TERE BIN---Thahaan FF Last Part) updated page 23 - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago
dplee,some tips for creative writing.u r a fab writer.how should one beginning?starting lesson.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rtms

dplee,some tips for creative writing.u r a fab writer.how should one beginning?starting lesson.


My God rt..I am humbled!! Writing is a passion...just pour your feelings into the words and your work is done. I am also new to fiction writing in fact these are my first fictions I have ever wrote. I generally blog and write features for both online/offline papers and magazines.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful! I cannot tell you how much I was waiting for the update! Couldn't have had a better ending😳
Their love, hesitance, shyness, daring, restlessness, union, all was so lovely👏

Will I seem selfish if I ask whether we can/will get an epilogue, with a little bihaan and a little thapki roaming around the Pandey Mansion? 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww Dplee the end chapter is just amazing ..loved the " series of fortunate events " that lead them to unite you captured all Thahan's cuteness and mixed it with passion so perfectly..my heart broke for Bihaan when he said he is not used to so much happiness and then the same heart sang for him for the rest of the chapter at last he has some one to be his and his only Thapki is so sweet and full of love and she will fill his life with love and happiness he deserve ..perfect end for a perfect story ..Thank you so much Dplee and please write another one soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow, that was abosolutley AMAZING!!! in other words GAJAB!!!! I read all of your story's and I loved the end chapter. I will not be suprised to see you working in colours as the director of a new show!
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Posted: 9 years ago
So so beautiful update. .you r great dplee dear...so so lovely n romantic one
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SwaSanForLife

Beautiful! I cannot tell you how much I was waiting for the update! Couldn't have had a better ending😳

Their love, hesitance, shyness, daring, restlessness, union, all was so lovely👏

Will I seem selfish if I ask whether we can/will get an epilogue, with a little bihaan and a little thapki roaming around the Pandey Mansion? 😆




Thanks dear!! Well, I have not thought of an epilouge. May be in another OS, we will get to know about what they are doing at Pandey Niwas..😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

Aww Dplee the end chapter is just amazing ..loved the " series of fortunate events " that lead them to unite you captured all Thahan's cuteness and mixed it with passion so perfectly..my heart broke for Bihaan when he said he is not used to so much happiness and then the same heart sang for him for the rest of the chapter at last he has some one to be his and his only Thapki is so sweet and full of love and she will fill his life with love and happiness he deserve ..perfect end for a perfect story ..Thank you so much Dplee and please write another one soon




Nuha..Thank you!! Will try something next week!! I have to concentrate in my blog this week..so many posts are pending there😕
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sxbxh1234

Wow, that was abosolutley AMAZING!!! in other words GAJAB!!!! I read all of your story's and I loved the end chapter. I will not be suprised to see you working in colours as the director of a new show!



My god!! Na baba na..I am happy as a writer dear!! Dont make me to direct some Saas bahu crap😆

Thanks for reading!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read it in a go..
shit shit maaannn...u nailed it...
brilliant update... 👏
the best part was the letter of bihaan..u potrayed it with perfect emotions..it was like who ever read ot could feel bihaan's pain...
Thapki's feelings for bihaan was beautiful...
nd the plan of thapki was superb...
but I just felt that u could have extended the consummation scene
lovely ff
do write more lyk dis
good job dude 👍🏼

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