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Posted: 9 years ago
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We are gonna witness a high voltage drama. Don't know whether it is for Thahaan patchup or separation.I am really bored and a lot of ideas are roaming in my head. So tried to present this one with minimum drama. I tried to make it as short as possible. Hope you like it.
My story starts from thapki apologising. In my story bihaan will accidentally push thapki. He will not fight with the family. But bauji misunderstands him and decides to divorce them both as he feels bihaan is creating her problems.

Story...

"Thapki betiya will leave the house. She will not stay in this relation anymore."Bauji said his final words

Bihaan was shocked with the decision, he looked at thapki who was already staring at him with eye full of tears. Tears formed in his eyes threatening to fall down, in the fear of crying before her he left the hall and went upstairs.

Everyone started dispersing.

"Mein nahi jaungi bauji.."

Everyone's step stopped with those words.

"Nahi jaa Sakti hu.. Nahi ji Sakti hu uske bagair"

"Ha I agree that I already tried to go from this house quite few times before. I used to think of everyone including bihaan, I used to feel that I will miss him but now the scenario is different. If I leave now I wl not miss him but indeed I will miss myself. Because he was a part of my life then, but don't know how when and why he became my life now"

"But beta, he doesn't value you?" Bauji interrupted

" if bihaan didn't value me then no one ever did. He was the one who always stood my side even when you all didn't trust me. He treated me the same as my papa. He teases me but that too have friendship " she remembered his words.
"He is annoyed now so acting like this and if I had to bear all the torture to be on his side, then I will bear it. Coz going away from him is more torturous." Tears flowed from her eyes remembering annoyed bihaan.

Bauji moved towards her and caressed her hair and said" you know I felt immense happiness listening all this. But you will not stop.." He paused for a moment. Thapki looked on. "He will stop you from leaving "

"He will not stop me"

"He will"

"But why will he bauji"

"Because he loves you"

Thapki and the whole family is shocked. Bauji excused himself and went to bring the sketch.

"Dekho thapki, he made you the necessity of his life"

Thapki still stood there unbelievable. Shradha who observed dhruv all the time thought to help thapki to move on to make dhruv permanently hers.

"Ha thapki,he made all those arrangements on that day to propose you but then he himself destroyed it."

Thapki remembered all the moments. His arrangements , the thing he tried to say in cold storage and all. She understood why he was so heart broken.

She looked at bauji. With the assurance given by him she decided to leave.

Morning...

Thapki got down carrying her suitcase.
Everyone acted like bidding bye to her.

She came and stood before bihaan. He didn't look at her. She turned to bauji with a disappointed look.

" thapki beta, chalo.. I will leave you in your parents house" bauji tried his last ball but bihaan didn't react.

Thapki who was hopeful till then,lost all the hopes and turned to move.

Bihaan hold her hand and with a weak tone said "chuk chuk gadi"

"Tumhe apna maante the isilye chuk chuk gadi bulate the" she remembered those words.

Unable to control her emotions she hugged him. "Bihaan I am sorry, mujhe maaf kardo. I made a mistake but I justified it all the time. But now I came to know why were you so hurt. Where You expected love,you got betrayal. I am sorry for it." She is crying all along
"bihaan now I came to know how tough it is to stay away from the person you love, I could not be away from you for one day, and you are experiencing it every day. Now letz stop this. Don't punish me and punish yourself."
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He broke the hug. Hold her hands in his. His heart racing at jet speed, expecting some thing but his mind is warning him for another heart break.

" staying away from the person you love is tough and you came to know because of me?? It means " his voice full of nervousness and eyes full of hopes.

Thapki looked at him "Dadima tik kahte the.. Budhu ho tum budhu, moti budhi, . it means your wife started loving you idiot" she hugged him back. He hugged her back tight and kissed her head.

"Thapki beta"

Both jerked on the voice of bauji. They forgot that they are in middle of the living room before the whole family.

Bihaan composed himself and started" I am sorry thapki for everything" he turned towards bauji and said " bauji thapki kahi nahi jayegi"

He picked her suitcase to carry back to the room but found it very light, shocked he sat and opened it. It was absolutely empty.

"Hahaha.. What you thought thapki was really leaving? No when she is trying to come close to you, you are pushing her away. That is why we tried to make her away, I know that your anger cannot dominate your love. And you will definitely sort it out with your wife" bauji explained.

Bihaan looked angrily at thapki who gave a shyish smile. His anger disappeared with in seconds but he didn't get how to face the family. Dadima observed him being uncomfortable. To cover up the situation she started " aur thapki bhi kuch kam nahi. You know bihaan when bauji asked her to leave she said she won't leave her husband. She was stubborn to be with you"

Thapki gave a complaining look to dadi, she didn't see him..she knows she will find the naughtiest smile on his face and she also knows that she can't stop adoring it. She felt his hands wrapped around her shoulders and he pulled her a little closer. She looked at him.

" ha dadima.. Phir Mrs.thapki bihaan Pandey tho bihaan Pandey ke saath hi rahegi na.. He looked towards thapki and continued "Woh bhi hamesha hamesha ke liye.. "A smile and simple nod from her welcomed him into her life with all the love and rights.

PS: suggest a name for my OS please..

Tamotoes and eggs are costly, not recommended. Stones may do...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww That was so cute! I'm really bad at naming...sometimes I just copy names of songs...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's so cute!! I wish it happened in the real show instead of that heartbreaking thing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shweta2728

Aww That was so cute! I'm really bad at naming...sometimes I just copy names of songs...


Thanq...

N about the title No probs.. Films too follow tha same.. Copying song lyrics.Do suggest a suitable song title if you get any..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dplee

It's so cute!! I wish it happened in the real show instead of that heartbreaking thing


Me too.. btw tq 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yesss this was so necessary today after all the spoilers n drama we needed something like this to read so thank u 🤗 loved it 😃 n those dialogues by thapki that y cant she leave 👏 and seriously i m bad at naming 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was so cute and lovely! Thapki is smart! Name: Tum Ho Mera Pyar😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww amazing OS yar ! such a cute ending just loved it! ❤️
keep writing more dear! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww...it was very sweet & cute...loved it...do write more...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome!! I nearly cried reading it!! It's so cute and I was smiling all the way!!

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