FF : Yeh Dooriyaan *SahAn + Veerat* (Updated 10/06) - Page 13

Originally posted by: Az07

So so loved your update

Veer coming to enquire about keerat that was so sweet of him. And keerat catching his lie red handed she knows him too well. I liked how veer understood Keerat’s nature. She might be tough outside but from inside she is so sweet. Looking forward for this duo. Hope keerat comes to attend reception. I liked Angad Sahiba scenes too. Wonder what they are planning during reception. So finally Sahiba knows Seerat borrowed sahiba’s philosophy of life. Eagerly waiting for the dhamekadar reception. With lot of drama & budding relationships. Update next part soon

Well, Veer and Keerat are darlings that I adore. And technically speaking Angad fell for Sahiba since Seerat was copy pasting everything. 😂😂😂😂

Originally posted by: sumaishu

Thanks for the tag desr. Beautifully written as always. Thanks for the lovely update 😊❤️💕

Thank you!!! 😍😍😍

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome

Love it

Cont soon

Thanks! I will try to continue soon! 😍😍

Originally posted by: Ashviniv

Awesome update as always. The veer keerat scenes were cute and heart warming.

But my main focus for story is angad sahiba, i loved how they are behaving with each other. Not over the top drama, lectures and anger. They abbe udberstoof that they need to make most of what they havee been dealt with and rather then fights it's easier to have a truce and an attempt at friendship

Ohhh the pool is here...the pool is here. I can't wait for some romance near it 😳

More Veer-Keerat scenes! 😍😍 No over top drama over here at least not between Angad-Sahiba. Can't promise anything about Garry-Seerat when they get here. 😂😂😂 They might just be dramatic!

Yup the pool is here!! 😜😜😜

Originally posted by: EkChudail

Hi. Your fanfic is great and like many others on this forum, I anticipate the updates. My personal favourite is chapter 6 and 7 where the characters show various emotions with equal intensity across situations.

The interactions between the lead in the chapter reminded of Rikara (again, as many have pointed out). The two couples indeed reflected the intense chemistry through minimal contact and mundane scenes. My favourite scene was the one where Gauri cries in rain and is hugged by Omkara without any interrogation; it prompted me to read their ffs. Some of them were real cringe - like the actual story in the serial, but a few of them were beautiful (with much needed revision of the canon to explore the character).

Someone here rightly pointed out Omkara could have been an intense lover. I wish the serial writers wrote him properly.

Thank you for your kind words! I loved writing chapter 6 too! 🥰🥰🥰🥰 Well, Rikara and SahAn has some teeny tiny similarities. In Ishqbaaz Rikara was my favourite couple! Unfortunately the tracks and scenes with them wrote me off the serial pretty early. I just watched clips.

Originally posted by: Viana_White

It was a wonderful chapter my dear author ❤️❤️

Aww veer wanted to meet keerat how sweet 🥰🥰

Using is bhabhi as an excuse is so cute to meet his lady love ❤️❤️

"Aap na gazab ke dost ho, brar sahab" hayeee 💕💕

True sahiba don't need to worry about Santosh Monga's issues on top of her own issues so sushhhh🤐🤐

Yes keerat is an enigma she is a very rough and tough girl from outside and a very delicate person from inside just like a coconut 🥥🥥

You are falling in love with her veer 😃😃

True Angad's suit is not of sahiba's style angad likes extravagant with loud colours sahiba prefers simplicity😊😊

Thank God they are not fight but talking like mature people they are not like show ☺️☺️

Awww sahiba cares for Angad😏😏

I really want this questioned answered by TMD Angad too like how was seerat was able to fool him ??him being a businessman he should have a good judge of character🤨🤨

And brar's are in elite society for so long they should know that all that glitters is not gold and seerat is not even glitter🤔🤔

Seerat used sahiba's words to impress your family Angad😠😤

Yes please Sahiba stop trying to save seerat she is not worth your efforts pls 🥹🥹

Pls author don't make Sahiba that ITV patented ideal Bahu ,beti and behen forgiving everyone who wronged her pls 🙏🏻🙏🏻

Please update soon

First thing I must mention. I love such detailed reviews. The longer the better. 🥰🥰

Veer hasn't even realized Keerat is his lady love 😂😂 They are still in friend-zone.

That line was inspired by Bebe-Daarji 😜😜😂😂 😂😂

Sahiba will be making modifications in that suite very soon! 😉😉

In TMD we are to assume that Angad is a businessman just for show and he is good judge of diamonds and gold not people 😂😂 I am still astonished to find Brar Jewelleries functioning well. 😂😂

Nah, the point of the story is to make sure Sahiba-Angad does not turn into an ITV ML AND FL. Be rest assured, I am not even going down that side of the terrain! 😂

Sahiba is effected by Angad, well starting to at least. And Angad's reactions are pending in Reception! 😉😉

@mirai07 Same. The track was annoying. I watched their scenes by fastforwarding to the tracks. Too bad they were far and few. What are your favourite serial ships?

Other than Rikara, I liked Ishqaan and now SahAn.

An update worth the wait as usual ❤️

See, this is how human beings react with each other. You may not like each other but that doesn’t mean basic humanity and common sense flies out of the window as well. Rooting for this Angand - Sabina because the show ones are starting to put me off. Usually it takes me about 100 episodes before I am “bas ab ho gaya”. This one I have started feeling that way now.

Waiting for more ❤️