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#61

Originally posted by: anahita.taanu

enjoyed the second part throughly...it was really nyce..!!!!
ur concept is really unique..!!! pls update soon..!!!!

its my honour that you liked the concept. Will update third chapter very soon...
Keep enjoying...😛
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Superb update re loved it continue soon

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nice chap..thankz 4 de update

thanx mahi. its great that u enjoyed reading chapter. will upd. soon. And you too update your FF soon...😊
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fabulous update

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thanx a lot alisha di that u took out some precious time to read my FF. Will cont. soon😊...
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hi all... thnx for all ur replies...
thanks for our silent readers...😊

So I'm update the nxt chaptr

CHAPTER 03

Ganguly family having their Tea.

Robindo: Dada ab aaj kahi jaa rahe hain..?
Anurag: Kyun..? Aise kyun poocha tu ne..?
Robindo: Agar aap ja rahe hein toh...

Before he could complete Shekhar interpreted.

Shekhar:Vaise kahan ja raha hain tu Anurag..?

Anurag gazed on to his cup.

Anurag:Voh Raj mathlab Rajeev ne mujhe bulaya hain ... mujhe jana hoga

Shekhar:Haan.Ja ja agar mein tumse apni office aane keliye kahoon toh tu nahi aa saktha friend ke saath ghumne chala ja kisi kaam ka nahi hain yeh ladka

Neelu:Ab bas bhi kijiye na
Shekhar:Neelu mein kahan kuch kehna chahtha hoon

Anurag got up went away.

Neelu:Ab dekhiye voh bina chay piye chala gaya
Shekhar:Acha hain

Robindo was sitting all listen to all conversation going around there.

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Anurag walking towards his room.

RING...!!! RING...!!!:His mobile rang.

Anurag:Hello...
Voice:I'm ADC bank manager.I've to talk to you about the loan you applied.
Anurag:Yeah pls tell me
Manager:Can u pls come to bank at 6.30pm
Anurag:Sure I'll be on time.

He hang the call.

Anurag:Ab kya nayi museebath hogi.Uff...!!

He went his room and soon get on with his laptop.

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Time:6.00pm

At Taani's house.Someone knocked on her door.She opened it.

Kalpana Basu(Same one Tere liye): Mouli's mom.She treats Taani as her child

Taani:Arre maa. aap
Kalpna:Mouli ne bathaya ki tu aagayi hain
Taani:Kal raath ki train tha
Kalpna:Sheethal nahi aaye..?

Taani looked down.

Kalpna:Ab mujhe yahi khata rahogi kya..?
Taani:Arre ander ayiye na aur ab aap kaisi hain
Kalpna:Teek hoon
Taani:Hmmm...
Kalpna:Mouli ne kaha aaj teri pehli audition
Taani:Hain maa
Kalpna:Time kaunsa hain..?
Taani:Saath baje
Kalpna:Arre ab che baj chuki hain
Taani:Koi baath nah aap baitiye na
Kalpna:Nahi mein yeh kehna keliye aayi ki tum humari ghar se khana khana teek hain
Taani:Nahi maa voh yeh mera ghar aur mujhe apne baba saath milthe hain jab mein yahan hoon
Kalpna:Lekin mein tumse sirf...
Taani:Pls maa
Kalpna:Acha baba teek hain

Taani smiled.

Kalpna:Ab mein chaloon
Taani:Abhi abhi toh aaye hain
Kalpna:Ab Mouli ke baba aajayenge
Taani:Teek hain
Kalpna:Best of luck for the auditiion
Taani:Thank you.

Kalpna went.

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Time:6.30

Anurag in the cabin of ADC Bank Manager.

Anurag:Mein iske bare mein baba se baath nahi karoonga..?
Manager:Mein ne kaha na aapse ek baar Shekhar Ganguly hojaye toh surity hojayegi
Anurag:Mein ne surity keliye Rajeev ko apna guarantee banaya kya yeh kaphi nahi hain
Manager:Aur bank aapko joh apne manga uske 50% dene keliye theyar hain
Anurag:Teek aap mujhe voh 50% dijiye baki mein adjust karoonga
Manager:Ek call ki toh baath hain Anurag
Anurag:Plsss...

He went out angrily

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At Taani's house... Taani getiing ready for the audition... She could feel someone closed her eyes from behind.

Taani:Mouli...
Mouli:Chale...
Taani:Haan

Taani and Mouli set to studio as well as Anurag.

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In studio... the whole ambiance of beautiful songs.Anurag was walking through the corridor suddenly some girl slipping from her heel hit him and both fell down.Anurag couldn't see her face bcause of her long shine fall on her face.

Anurag:Dekh ke nahi chal sakhi kya..? baki logon ko bhi pareshan karne keliye aayegi ghar se...

Finally the girl stood up and put her long hair backwards.It was Taani

Taani: Dekhiye I'm so sorry

But Anurag was just looking at her face and admiring beauty.He could here a beautiful song resounding in his ears.


Saachi saachi teri nazrein ek darpan
Dede mann ki yeh khabrein ek pal chin
Adharon ne kuch na kaha re
Naino ne keh diya
Tune toh pal bhar mein chori kiya re jiya mora jiya
Tune bhi pal bhar mein chori kiya re jiya more piya

Anurag:Very beautiful
Taani:Ji...?

He came to his sense.

Anurag:Mein gane ki baath kar raha tha.I'm so sorry mujhe dekh kar chalna chahiye theAap ko kuch hua toh nahi na..?
Taani:Mein teek hoon Sorry again
Anurag:Lagtha hain aap mujhe bhool gayi hain
Taani:Yaad hain mujhe...agar uss waqt aap nahi hothe toh shayad...
Anurag:Mujhe laga ki...

"Heyy Onu":-Nupur called from behind.He went hugged her and Taani thought how could he hug in a public place.When Anurag turned he couldn't Taani.

Anurag:Arre voh chali gayi tu bhi na Nupur
Nupur:Kaun..? Voh ladki jisse tum baath kar rahe the
Anurag:Haan...ab kaise..?
Nupur:Kya hua betab ho rahe ho..?
Anurag:Aisa kuch bhi nahi hain
Nupur:Us ladki ka nam Tina hain na😛
Anurag(in a second):Nahi voh Taani hain

Nupur laughed.Anurag felt that he has fooled her.

Anurag:Mera mazak uda rahi thi.
Nupur:Mein sab dekh raha usko tujse takrana aur tu usse maafi mang raha hain

Anurag smile.

Anurag:Ab chalogey bhi..?
Nupur:Haan chal.


On the way...Anurag saw...

Sheethal was getting to the studio and Taani was sitting in the front seat.She got up when she saw Sheethal.

Taani:Maa... aap..?

Sheethal told nothing,.

Taani:Aaj meri pehli audition hain mujhe aapki ashirbad chahiye maa

Sheethal:Tu ne kya soch kar rakha ek raath mein tu apni zindagi badal dalegi aur toh aur mein yahan tumhe ashirbad dene keliye nahi aayi hain aapne rent lene keliye aaya tha.Lagtha hain ab tari shakal dekhne ke baath voh bhi naseed nahio hone wale

Taani's eyes filled with tears.

Mouli:Aap agar iss ashirbad dene nahi chahiye toh math dijiye lekin aisa kyun keh rahe hain aap
Sheethal:Kyun uss ne mujhe MAA bulaya

Sheethal went angrily.


Anurag:Shayad bauhath badi problem hain Nupur
Nupur:Kya teri life ki problem kam hain?

He gave a vague smile.

Anurag:Lekin uss ne mujhse kaha ki voh anath hain
Nupur:Tu chal Onu

They went.

Mouli:Tu fikr math kar Taani tujhe patha voh asi hi hain
Taani:Hmmm... chale.

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Anurag and Nupur at Rajeev's room.

Anurag:Tum ne mujhe kyun bulaya Raj
Rajeev:Haan voh bank manager ne mujhe phone kiya tha uss ne mujhe sab kuch bathaya
Nupur:Arre voh manage pagal hain
Anurag:Ab kya kare Raj mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha hain
Nupur:Tu fikr math kar sab teek hojayega
Anurag:Arre agar paisa milegi tab sab teek hoga na warna mein agle month apna project ...
Rajeev:Sab hogaya lekin iss keliye thoda adjust karna padega
Anurag:Tu kehna kya chahtha hain ki baba se...
Rajeev:Nahi yaar mein yeh keh raha hoon ki voh baki 50% mein doonga

Anurag and Nupur looked at eachother.

Anurag:Lekin...
Nupur:Is mein kya galath hain Anurag
Rajeev:Joh museebath meri vajah se hui hain bas mein voh solve kar raha hoon
Nupur:Haan Onu mujhe bhi lag rahi hain yehi ek solution
Anurag:Teek hain lekin mein tumhe voh paise mein lautadoonga with interest amount
Rajeev:Apni dosthi ka keemath..?
Anurag:Arre aisa mein kab kaha
Rajeev:Hum interest sab ke baare mein baath mein sochenge
Anurag:But...
Rajeev:There isnt a but

Someone knocked at the door.

Rajeev:Yes come in.

The door opened.It was Taani

Rakeev( to Taani):Andar jayiye aap
Tani:Ji...

She went to a room indide where is set of studio.Anurag watched her till she go inside.

Nupur:Taani ..Taani all raound... hain na Anurag
Anurag:Chup...!!!

Rajeev:Anurag what you say..?
Nupur(low voice) :Haan bolo Onu shayad Taani teri luck charm hogi
Anurag:Tu bhi na
Rajeev:So?
Anurag:Teek hain
Nupur:So nice of you

Rajeev:Acha 5 minute ki Kam hain abhi aaya phir hum saath chale jayenge
Anurag:Teek hain

Rajeev went inside where Taani went.That room was having glass door.Anurag stood up and went near to the door.Nupur took a megazine and started to read.

Anurag saw Taani was being so nervous and tears fall from her eyes.

Inside...

Rajeev:Pls mera time aap barbad math kijiye agar aap ga sakthi hain toh pls otherwise pls go.
Taani:I'm sorry sir.

She started to walk out.Anurag who was seeing all this moved aside not to make Taani more upset.

Rajeev came following her.Taani went out of the room.

Rajeev:Baki logon ko paresan karne aayegi ghar se
Anurag:Tu kis ki baath kar raha
Rajeev:Kuch nahi
Rajeev took his bag and took a cheque from the back and signed on it.

Rajeev:Yeh lo aur apna kaam shuru karo

Anurag took the cheque.

Anurag:Thanks yaar
Rajeev:Friendship mein no sorry no thnx tu hi kehtha hain na
Nupur:Ab chale..?
Rajeev and Anurag : Okkk


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That night Anurag as well as Taani could not sleep well.If Anurag excited on fulfilling dreams then Taani was drowned to sadness of loosing her dream


Precap:

Taani:I think he is an absolute filrt
Mouli:Kya tum Anurag Ganguly ke bate Shekhar Ganguly ka baath kar rahi hain ...!!
Taani 😲
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Finally...
Im the 1st to comment ...
Awesome one... both u and di are doing a gr8 FF...
Just love it all the way...
And the precap sounds interesting ...
And Im feeling so sad for Taani... and her mom Sheetal... Ab plll jaldi update karna ohk...
I have the least patience level...
And Im so happy for Anu... Hes already started liking Taani...😳
Thanx for the PM...

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