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Posted: 9 years ago
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To quote Bihaan "What word! What word!" Di!!
It is beautiful and poignant! I just loved it! The touch you gave to it by "I am Thapki Pandey and this is my story" at the beginning and end is awesome!! The feelings were there and really what I imagined Thapki to feel

That last part Bihaan ignoring her it would be lovely to have it on screean to make her realise how important he is even if she knows it but in terms of love feelings

Brilliant!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
amazing marvellous or should i say gajab 👏
kya likhte ho seriously such pure honest words, u explained the whole current scenario from thapkis pov n its spot on
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepu_t_d09

Wow beautiful os pdii
exact feeling of thapki well prtrayed
... 👍🏼



Thanks deepu!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandaaaxo

Waaahh diii you are amazing!!!👏👏

your writing skills never fails to make me cry. 😭😭 i can actually feel the throb in my chest while reading thapki's last lines. this non fictional couple will surely break a lot of our hearts. 😔💔
Once again Much love to yaa dii tysm for writing this. 🤗❤️❤️




Thanks Chanda..love and hugs to you too!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Lachu-

Oh I am sadder for Thapki Dips! and ur OS made me realize that..Everyone is scared for Bihan but Thapki is hurting him and herself ...This is so sad...and awesome



Even I realised that I am sad for Thapki too while writing this.. We always scold her for not falling for Bihaan..but it is actually unimaginable for her to do so.

Thanks for reading
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Beautiful amazing awesome. You show us thapkis pain so clearly. Do write more. Wish you a very happy and colorful holi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwaSanForLife

I don't even have proper words to describe how perfect this is! 😭



Thanks Sanya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: beebutterfly

Wow! That was beautifully written..I was completely taken in by the flow and it was brilliant to write it from Thapki's perspective because we get so little insight into her feelings and this was something that I would imagine she would be feeling had she completely realized her love..if she hasn't already.

Especially loved the bit where she thinks Bihaan understands her better than anyone...so true that, his first reaction was to question who made her do it and not why is she doing it.

If only we had a fraction of what you wrote portrayed in the show from Thapki, it would be perfect!

Looking forward to more OSes from you.😳



Thanks Bee. Do read my other pieces on Thahaan too!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: piyali99

Pushpu dii🤗

This is AMAZING!!! Really..no words fr u👏👏👏
Thapki's perspective is not seen that much...but u pit words to her feelings, her inner turmoil!!
Really this one is awesome!👏



Thanks Piya😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Neett

Awww..!! Perfect OS to describe thapki's pain.. i hv no words to tell how i m feeling after reading it.. bt only wanna to give 🤗u fr writing this.. beautiful 😊



Thanks Neet😳

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