitha

Wow!!! Its beautiful...I am in fear to still open forrum as bad news come popping up now a days...But I am very fortunate that you have posted ff today.It was sooo bold,excellent romance..

Cv's need to use this technique to control Bihaan's anger 🤣🤣...I like the way Bihaan and thapki never come out of bed in your ff which most of us wants...Beautiful..Even though Bihaan here is a way too aggresive than in serial..I like it..He is atleast not dumb..Please dont forget to post it on Sunday as we may need it after a disastrous separation of Thahaan..

Originally posted by: Hazal_kaya

thank u soo much Rain...this was awesome as usual... 👏
I liked the way bihaan got angry at dhruv for touching thapki...and how thapki controlled his anger in a most romantic way... 😳
bihaan should have actually taken out his brains so that it will not remain available for planning...B*****D. 😡

hope bihaan soon finds out that imli had done all this...and should teach her a good lesson for this drama...




and why would the next chapter be short???make that a long one just like this...

next chapter soon please...:-):-):-)

Originally posted by: Phooo

Amazing keep it up.