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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
hahahahah!!

lovely awesome FF

hillarious precap!!

do add me to ur PM list
plzz do cont son
Edited by thejazzgal.s - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: -Hina-

Oh Wow, Lovely FF ! 👏 Love the first part ! 👏 Nice start, keep it up the great work ! + the dialogs are too good, and funny too ! 😆😉 Egearly waiting for the next update !

Thnx for the PM, and add me in ur PM list ! 😳


Haha XD

thanks 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: thejazzgal.s

hahahahah!!

lovely awesome FF

hillarious precap!!

do add me to ur PM list
plzz do cont son


Sure.Thanks 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Thank you so much for all your support guys.Its been really sweet of you all. Thanks a lot again. X)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Scene:That night,Anu is sitting in his room with his mates Jay and Karan.

Jay: Ab mujhse ye kaam aur nahi hota yaar.
Anu: Business bores anyone to death.
Karan: Hmm..
Anu: Suggestion doon?
Jay: Mujhe pata hai tu mujhe kahega.."Jay,jao aur apney papa ko resignation letter de do"
Karan: Main bhi wahi kahunga..why do you want to do something you don't like?
Anu: You got me wrong beta. Is baar,merey paas ek cooler idea hai.
Karan: Aur who kya hai?
Anu: Alternative.Koi aur job dhoondh.
Karan: Haan..jaisey bar dancing,DJ,bartender.. 😆 😆
Jay: Chup kar saley.
Anu: Guys!!! Jokes apart..tu taskforce join karna chahta hai na? Toh jakey boldo uncle ko.
Jay: Dude..itna aasan nahi hai.Sab terey baap jaisey thori hotey hai.. 😆
Anu: Oh hello..mera ek bhai hai.Jo mera baap ka bhi baap hai. 😆
Jaya: Dad nahi manegey.
Anu: Tujhe kaisey pata? Tu ney try kiya? Nahi na! Give it a try boy.
Jay: Ah,mujhe jana hai dude.
Karan: Kaha bey?
Jay: Abhey..arey Leo(dog) ko doctor ko paas legana hai. Monthly check up. 😆
Karan: Saley! tu aur tera kutta. 😆
Jay: Abey usey kutta mat kaho.
Jay: Kutta ko kutha nahi toh bhagwan kahu?😆 😆Arey Anu tu aa na bey jatin ki party mein..
Anu: Can't bhai.You guys have fun.Nighty night.
Scene: Next morning, everyone is in the hall eagerly waiting for the Baneerjees.
Arjun: Ankita..please jao aur Anu ko uthao.
Adi: Pehle ye check karlo ki ghar main hai ki nahi... 😆 😆
Arch: Tum chup raho adi.Woh roz aisey jay ki yaahaan thori na rahega.Soo raha hai upar.
Just then the Bannerjees enter.Shekar hugs Bemul and Neelu hugs Laboni.The Baneerjees are greeted warmly.Everyone is sitting on the sofa and having tea.
Neelu: Taani kitni baadi hogai.
Laboni: Haan..arey..anu kaha hai?
Adi: Soo raha hai maa.Woh belkul nahi badla. Arch..abhi toh usey uthao.
Bemul: Arey..nahi nahi.Soney do usey.
Laboni: Haan..kya tum log uskey neend kharab karney mein lagey hua ho.
Shekar: Aur batao taani..kaisa hai Mumbai?
Taani: Amazing papa..bahut acha hai.Kal set pe gayi thi.Kal lyrics,tune vagera dekhney.
Neelu: Kal hi aye tum log?
Taani: Sirf main aye thi maa,mera ek dost hai yahaa pe.To uskey saath rahey thi.
Shekar: Acha.
Taani: Anu kya karta hai?
Arjun:Enjoy karta hai. Subah utha hai..matlab afternoon ko utha hai. Aur lunch ke time pe breakfast karta hai..bahar jata hai..fir raat ko ata hai. Agar janab ka mood nahi hai toh agli subah wapas ata hai. 😆 😆 😆
Taani: Hahahaha. Nahi nahi..main ye pooch rahi thi ki who kya padha hai?
Neelu: MBA kiya hai. Media and Entertainment mein.
(Anu enters)
Neelu: Lo..batoon main hi agaya. Anu..ye taani hai.
Taani: Maa..Ye anu hai?
Neelu: Aisey kyu pooch rahi hai?
Taani: Arjun bhaiya..aapney toh anu key schedule mey spot boy ka kaam key barey mein mention nahi kiya!. 😆 😆
Everyone: KYA?
Ankita: Kya? Tum sach kah rahi ho?
Taani: Haan..kal merey paas aya tha.Ye kehney ki liye ki sound system ko ready ho ney mein time lagega.
Anu: Nahi..main tooh...😲
Arjun: Bas! Kuch mat bolo. 😆
Arch: Dekho Adi..sab terey wajah sey.. 😆
Adi: merey vajah sey?
Ankita: Aur nahi toh kya bhaiya?
Arch: Haan..Sab tumhare vajah sey.Tumhe aur Arjun ko itna mehnat kartey huey bechara nahi dekh paya. 😆
Arjun: Haan..aur iisliye anu bhi kaam karney laga.
Neelu: Tabhi toh main sonchu ki aaj kal anu mujhse paisey kyu nahi maang raha hai. 😆
Anu: (Yelling ) BAS! Listen up! Main koi spot boy ka kaam nahi karta hoon. Main vaha shooting dekhney gaya. Taani ki paas main choreographer ki barey main poochney gaya,it was just a misunderstanding.
Aditya: Janab shooting dekhney niley aur merey patni toh mujhe pe inzaam laga rahi hai. 😆 😆
(They discuss and clear the matter and laugh it off)

Precap:

scene: Anu,Jay,Karan,Jatin are sitting on the sofa..

Anu: Arey..mujhe sach batana nahi chaiye tha.Bhabhi na bhai ki aisey waat laga rahi thi ki bas poocho mat. 😆 😆
(Aditya enters)
Adi: Kuch kaam-dhaam karogey ya bas aisey hi ghar mein bhaikey jo hua uskey barey mein soonchtey rahogey?







Edited by pravschills - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
hey nice update..luved d way taani and anurag met each other and d way his brother tells anurag's daily routine..continue writing...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
🤣🤣🤣..........loved the episode..
it was really good...full of fun...thanks for the update dear😳...waiting for the next one..😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Nikita_David

hey nice update..luved d way taani and anurag met each other and d way his brother tells anurag's daily routine..continue writing...


😆 😆 Just trying to write a romantic-comedy FF. Hope its working 😊

Thanks 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: deeps07

🤣🤣🤣..........loved the episode..
it was really good...full of fun...thanks for the update dear😳...waiting for the next one..😍



Sure.1 episode per day.I ll update it at night.Love you all for your support.Thanks for reading 😊
Edited by pravschills - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
Character Sketch : Page 1
Episode 1 : Page 1
Episode 2 : Page 7
Episode 3 : Page 10

Well,this is a romantic comedy of two couples,Taani-Anurag and Jay-Shaina.I hope you guys accept the fact that I will focus on Jay as much as I do on Anurag.

much love xx



Edited by pravschills - 14 years ago

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