Review Story#6- 1st Love or your Spouse ?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woow Seems like Im Very Late this time ! anyways was busy with family !! Watched Sunday Wala Epi !! expected it to be WOOW !! cuz Jennifer's situation n Character was kinda similar to DMG ! but anyways here full review :D

TMLS story #6 tu hai wahi dil ne jisse apna kaha

So hmmm some how 1 of the OKAY-ish stories :S
I mean story telling was nice but yet again ! Acting wise :S hmmm where jenifer was nice! Always liked her acting! But keith :S a big no :S what an average actor :S! There was no chemistry! I saw more chemistry between akaash n nidhi thn vivaan n nidhi :s !

Honestly not a fan of such stories! Never!
Why marry some1 at first place who you know u will not be happy with?! Cuz like this you not just ruining your happiness but the person your marrying too!
Example vivaan n his wife! The girl loves vivaan so much but yet she knows she will never get that place she deserves! Where second example nidhi n akaash! Akash is like 1 of those perfect husbands! Who just wants his wife happy! N u will realise that with his 1 dialogue " marry the 1 with who you can be happy forever' yes this phrase is perfect for marriage life!

Honestly i did not like both nidhi n vivaan's selfish act! YES what is your partners fault here? Dont they deserve to know the truth thn u just disappearing from their life?
Akaas yet again won my heart by sacrificing his own happiness which is nidhi, for her happiness!
Just loved the end n thanks to cvs for not disappointing me as i thought this too will turn out like kabhi alvida na kehna! I hated that movie n the end! But here im happy! As love n marriage is not just too think about your self! That is selfish-ness! Love is too think of others too!

Story wise i enjoyed! Acting n chemistry hmmm vivaan aka keith as an actor disappointed me!

What would have worked:
-When vivaan n nidhi started meeting, it shouldn't have been music, but cv's should have used some strong conversation between the 2 n how they felt afta that incident happened 15 years bk!

-Better music :S teri meri was quite OTT!! no no not cuz it was used on arhi n it was better on thm lol but honestly teri meri was not going with the scene! Tadap tadap was good! It was for both vivaan n akaash situation! So that was fine! But it could have been better used!

- last! Hmmm end was rushed actually! N could have been better! Like what happened in the car between vivaan n nidhi! N like some intense dialogues from nidhi should have been used n why she wants to spent her life with her husband!

N some nice talk between vivaan n his wife! She deserved an explaination!

Over all OKAY-ish! Weakest compare to last stories :S dialogue delivery could have been better! Esp vivaan, dude seemed like reading the lines! :S
N even when akaash saw vivaan n nidhi leaving! Scene was quite weak! Like no intensity!!



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yeah I agree with you...I think utilizing the whole of 1 hour 30 minutes would have made it better...I mean this TF was just 45 minutes long😕...they needed and could have shown a lot of scenes, esp the conversation between Neeti-Vivaan after they met and in the care was a must but alas! they just rushed it!! Jenny and Ajay, esp Jenny was the saving grace of the TF!! and I kinda disagree with you on Neeti's part...unlike Vivaan, she was quite happy with her married life...9if she wasn't then her husband would have realized something was wrong but he never felt so! I don't think she evr felt as strong as Vivaan did...the fact that Vivaan still loved her and seeing him after so long just rekindled her childhood memories...and they just met each other..not that they did anything wrong!! anyway am glad Neeti realized her true love coz that was the right thing to do!!

and I know Keith disappointed us..but just to defend him, if you just look at his face, he wasn't too bad with his expressions...it was mostly the dubbing that played the villain...dubbing for his dialogues was just too bad!!

anyway to sum it up, even with a lot of flaws, I quite enjoyed watching it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: KaJenYaianSanju

Yeah I agree with you...I think utilizing the whole of 1 hour 30 minutes would have made it better...I mean this TF was just 45 minutes long😕...they needed and could have shown a lot of scenes, esp the conversation between Neeti-Vivaan after they met and in the care was a must but alas! they just rushed it!! Jenny and Ajay, esp Jenny was the saving grace of the TF!! and I kinda disagree with you on Neeti's part...unlike Vivaan, she was quite happy with her married life...9if she wasn't then her husband would have realized something was wrong but he never felt so! I don't think she evr felt as strong as Vivaan did...the fact that Vivaan still loved her and seeing him after so long just rekindled her childhood memories...and they just met each other..not that they did anything wrong!! anyway am glad Neeti realized her true love coz that was the right thing to do!!


and I know Keith disappointed us..but just to defend him, if you just look at his face, he wasn't too bad with his expressions...it was mostly the dubbing that played the villain...dubbing for his dialogues was just too bad!!

anyway to sum it up, even with a lot of flaws, I quite enjoyed watching it.

Thank Q for a Decent n Mature Reply <3 !! well think of it ! yes Nidhi didnt Let her 1st love effect her married life ! but yes i was Quite sad when she started meeting Vivaan n forgetting Akaash :( !!
about keith ! dunno xpected much more :/ !!

not just dialogue but it was like CVs were not even in mood for this story ! it was like some1 wrote a Quick OS with jumping Scenes ! not Much dialogues .-. !!

so many Scenes ! they could have used good convo instead OTT music :S !


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Posted: 12 years ago
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One of the few posts on the Sunday TF that actually discussed how it could have been better and not how bad or imperfect it was !!! :)) And i agree with you..more dialogues than the theme song playing evry now and then, defintely was one thing they could have tried..Like when Niti and Vivaan first met after 15 years, you would expect them to have a heart to heart conversation..that would have helped the audience understand their situation better..similarly when Vivaan put forth the idea of eloping I would have loved to hear Niti's point of view..Vivaan's wife who was as much wronged as Akash, atleast deserevd an explanation..the way Vivaan was wailing in the end , you would be forced to think that he would never be able to move on in life and love his wife the way she deserves to be loved..poor woman was left crying in the corner alone feeling more sorry for her husband..the least they could have shown is Vivaan going back to his wife and apologising..I felt really bad for her.. Atleast Akash gets Niti's love back in the end.! and I agree with you..the theme song most defintely was OTT in this situation, though its a lovely song..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Agree with you to some extent. The TF no doubt lacked in terms of direction and badly needed more dialogues but acting wise it was good. Esp liked Ajay and Jenny. Keith...was below average. No offence to his fans.
And thank god someone liked Akash-Neetis chemistry. Its like almost everyone was saying the opposite but glad to find someone who liked them too. They didn't have an amazing one but looked good enough.

Agreed! Thank lord it was not like KANK, for a moment even I thought it would turn out like that but glad it didn't. Cheating under no circumstances is justified. The end was just right here.
In my opinion Neeti had moved on in her life, it was just Vivaan who was seemed to stuck. He was kind of obsessed with her more than love her. He wanted to see her back only. Neeti seemed quite happy till she saw Vivaan. Even then it wasn't love just confused feelings which needed sorting out.

More dialogues were very much needed esp between Vivaan and Neeti, agreed. I wonder why they wasted time and scenes showing them roaming around when they could have used that time to show them mouthing some meaningful dialogues. Esp a big dialogue filled scene was needed where Neeti makes her decision. One such scene if provided would have made a big difference.

Over all the poor execution and lack of timing made the story average. But still liked it and watched for Ajay and Jen. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vaishali-AR

One of the few posts on the Sunday TF that actually discussed how it could have been better and not how bad or imperfect it was !!! :)) And i agree with you..more dialogues than the theme song playing evry now and then, defintely was one thing they could have tried..Like when Niti and Vivaan first met after 15 years, you would expect them to have a heart to heart conversation..that would have helped the audience understand their situation better..similarly when Vivaan put forth the idea of eloping I would have loved to hear Niti's point of view..Vivaan's wife who was as much wronged as Akash, atleast deserevd an explanation..the way Vivaan was wailing in the end , you would be forced to think that he would never be able to move on in life and love his wife the way she deserves to be loved..poor woman was left crying in the corner alone feeling more sorry for her husband..the least they could have shown is Vivaan going back to his wife and apologising..I felt really bad for her.. Atleast Akash gets Niti's love back in the end.! and I agree with you..the theme song most defintely was OTT in this situation, though its a lovely song..

well this is the Show im not watching as any fan But just a Normal viewer ! so u will seee no bashing from my side cuz im no fan of Jennifer ! but I can not deny she is an amazing Actress n 1 reason i wanted this Story to be good n Worth but was hell disappointed !!

I Know Nidhi Was happy with her hubby ! but here im blaming the CVs n the Writers for being useless n confusing the Viewers who watched the story ! as the story was not clear ! nor Nidhi's True feels for Akaash b4 Vivaan Entered so ya !


I LOVE Teri Meri Song but when it played the scene I was like hmmm :S ? !!

anyways thanks for the Comment <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ameres

Agree with you to some extent. The TF no doubt lacked in terms of direction and badly needed more dialogues but acting wise it was good. Esp liked Ajay and Jenny. Keith...was below average. No offence to his fans.

And thank god someone liked Akash-Neetis chemistry. Its like almost everyone was saying the opposite but glad to find someone who liked them too. They didn't have an amazing one but looked good enough.

Agreed! Thank lord it was not like KANK, for a moment even I thought it would turn out like that but glad it didn't. Cheating under no circumstances is justified. The end was just right here.
In my opinion Neeti had moved on in her life, it was just Vivaan who was seemed to stuck. He was kind of obsessed with her more than love her. He wanted to see her back only. Neeti seemed quite happy till she saw Vivaan. Even then it wasn't love just confused feelings which needed sorting out.

More dialogues were very much needed esp between Vivaan and Neeti, agreed. I wonder why they wasted time and scenes showing them roaming around when they could have used that time to show them mouthing some meaningful dialogues. Esp a big dialogue filled scene was needed where Neeti makes her decision. One such scene if provided would have made a big difference.

Over all the poor execution and lack of timing made the story average. But still liked it and watched for Ajay and Jen. :)

Not a Fan of Jennifer ! nor Knew Ajaay much But ! YES acting wise they MUCH MUCH better thn Keith 😕 ! n Cuz of His Acting I saw no chemistry between vivaan n Nidhi !! where Aaash n Nidhi were actually Cute <3 !!

Nidhi Realized her Love Was kidish for Vivaan As she was akid ! but Now she realized her love for Akaash ! N I LOVED it !! esp Not being like Kabhi Alvida ! cuz I personal Have seen my uncle Ruining my aunts Life by agreeing to marry her n thn left her afta 3 months !! even tho he is real Uncle of mine ! tho No 1 talks to him ! cuz such thing Will Never be accepted !! he had no rights to Agree to marry her n ruin her life ! so i was just praying Atleast nidhi realizes her Love for Akaash !!

But The epi was not Justice ! esp to Vivaans Wife ! that Woman Deserved Explaination :( !! Wonder why CvS Did such rushed Story :S !honestly it was like they were not in mood :/

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Manal..

Not a Fan of Jennifer ! nor Knew Ajaay much But ! YES acting wise they MUCH MUCH better thn Keith 😕 ! n Cuz of His Acting I saw no chemistry between vivaan n Nidhi !! where Aaash n Nidhi were actually Cute <3 !!


Nidhi Realized her Love Was kidish for Vivaan As she was akid ! but Now she realized her love for Akaash ! N I LOVED it !! esp Not being like Kabhi Alvida ! cuz I personal Have seen my uncle Ruining my aunts Life by agreeing to marry her n thn left her afta 3 months !! even tho he is real Uncle of mine ! tho No 1 talks to him ! cuz such thing Will Never be accepted !! he had no rights to Agree to marry her n ruin her life ! so i was just praying Atleast nidhi realizes her Love for Akaash !!

But The epi was not Justice ! esp to Vivaans Wife ! that Woman Deserved Explaination :( !! Wonder why CvS Did such rushed Story :S !honestly it was like they were not in mood :/


I'm not a fan of Jennifer either, but she is a fine actress. But yes, I very much like Ajay and his work.

Yup thats extremely sad when people do that. Marriage is about trust, if you can't be faithful to a person then don't marry in the first place. Agreed. Vivaans wife was victimized. I felt really bad for her, she needed an explanation. It would have been best if she left him close clearly Viv seemed like a hopeless case. She deserved to live a happy life then be stuck in a loveless marriage with a man who never cared for her.
Wish they had utilized the remaining 30 minutes wisely then it could have turned out even better.

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