ThaHaan FF -starting to love (part 4 updated) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: sreenaveena

please update dear :)

eager to know about the idea of thapki


ok..ok...it means no one is in mood to guess😆😕...ok ...updating now...only...😊⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART-3

SUSPENSE...OVER...

THAPKI AND CHILDREN HIDING BEHIND THE ROOM OUTSIDE
THAPKI ASKS SO ...1,2,TH...TH...3...
AND ALL THE CHILDRENS START THROWING PAPER BALLS ON BIHAAN ONE AFTER THE OTHER BUT BIHAAN ...😆😕

T:ARE ISPE TO KOI ASAR HI NAHIN HO RAHA ...
CHILDREN...-HAHAHAA... SORRY BHABHI PAR APKA PLAN TO FLOP HO GAYA ...

NAHIN AISA NAHIN HO SAKTA ...

PAPPU TUM EK KAAM KARO DEKH KA AAO KI KOI ABHI UTHA HAI YA NAHIN ...

PAPPU COMES AFTER FEW MINS...
PAPPU:KOI NAHIN UTHA BHAABHI SAB SO RAHE HAIN...
T:V...VER...VERY GOOD...

AB MAZA AYEGA...AB PATA CHALEGA IS BACCHU...K...KO ...KI...KI...KIS...SE PANGA LIYA HAI...

SHE GOES OUTSIDE IN THE VILLAGE...(ALL BIHAAN FRIENDS RELATIVES SLEEPING...)
AND SHE STARTS BUMPING THE DRUM AND START SINGING ...WITH CHILDREN...
UTTHH...JAO...
UTHH JAO ...
GAON WALE NEED SE JAG JAAO...
UTTHH...JAO...
UTHH JAO ...
GAON WALE NEED SE JAG JAAO...

THEN BIHAAN GETS IRRITATED WITH THE UNPLEASANT VOICE AND DRUM BEAT ...HE GETS ANGRY AND MOVES OUT KICKING THE DOOR ...

HE SEES THAPKI SINGING ...FOR THE FIRST TIME...
GAON WALE JAG GAYE ALL COME TOGETHER ...GOSSIPING ...LAGTA HAI GAON MEIN KOI JAANWAR YAA KOI AA GAYA HAI ...BANDOOKE LE KAR TAIYAAR HO JAAO SAATHIYON...
BIHAAN WAS ANGRY TO THE CORE BUT SEEING THAPKI HAVING FUN AND SINGING FOR THE FIRST TIME JUST LOSTS AT THAT MOMENT IN HER LOUD UNPLEASANT SONG WHICH IS FOR THE FIRST TIME ENTERTAINING HIM AND SOOTHING HIM...

WHEN HE WAS LOST IN HER SONG ...
SUDDENLY GAON WALE COMES...HE COMES IN SENSE SLOWLY AND SEES GAON WALE WITH BANDOOK PISTOL HATHIYAAR OF THEM...HE GETS WORRIED...AND STRAIGHTLY GOES TOWARDS THEM ...AND ASKS...MAMA ,TAUJI,BUA...KAHAAN CHAL DIYE SAARE EK SAATH ...

ELDER OF THE GAON TELL HIM:HUM SAB NEEND MEIN THE AUR ACHAANAK...
aur achaanak bohot tej awaaz sunai di ...hume lagta hai hum sabko savdhaan ho jaana chaahiye ...koi jaanwar gaonmein ghus aaya hai...

B:kya...???
bihaan says :really...accha chalo us jaanwar ki khabar lete hai ...mamaji taaya ji ek bandook mujhe bhi de dijiye...
main bhi dekhu kisni aapki neend haraam kar ke rakhi hai...

thapki along with children is continuing singing in the village on one side and other side bihaan with all gaon wale coming towards thapki and children 😆😊😳

again short part sorry for it ...but atleast now i want all to guess what will happen next confrontation of thahaan and the villagers...😆😳⭐️









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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
short bt awesome👏..nd plz cont soon.excited to read more ke age kya hoga.😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
i'm loving this bubbly, mischevious Thapki...completey different from show..😊😊..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: greeshma014

i'm loving this bubbly, mischevious Thapki...completey different from show..😊😊..


thank you ...even me too these days want something different to write so changed the concept a bit...even i also think when she will get to know real bihaan slowly in the hatred and all we will get to see a completely different changed thapki...⭐️😉😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
so now updating my next part -changes in bihaan and thapki slowly...😊😳😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: creationschhavi

so now updating my next part -changes in bihaan and thapki slowly...😊😳😉




eagerly waiting to read it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
part-4

thapki singing and beating up drums along with children ...gaon wale comes there with pistol guns etc...she gets completely ...shocked...
bihaan asks thapki ...tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho ...

thapki:w...wo...
children:bhabhi humein drum bajan sikha rahi thi...
bihaan:itni subah subah ...time dekha hai kya...
buaji:chori ye dhyaan rahe ki aage se aisa naa ho warna humse bura koi aur nahin hoga...
bihaan:buaji aap chinta mat kariye main ise samjha dunga yahaan ke taur tarike...
buaji:haan chhore samjha dena ise...

after some time all does the pooja...along with bihaan and thapki...😊

after that ...next scene;

thapki in garden she is happy and sad also a bit...
children asks her:bhabhi ek gana to gaa ke sunao pls...pls...

she sings ...in a beautiful voice :Mujhe ishq se rehna tha door
Gham ii iske bade jo hain mash'hoor
Par ye dil hh hai ki bilkul mana nahi
Mujhe kheench kar dekho l..le aaya wahin
J jjahaan ishq hai, bas ii ishq hai
Haan ii ishq hai, bas ishq hai

bihaan in his room ...thinking about thapki...why is she affecting her so much ...ye kya ho raha hai mujhe ...main uske baare mein nahin sochna chaahta phir bhi kyon soch raha hoon...

he starts playing guitar...

Yaariyan ve... Yaariyan...

Kya huaa asar tere saath reh kar naa jaane
Ki hosh mujhe naa raha

he starts remembering all his scenes with thapki...their fights nokjhoks...falling catching scenes...

a smile come on his lips eventually and he gets lost in the song completely ...

in the garden thapki listens a sound coming from someone's room...and tells children :ye itna achchha gana kaun ga raha hai...
children:hmmm...
thapki:kya hua...?
children:kuchh nahin
thapki :to aao chalke dekhte hain...
thapki searches in every room ...

bihaan sings...:Lafz mere thhe zubaan pe aake ruke
Par ho na sake woh bayaan
Dhadkan tera hi naam jo le
Aankhein bhi paighaam ye de
Teri nazar ka hi ye asar hai
his eyes was closed but he suddenly open his eyes and thapki sees him ...
and he sings...:Mujh pe jo huaa

bihaan thapki eyelock...complete silence for few mins and then...😳

then thapki sings in her tune...
Iss d.. dard-e-dil ki sifaarish
Ab kar dd de koi yahaan
Ke mil ..jj jaaye ise woh baarish
Jo bhiga..dd.. de poori tt tarah (x2)

children starts clapping and says ...wwaaao...together 👏😳
pappu says:bhai pata hai bhaabhi apke gaane ki taarif kar rahi thi
jammu:haan haan aur ye bhi keh rahi thi ...ki aap bahut achchha gaa te hain...
thapki...n...nahin...w...wo to ...b...bas...
bihaan interrupts and says thank you ... (smilingly)
thapki gets amazed and a bit shocked listening thank you first time from him...
she asks children:friends...pls...a..apne bhaiya kk...ko kaho naa...ki mmm...m mujhe bhi guitar baja ne...kk.. ko dein ...
bihaan:tum...a...aur guitar...
thapki...k...kyon nahin...
bihaan:theek hai tumhari marji ...ye lo ...he gives her his guitar and she takes it happily like a kid and sit on the bed where he was sitting...

next part waiting...so friends pls...do comment how it is...changes in thapki-bihaan slowly ...😳⭐️😊



Edited by creationschhavi - 10 years ago
ishqwaalalove thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
..sorry wrong post .
Edited by creationschhavi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Really loved this part more. Especially bihaan thinking about thapki in his room and is smiling too. She heared 1st time smiling thanks from him. 😳

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