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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: rtms

dplee,its so beautiful.so excited to know wts in the letter n her confrontation with bihaan.update soon.


Thanks dear. Updated the letter!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Aww Girlie you wrote it pretty well... My god Bihaan's letter is so touching and emotional... It makes me cry... Feeling bad for Thahaan... My poor babies... But hats off to you too... Kya likha hai Ek dum hi Dil se ...thanks dear once again for this beautiful story ... Waiting for next part now ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Hey Dplee, what a letter yaaa... I am literally crying, wiping my tears!
Too good dear... U hv brought out Bihaan's emotions so well, excellent!

Pls continue and soon pls...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Lovely ss dear...read all 4 parts together. ...the letter was particularly awesome. ..very poignantly uve described their love and pain...hope thapki goes to meerut soon to bring him back!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
So good! Eagerly waiting for the next part! How many parts do u think there will be?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
hiya, its seems good but what happened in the letter, I did not understand😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Dplee



Neet, thank you. I believe in fairy tale endings so no divorce. Bihaan is thoda sa upset thinking Thapki divorced him.

BTW, tera signature to mindblowing hai!!

hi5 dplee.. yahan bhi humari choice mil gyi. 😆
Thanks dear.. u liked it?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Dplee dear! What a luv 😭
Lettet ne to rula e diya 😭
Well done.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Dplee first of all Thank you so much for the quick updating ..yes it's short but awesome and satisfying
Well I was so curious about the letter and when you told me that you also excited about it and going to pour everything in this letter my expectations doubled and I was on y toes and when noticed the update I felt like the happiest person on earth and then it hit ..you use Hindi for conversations and dialogues 😭 and this is my weakness
I was so disappointed at first then I decided to suck it up and deal with it so I decided it's the perfect chance to test my Hindi to see where all these years of watching Hindi drama left me ..I summoned all my courage and started reading and I will even write my so imperfect translation here so that you all can evaluate my level and also fill the gaps for me ..here we go

Thapki
When you read this I will be so far away ..I decided to shift to Meerut and may be I will never comeback or meet you again this is why I'm going to tell you what is in my heart ...look don't feel angry I will not be here to make you cool down
Do you remember that day when we first met? yes I know I was very impolite that day but I also remember your innocence ..Those fights ..those clashes may be since my childhood are the first bond I made but neither me nor you knew this then the relation between you and Dhruve happened ..I was happy that you met \ found Dhruv but MA ask me to break your marriage to have MA's love I became blind ..I know I made mistakes but I didn't want to stop you I didn't want to marry you but you know what happened that night
I swore that after 3 months I will set you free from this unwanted relationship ..it's said that Husband and wife relation is a seven lives ( births ) relation but it's not for me ( not in my destiny \luck) I didn't like you and you didn't like me but I don't know why our destiny every time put us in same place and the hate and distance between us pushed away and in this matter your heart defeat this Bihan Pandey
yes what you read is right I fall in love with the person who is a guest in my life for few months..how can I stay in this room where I every time hear the sound of your bangles how can I sleep on this bed where you once slept ..I see you every where Thapki how can I live without you thapki ? I don't know when my heart become your home ..how can I destroy this home Thapki ?
Do you remember the day when the red pepper went into your eyes and we both get under the shower ? I think since that day I was lost in your eyes and the day you were in the scale I thought I will stop breathing and when you were going to fall I don't know how I managed to go up there and reach you I was afraid to take even one breath till I reached you when you bleed and hurt that day I felt it ( the pain ) if love is in your fate then I love you .I don't know what they all going to say or what Dhruv will think but I know that B for Bihan pandey is in love with his wife and v for very ..I'm crazy to tell you all this but before I go I will feel relieved to ask your heart so I wrote ,if you torn it or if you screamed it's all up to you ( your choice) but don't refuse my love it's happening to me for the first time in my life..so take care of it with your heart
I signed the divorce papers as you wanted after the three months bauji will do all the procedures you just relax ( don't bother ) they all love you very much ..when you became free of this relation you will not remember me right Thapki ? I will not let one more chance to meet you and talk to you because I don't like Thapki Chaturbedi I love my Thapki Pandey
I don't know why these tears are coming out but I can't write more just want to say one thing take care of your self and start your life...I will not ask for your forgiveness because I don't deserve it ..one more thing Thapki (Tum apne paro pe khari rah sako) ???😕 so 80% of my share of this property I put it in your name consider it the last gift of love from me and accept it
Bihan ( I didn't write your Bihan because I don't know if I'm yours or no )
Take care of your self

OK this is what I get out of the letter depending on my Hindi ..tell me what you think and please correct me if you noticed that I missed a point completely... Thanks in advance


and Dplee from what I get if I get it right the letter is so emotional and I loved it ..hope you update soon


Edited by sudanindia2014 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

Dplee first of all Thank you so much for the quick updating ..yes it's short but awesome and satisfying
Well I was so curious about the letter and when you told me that you also excited about it and going to pour everything in this letter my expectations doubled and I was on y toes and when noticed the update I felt like the happiest person on earth and then it hit ..you use Hindi for conversations and dialogues 😭 and this is my weakness
I was so disappointed at first then I decided to suck it up and deal with it so I decided it's the perfect chance to test my Hindi to see where all these years of watching Hindi drama left me ..I summoned all my courage and started reading and I will even write my so imperfect translation here so that you all can evaluate my level and also fill the gaps for me ..here we go

Thapki
When you read this I will be so far away ..I decided to shift to Meerut and may be I will never comeback or meet you again this is why I'm going to tell you what is in my heart ...look don't feel angry I will not be here to make you cool down
Do you remember that day when we first met? yes I know I was very impolite that day but I also remember your innocence ..Those fights ..those clashes may be since my childhood are the first bond I made but neither me nor you knew this then the relation between you and Dhruve happened ..I was happy that you met \ found Dhruv but MA ask me to break your marriage to have MA's love I became blind ..I know I made mistakes but I didn't want to stop you I didn't want to marry you but you know what happened that night
I swore that after 3 months I will set you free from this unwanted relationship ..it's said that Husband and wife relation is a seven lives ( births ) relation but it's not for me ( not in my destiny \luck) I didn't like you and you didn't like me but I don't know why our destiny every time put us in same place and the hate and distance between us pushed away and in this matter your heart defeat this Bihan Pandey
yes what you read is right I fall in love with the person who is a guest in my life for few months..how can I stay in this room where I every time hear the sound of your bangles how can I sleep on this bed where you once slept ..I see you every where Thapki how can I live without you thapki ? I don't know when my heart become your home ..how can I destroy this home Thapki ?
Do you remember the day when the red pepper went into your eyes and we both get under the shower ? I think since that day I was lost in your eyes and the day you were in the scale I thought I will stop breathing and when you were going to fall I don't know how I managed to go up there and reach you I was afraid to take even one breath till I reached you when you bleed and hurt that day I felt it ( the pain
) if love is to take care of you then I love you .I don't know what they all going to say or what Dhruv will think but I know that B for Bihan pandey is in love with his wife and v for very ..I'm crazy to tell you all this but before I go I will feel relieved to ask your heart so I wrote ,if you torn it or if you screamed it's all up to you ( your choice) but don't insult my love it's happening to me for the first time in my life so I am going to safeguard it in my heart
I signed the divorce papers as you wanted after the three months bauji will do all the procedures you just relax ( don't bother ) they all love you very much ..when you became free of this relation you will not remember me right Thapki ? I will not let one more chance to meet you and talk to you because I don't like Thapki Chaturbedi I love my Thapki Pandey
I don't know why these tears are coming out but I can't write more just want to say one thing take care of your self and start your life...I will not ask for your forgiveness because I don't deserve it ..one more thing Thapki. To make you independent, 80% of my share of this property I put it in your name consider it the last gift of love from me and accept it
Bihan ( I didn't write your Bihan because I don't know if I'm yours or no )
Take care of your self

OK this is what I get out of the letter depending on my Hindi ..tell me what you think and please correct me if you noticed that I missed a point completely... Thanks in advance


and Dplee from what I get if I get it right the letter is so emotional and I loved it ..hope you update soon





Nuha, my gosh girlie!! You have translated the whole letter!! Your Hindi is better than you think. Just the not bold part has other meaning than what you interpret. I have corrected it. I used Hindi as Bihaan doesn't know to write English. Hope you understand my situation. Love you for all the support you have given.

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