Echoes Across the Divide: A Sahan Tale

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Hi my name is Ami and I'm writing an SS on the current track of the story .




Angad and Sahiba had faced many challenges in the last two weeks in the hands of that devil named Seerat,but with their love they conquered it all and faced all difficulties together.


Sahiba woke up and found herself surrounded by doctors and in a hospital gown and tried to recall what had happened, then the thoughts came rushing in her head.


"Angad"she said,her voice trembling with fear.


"Don't worry ma'am your husband is fine" A nurse said in a reassuring voice.


"Take me to him,I want to see him" Sahiba said as she hastily got out bed .


"Ma'am wait, you can't be so stressed, what about the baby?"


"Kya Baby?" Sahiba said confusingly


" I was going to wait to tell you the good news but, Congratulations aap garbhavatee hain"


"main garbhavatee hoon?"


" Yes Ma'am, but pls take care of yourself. You're free to meet your husband now".


"Thank you soo much, thank you doctor"


Sahiba was so beaming with joy and almost ran to go see Angad


IN ANGADS ROOM


"Angad" sahiba said as she ran to embrace her husband


Angad embraced his wife and kissed her forhead while thanking rabb for bringing them back together .


As Sahiba breaks the embrace, she takes a deep breath, her heart racing with anticipation. With a mischievous glint in her eye, she clears her throat and begins her revelation.


"Angad,I'm pregnant"


She watches as Angad's eyes fill with joy and excitement and he pulls her in a tight embrace.


"I'm going to be a father" Angad said with tears of joy streaming down his face


Angad broke the embrace and looked and Sahiba and he felt a pang of guilt


"Sahiba,I am sorry" Angad said


"For what" she said sounding confused


"For all the times I've shouted and screamed at you , for all the times I blamed you for everything bad going on in my life, for the times you slept in that insufferable storeroom and for all the times i made you cry . I'm sorry sahiba,i'm really sorry".


Sahiba could see the remorse and guilt in his eyes and put her hand in his.


"Angad,that was in the past,focus on right now,we're going to start a family.Were going to be parents . I forgive you Angad, I forgave you a long time ago,I've come to realize that holding onto anger and resentment only serves to deepen the wounds that have broken our relationship.


To be continued


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Posted: 1 years ago
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Hope you guys like my fanfiction

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Lovely start, Please continue.

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Great start. I hope this doesn't go to separation track like in the original series where after pregnancy revelation there was Inder's death, Angad's blame-game and Sahan separation.smiley38

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aleyamma47

Great start. I hope this doesn't go to separation track like in the original series where after pregnancy revelation there was Inder death, Angad's blame and Sahan separation.smiley38

Ofc not, I might not be a good writer but I'm not as bad as the writers of the show. 🤭
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Posted: 1 years ago
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A very nice start indeed. Pls continue

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CHAPTER 2: Sahiba and Angad had been discharged from the hospital and had broken the news of sahiba's pregnancy to their family member's. A party is being held by the Brar's to celebrate the coming of the heir of brar Mansion.


Sahiba adorned her self in a light blue salwar suit and Angad wore a baby pink blazer and a matching paag.


As they descend down the stairs hand in hand it was evident in their faces how much they love eachother and how eager they are to start this new chapter of their lives.


"Angad and Sahiba are practically glowing with happiness" Gurleen said teasingly.


Angad: Which couple won't be happy knowing that they are going to be parents .


Bebe: Rabbs blessings are truly upon us, first angad and sahiba come home safe and then we get news of the coming of Brar heir.


Just then the Mogas walked in and showered Sahiba and Angad in hugs and blessings


Santosh: "I can't believe I'm going to be a nani" she said with tears of joy streaming down her face.


Ajeet: "And I'm going to be a nana"


" Dont forget me,I'm going to be a Chachi!" Keerat said excitedly


"it's time for our future parents to come on the dance floor "


Angad directed Sahiba to the dance floor the song they danced to on their reception started playing


"This is the song we danced to on our reception night" She said in a suprised tone


"It shows how far we have come in our relationship. If I was told one year ago I would be starting a family with Sahiba Kaur Monga I would have never believed it".


"And if I was told I'd end up carrying the child of Mr Angad Singh Brar,I would have rather died"


As the song ended, Angad and Sahiba parted and were instructed by Manveer to go and cut the gender reveal cake.


"Hurry up and cut the cake already I want to find out if my pote is a boy or a girl"


Angad and Sahiba cut the cake and the screams of the family could be headed from miles away.


"It's a boy" They all screamed excitedly .


"I'm getting a grandson !" Manveer said excitedly.


"I'm getting a son " Sahiba said emotionally


Angad: And your going to be an amazing mother.


Angad words held a sense of sincerety and supportiveness but she couldn't help but wonder if she would actually be a good mother or not.

Edited by Terimeridoriyan - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: Athz

A very nice start indeed. Pls continue

I have posted next chapter

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Originally posted by: Athz

A very nice start indeed. Pls continue

I have posted next chapter.

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