Manya / Rara OS Meetha Sa Ishq

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hey guys .. thought of wrting an os on manya and rara ... since its monsoon.. and im a great monsoon lover... i wanted to write sth on them... if you liked it .. so .. then please hit like and leave your precious feedback.

meetha sa ishq.


It was an july evening in banares... Mantu had taken amaya for a walk... as it was sunday and ... due to his busy schedule .. he couldnt take his wife .. out ... so.. today he decided to take her out...

Amaya was walking with mantu at the ganga ghaat... and it started to rain ... softly...

m. amaya.. lest go home... its raining..!!!

A. no.. no mantu... i wanna go to the park... and enjoy the trees and the lush green view

M. amaya...!

And they walked to the park... It was night by now... and... they sat on the bench... a lamplight..a yellow-orange light was there...

amaya rested her head on mantus shoulder .. and entwined her fingers with his... mantu kissed her head... and she looked at him... at those neautiful innocent dark brown eyes... amya got closer to his eyes... and mantu closed them... and amaya proceded to kiss each one of them... mantu then opened his eyes... and leaned to kiss her forehead...

M. amya... remember ... we use to come here with chicklu and jazz and play badminton ...

A. yes mantu. how can i forget that... those days... i really miss jazz ... after she got selected for her course in delhi... i really miss her...

M. humm... looks like the rain is going to get wild...
  1. yes mantu...mantu.. lets go under that tree... come...

M.. are amaya...

A.. mantu please... come on...

And she dragged him with her under the tree...

On the other hand... In their bedroom... She was standing ... Near the window... Facing it... Enjoying the rainy day... and soon... A pair of strong arms encircled her And pulled her towards him... Her back hit his bare chest... she could feel his male fragrance... When... She turned around to see her beloved husband ... (Still locked in his muscular arms) Was standing there ... And she leaned forward to kiss his forehead...

Rama. Happy birthday mrs. Ramashrey gupta

Rachita. Thank you mr. Ramashrey gupta...

And she hugged him back... Caressing his back ... Feeling the warmth of his body ... Rama placed a soft kiss on the side of her neck ... As soft as if it was a raindrop... Rachita felt shivers running through her body... And she broke the hug...

Rachita. I love you rama

Rama. I love you too rachita ji...

After hearing those sweet words .. rachita smiled and looked down... rama lifted her chin ... her eyes met his... and he couldn't stop himself from kissing them... softly and slowly... rachita started breathing heavily... and rama noticed it... he lifted her up... in his arms... and took her to their bed... placed her gently on the bed... and sat next to her ... and started to caress her cheeks... rachita closed her eyes... she was just thinking if this moment freezes there... he .. with her ... so close

Mantu was staring at amaya ... the rain was pouring and the they were staniding under a tree ... which was preventing them from getting wet... and amaya... she was lost in the rain... she turned to face mantu... smiled at him... and entwined his fingers with hers... and leaned to touch her forehead with hers... they both were eally happy with each other... and mantu proceeded to kiss her cheek... amaya ..

A.. wah.. aaj .. tum bada pyaa kar rahe ho kujhe...

M.. who... tum itni khush ho.. tumhe aur bhi khush karna tha na... tum jab mere saath hoti ho to ...tumhe acha lagta hai na?

A.. ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai mantu... mai toh bas tumhe hi tumhe dekhna chahti hoon...

M.. I love you amaya... I really love you

A.. I love you too...

Rama ... was lost in rachitas beauty.. and he placed a soft kiss on her ear... rachita hugged him tight... rama hugged her back... and... comforted her ... and they both slept embracing each other... in the rainy night.

I hope you enjoyed this, I really really hope t get good response for this if you liked it ill write more,,,, please leave your feedback

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heartbroken1 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you for your apreciation... It really means a lot to me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh wow...RaRa nd ManYa married...nice...
Keep the continuity going time to time...😃
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Yap... Thanks.. Im updating but less comments on my ss.. So thought of writibg an os
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG...THAT WAS so ROMANTIC😳😳
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Ohhh im so happy... Thanks u so much!!!!:)
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supperbb...amazing..mindblowing...fantastic os😉
loved it
❤️ 😃
please write more😊

Edited by --sonam-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really good attempt! Very nicely written! 😊
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loved ti waiting for more
it is an awesome start

and loved the story 😳
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that was really very nice... continue. ..

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