ThaHaan SS: Ice cream date! Note on pg4

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Guys I'm very bad when it comes to story writing especially in English coz I hate english😡 but I love hindi and that's why most of my words in any post are in hindi. This story is a mix of hindi & English but mostly in hindi coz I'ma hindi lover so can't help to use hindi. I hope you all don't mind about that 😉. This story doesn't have any title coz it is not preplanned just lyk our thahaan..it suddenly popped up in my mind and I wrote it. Hope you all enjoy!!


PART 1:
Thapki is getting ready as usual in front of mirror and like always singing a 90s song, "main chali main chali..hmmm.."
Bihaan enters the room calculating something in his mind & gets irked upon listening her song

Bihan- errr..oyeee!
Thapki knows that bihan is already in room but she ignores him teasingly
Bihaan- chi chi..
Thapki gets irritated- kya hai?? Tameez nahi hai kya?? Wait a minute ohhh...ek wahi toh cheez hai which you don't have..
Bihaan- ohh angrezan! Zyada angreji mein ghit pit krni ki zarurat nahi hai!! Hume bhi...
Thapki intervenes- ohhohh...toh tumhe English I mean angrejiii aati hai?? Kya baat hai...A for Attitude wale bihan pandey ko A for Angreji bhi aati hai...not bad...
Bihan gets irritated...thapki notice this and said.
Thapki- acha sorry okay! Mein toh sirf mazak kar rahi thi baba!!
Bihan- bahut hi ghatia mazak tha yeh!
Bihan (to himself)- apne aap ko bahut tees maar khan samjhti hai na yeh CCG yani chuk chuk gaadi...aaj isne ek aur baazi jeet li ghar walon ke saamne iss khel mein, magar hum bhi B for Baazigar aur B for Baaz hai...tumhare saare khel samajhte hai...aaj chalo toh zara hamare saat hum dono ki 1st icecream date par...phir dekhna hamara S for Super aur S for Surprise...

Thapki thinks, "sahi mein poora gone case hai yeh"...suddenly she sees her hair pin and pokes dheere se she poked it in her 'khwabon mein khoye' pati dev's left ear...
Bihan- ahhh!! Pagal vagal ho kya???
Thapki was laughing like a small, innocent kid and bihan was watching her with his swollen nose and got more irritated nd said, "pagal kahin ki..."

Thapki- kuch kaha tumne?? Meine dhang se nahi suna...
Bihaan- kuch nahi...hum neeche khade hai jab tumhara S for Solah aur S for Shringar ho jaye toh aa jana...

Bihan left the room in anger...

Thapki- bihaan, tum chaho ya na chaho magar rishta toh hamara jud gaya hai aur mein kabhi yeh relationship nahi tootne dungi kyunki yeh relationship daadi ne nahi balki ganesh ji ne joda hai aur mein iss relationship ki hamesha respect karungi aur tumhe bhi karni hogi...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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FiRST of all piyu⭐️👏👏
U r actually weitung a story😉
Btw, tumhari thpaki itni samajhdaar ??😲😲
Par aacha hai..its interesting..continue pls😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh God!! You are forgiven for the whole day absence with this story!! Loved it behna!! Update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thapki is naughty girl in ur ss loved it
Continue yara..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice one.thapki is so smart.naughty thapki😃ccg!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: peehu99

FiRST of all piyu⭐️👏👏

U r actually weitung a story😉
Btw, tumhari thpaki itni samajhdaar ??😲😲
Par aacha hai..its interesting..continue pls😊

Wen I thought abt this, my 1st reac was 🤣 but later I thought why not?? That's why 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@rtms u know hindi??😲 😲 Well thank you and I was missing 'naughty' element in thapki so I added that flavour also ;)
@dplee dii oh haan! Mujhe laga tha aap mere kaan kheechoge...dekhle piyalu..kanoon se bhi lambe haath hai..🤣 thank you badi behna!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: zarii

Thapki is naughty girl in ur ss loved it
Continue yara..

Bold- bas tu yeh mat kaha kar..varna mjhe apna 'dhulai post' yaad aa jata hai 🤣 🤣
And ya of course she is naughty 😉. Actually my story is totally different from others tabhi toh I was fearing to post it 😲. It is simple & sober wid cute & light dialogues...
Edited by priyanshiiii - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I just loved it Priya!! Plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dplee

I just loved it Priya!! Plz update soon

😲😲 I got 'POGO HEART ATTACK' after reading this...its lyk teacher saying to student aajse tum padhao.. 🤣
Thank you dii!

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