thahan os: misunderstanding

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys this my first time in writing, i thought to try something new so i decided to write an os on thahan . Please do comment about whatever you think about this os .any kind of rotten tomatoes, egg , juta and chappal are welcomed. Please bear with my utter nonsense. Thank you. 😃

Thahan OS: MISUNDERSTANDING

It is a dark night. Wind is blowing heavily outside. Thapki is very sad today as she can not bear the pain anymore that bihan has hidden inside him. All the family member think that he is the reason for bauji's condition. How can they even think like this? She knows bihan very well. She can see the pain in his eyes, the pain which he is getting everyday from his own people. I have full trust on bihan no matter what other think,she whisper. I will support him in this tough time. She starded to go towards her room
Biha...n thapki screams. The sight infront of her was enough to scare her. Bihan was holding a gun aiming at him to shoot himself.Thapki rus toward him and snatch the gun from her. Kya kya ka..r rahi ho tu..m,pagal ho gayi ho ky..a?(what are you doing, have you gone mad?)
B: leave me thapki . I should die. Iam responsible for bauji"s condition and my family's pain.even you are also suffering for me. I have no right to live.
T: No bihan don't think like this . You are not responsible for this. This is just a misunderstanding.
B: my life is a misunderstanding. I alawys thought one day ma will surely love me like her own son, even i do not want this i just wanted her little attention a little care and love for me. But this was my misunderstanding. I alawys thought they will trust me in any situation but they think i can try to murder my bauji , i wanted trust from them that is my misunderstanding. Thapki i can bear if they give punishment to me but can not bear hatred for me in their eyes. It is best for everyone if i die because everybody hate me, nobody trust me.
T: no bihan i trust you,i trust you even more than myself. I will support you all my lfe.
B: but why thapki?why are you creating problem for yourself for supporting me?
T: beca...use, because i love you. I love you more than anything else even more than my own life.
Bihan was standing still. He was so surprized to say anything. Tears were rolling down from his chicks.
B: but thapki...
T: no need to say anything bihan , just listen to me i don't know when i have fallen in love with you but the only thing i know is that now you means the world to me and i can not even think to live a moment without you.
She was crying. How can you do this bihan? How can you try to shoot yourself ? You didn't even think about me , how can i live without you. Bihan was also crying but this tears are of happiness afterall he found the love, care and attention he was searching for years.
Bihan come forward and hug thapki tight patting her shoulder. I will never leave you thapki, i promise. From now on we will leave for each other.
After some days
Vasundhara feels irritaded seeing thapki and bihan together. They are returning from hospital after seeing bauji. Bihan was very happy as bauji's condition is improving day by day but the sad part is he still can't communicate with them. Thapki is eagerly waiting for the day when bauji will get well and will say to all that bihan is innocent. Though thapki has proved that third person is involved in this case but it seems people of pn did not beleive her as she does not know who the culprit is.
V: (in mind) look how happy they are, shameless people. Thapki has fooled police that somebody else has stab dhruv's bauji but i know it will only be bihan. He is the culprit. He shows his true color he shows that stangers can never be own. Only and only for him my husband is in coma. So what police did not punish him i will punish him. I will do justice to my husband. I have to think cleverly.)
Vasi smilingly asked from where are both of you coming?
T:ma we had gone to see bauji.
V: ok , go and rest at your room.
Vasu go to check dhruv. In recent days dhruv has become like a robot.he stopped his smile behave as something is killing him from inside.
V:(knoncing the door) dhruv, can i come in?
D: yes ma, he wipes his tears.
V: dhruv you were crying?why beta?tell me what happened?
D:i was missing bauji ma. Bihan snatched everything from me. My bauji, thapki eveything ma everything ,i wish i could die ma.
V: don't say like this beta . I promise i will set everything right.
The next morning,pandey nivas
V: i have to do this but jow can i do this? No i have to do this for my family,for revenge.
She enters thahan room.
V: bihan
B: yes ma, do you need anything?
V:yes i need my son, my bihan. I was wrong, i misinderstood you ,i can not see your goodness. Please forgive me.
B:what are you saying ma? You actually forgave me? Tou consider me your own son?
Bihan was too happy.his lifelong dream was becoming true.his own mother was beleiving him. He was crying with happiness. Thapki watch the full scene from behind. She was very happy very happy for her husband.
V: i will wait ouside.be ready we will go to mandir today to pray infront of matarani.
B:of course ma i am voming in a minuite.
Thapki came to bihan. She kisses his forhead. He also respond by giving her a tight hug.
B: thapki you were right ma loves me she was just angry on me.
T: yes and i love you too
B: and i love you three.now i have to go . See you later
T:please come fast
B:why? Will you miss me . Okay i will come fast because i can't stay for a long time without seeing you.bye
He leaves and thapki smiles seeing him living. Thapki was a little restless today .don't know why she has a feeling something is going to happen wrong. But what can it be?she don't want to stress bihan as it is the happiest day of his life and also hers as now her existence belongs to bihan only.
On th road
Vasundhara asked bihan to stop the car. Bihan stop the car in the middle of the road and they both came outside.unknown to them thapki was also coming there to give bihan his phone which he forgot home.
B: what happened ma?
V:( crying) i am sorry bihan. But i have to do this. Don't know why i am feeling bad.
Thapki reached the spot. She was surprized to see vasundhara and bihan standing face to face in the middle of the road.
V:you know what i loved you bihan but you did very wrong to me and my family . I never thought i would do anything like this to you. If possible please forgive me .
Bihan was surprizes as to what is happening and thapki was also puzzled seeing them and listening to their conversation.
Bihan was about to say something but in a second vasundhara brings out a knife and stabbed bihan at stomach.
Bihan was shocked. She take out the knife ruthlessly. Bihan was standing there with question in his eyes.pain in his eyes that it is again a misunderstanding in his life and his ma can bever love him and he is the reason due to which her mother changed to this extent. At this moment he want to die so that her mother can get peace. It was tough for him to stand still.
Thapki was totally shocked to see what happened now. She was trembling.her leg was feeling very heavy to move. She was standing like a staue.she wants to hold bihan but she is unable to do so .she was feeling like the whole world is spinning. Bihans soght infront him gets blur and finally he falls down. Thapki screams bi...han and run towards him. She takes his head on her lap and plead him to open his eyes but he was senseless already. Vasundhara was standing their like a statue. She can not beleive that she killed bihan right now. How can she?
Thapki run towards her.
T: ma ,ma please help me. We have to take bihan to hospital please ma otherwise he will... thapki stops she can not complete the sentence.althouhgh thapki know vasundhara did this but she has no other option for getting help.at any cost she has to save her husband.
Vasundhara finally respond and help thapki to take bihan into hospital,the same hospital where bauji is admitted. she was deeply feeling guilty.for the first time she remebers the moments spent with bihan how bihan loved her and did everything for her whom he considers her ma her god.
Bihan was taken to OT. After some time doctor came and tells t and v that he is critical and there are very less chances for his survival. Vasundhara was totally broken and thapki become a statue. I t seems no words are affecting her ,she only was rememberimg their moments and bihan's promise that he will never leave him.
He said he will never leave him, how can he? He have to answer me.
After the operation bihan was shifted to a icu but he was still senseless and critical. Thspki goes towards him.
On baujis cabin vasundhara was crying vigorously. She said what have i done. My anger make me blind. I stabbed my own son. What type of mother i am?
For the first time bauji respond.he was saying vey slowly. Vasundhara goes close to him and was shocked to listen him.
Bauji: bihan ne kuch nahi kya. Woh koi aur tha jisne mujhe marne ki kosish ki( bihan has done nothing. That was someone else who tried to kill me)
Vashundhara was speechless. The whole world was shaking for her. She tried to kill the person who was innocent who consider her god and love her the most. She feels disgusted on herself
Bauji: take me to bihan i want to see him. How is he? He is okay na?
Vasundhara takes bauji to bihan. They got shocked seeing him lifeless lying on the bed. Thapki was sitting like a statue near his head. Vasundhara goes and shook her
V: thapki hosh main ao( thapki come to your senses)
Thapki looks at her blankly. Vasundhara pleads her to bring his son back.thapki looks at bihan. It seems bihan was sleeping peacefully like a child. No he have to wake up
T: bihan utho.( bihan wake up). You promised me that we will live for each other then how can you leave me alone. I can not leave without you. Please get up,please. Her tears touch his hand.
Bihan opens his eyes slowly. Thapki was the happiest person in the world at that moment.vashundhara bauji all wre crying. Tears of happiness was rolling down from their eyes.
After some time bauji ask v to call everyone from home. Everyone rush to hospital .they were happy to see bauji and at the same time shocked to see bihan.dadi asked bihan who did this.
B: some goons did this dadima as i get into a fight with them.vasundhara looks on
Dadi scold him for getting into troble but he was smiling as he can clearly see the concern of her dadima behind this scolding. Bauji tells everyone that he want to tell something important to all of them.
Bauji: it was not bihan who attacked me
Dadima:what?then who is he?
Bauji stopped for a while and says it was dhruv.( assume that dhruv was not with the family member with the time of incident)
Everyone gets shocked.
Vasudhara starts stammerin,dhru...dhru...dhruv?
Bauji : yes, dhruv. Dhruv will you tell them or i will tell them?
D: yes it was me.but i never meant to heart bauji.at that time...
A flashback is shown
Bauji and bihan was arguing with the knife.
B: leave the knife bauji or anything can happen
Bauji : no i won't please beta listen to me
Bihan leaves angrily from the room
Here dhruv enters the room.
D: bauji where is bihan?
Bauji: he has gone to room.
D: how dare he to talk like this to you
Bauji:it is okay.
D:ya ofcourse it will be okay afterall he is your dearest good son i am the bad son. Can't you see i am dying every moment for him.
Bauji: you are thinking wrong. Bihan has agold heart. He must have some reason behind this
D:o for bihan everything is right and for me everything is wrong. How can you be so partial
Bauji(angrily) dhruv you are crossing tour limi
At this point dhruv loose his cool
D: he snatched everything from me my dad thapki only for him i have to be with sraddha without loving her and only for him i am dying everyday. Enough of this now today i will kill him. Dhruv takes the knife and hoes towards bihans room bauji stopped him and try to snatch it and this process he accidentally got stabbed. Dhruv was shocked but he hide himself seeing bihan, bihan run towards bauji and take out the knife to save him and he fall down from the stairs.
Flashback ends
D: i am really sorry and i m repenting for whatever i did. I will surrender to police. He hoes towards vasundhara and she slaps him hard saying that from today you are no longer my son. Bauji says him if you truly repent and came back after punishment we will accept you wholeheartedly. Dhruv cries and leave for police station.
Vasundhara appoluzes to bihan but bihan tells her not to do so.
B: you aremy ma please don't do this
V:(crying) from today i will give you love to that extent that you will forget the past. From now on you are ny own son my own dearest son and i will love you more then even bauji.
Bihan cry and they hug each other.
After everyone leaves thapki came to bihan
T: you scared me out of hell today
B:how can i leave my beloved wife you know na how much i love you. They both hug each other with a silent promise that they will never leave esch other hand and will alawys stay together no matter what comes ahead
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's lovely! And I'll love to watch this on the show!
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Nice one
Keep writing more.
Cvs are stalking !
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Nice one...awesome...Keep writing more Nishita...
But sorry...I didn't like Vasu part...

After doing so much...she herself tries to commit a murder...& gets away with it this time as well...

I don't know how she does not die of guilt...

If DS was sent to serve his punishment...then Vasu should also have admitted that she was the one who stabbed Bihaan...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: oceanbubble

Nice one...awesome...Keep writing more Nishita...

But sorry...I didn't like Vasu part...

After doing so much...she herself tries to commit a murder...& gets away with it this time as well...

I don't know how she does not die of guilt...

If DS was sent to serve his punishment...then Vasu should also have admitted that she was the one who stabbed Bihaan...


Thanks for correcting me. From next time i will keep your suggestion in my mind and will try to do less mistakes 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks to dplee di and ARS24. I am feeling glad that both of you like it.
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Awesome! But Vasu too should've accepted her crime,then maa-beta would've enjoyed together in jail šŸ˜†
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Nice story šŸ‘ Pls write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nishita112


Thanks for correcting me. From next time i will keep your suggestion in my mind and will try to do less mistakes 😃


Arre Nishi baby...its not called a mistake...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
It is called a difference of opinion...😊
maybe you wanted to redeem Vasu...But I can never ever think that Vasu can be redeemed now...
Esp. after she stabbed bihaan...NEVER...!!
So that's why I said that I didn't like the fact that Vasu was let off the hook...She should also have been punished...that's it...
you are obviously the writer...& are free to think the way you like...not to think the way others would want it...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice..šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘..But I dont want confession to happen now..But I want some thahaan hugs and bihaan crying on thapki's lap..😳

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