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-scarlett-

@-scarlett-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

Aisshhuuu!! Girl you blowed my mind...

please take my advise and write a book of series...

I will buy each copy by god!! The shots were written so well

I felt I was going to faint any second..

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#82

edited my work as someone plaglarised it i dont want to post it , its so cheap when you write something and find others posting the same thing a month later at other section thinking no one will know m disheartened

Edited by aishwaryagayen - 14 years ago

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kasturika ghosh

@kasturika_kashu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#83

beautiful aishwariya......beautiful....the way u expressed the feelings.....hats off to u....loved it......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 am just imagining the scenes....and.....uufff...haye........😍

Edited by kaasshh - 15 years ago

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Afreen

@asyasahil928

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#84

wow....amazing shot...loved it...👏

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-scarlett-

@-scarlett-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#85

AWESOMEAMAZINGMINDBLOWINGRRAPATROCKINGBHAPKAFABBULOUSOVERWHELMING 🤗

Edited by 0711rokxoxo - 15 years ago

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431362

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Posted: 15 years ago

#86

Aishu dear, you won't have any idea, how much it suits me... 😲
This is the best inner feeling that was brought out... 👏
Esp. those height part, wow, it suites me like anything... 😳
I cannot reveal anything out here now but it's just an awesome one... 😳
My hugs to you and it was very pretty line by line... 👏
And thank you, for not ending it tragic... 😆
Love,
Nafee.

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Keanufan

@Keanufan

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#87

Aishu I know its been a long time since I was online...so forgive me plz...
Here are my favourite bits..
#She was happy, but every time She laid her eyes on couples She often stared in awe and adoration. She wanted something like what they had. Not just a fling, not just a date, but a serious relationship, a companion, a best friend.
You are a 15 yr old but the way you write sometimes makes me awestruck at your sense of maturity...
#A knight in shining armor was too much to ask for, these days.
Brilliant one..its a truth,
#Despite her friends, her family, her books and her lovely stories, She was lonely.
So now I know why Aishu told me some adys ago that she is still lonely...hehe
#It sounded right to her, for a man to be taller and bigger than a woman, so that she could fit into his arms just right and he could protect her and keep her warm.
This was really amazing..the reasoning..and the woman's desire..or so to say a feminine desire...applicable in general to all...
#She wasn't aware She was emanating.
It seems like you have been in deep love with someone at some point in your life.It could have been a crush or an infatuation...but the more I am reading it the more I get this feeling that these emotions are not just a writer's but also of a girl who has fallen for someone at some point of time..and has felt the pangs of pain...to see that love part her
#How She hated him. How She hated what He was doing to her. He was tugging on her heart; a child with a toy. But her heart was not a toy. If it were played with too roughly, it would bleed.
I think Anurag's charcter sketch couldn't have been any better than this....Wonderful character-building...and as always you will tend to highlight Anu...hehe...Its irresistible isn't it...Reminds me of Bella teling Edward I hate your driving....haha
#He was beautiful, dynamic and alluring – a male siren if She had ever seen one. He was the one thing She loved to hate, and hated to love
The second half of this sentence...I mean Aishu...where on earth do you have so much knowledge of such intricate details of a realtionship...Kudos to you for this one...
#She felt it, then. She felt Him. She desperately hoped beyond hopes that She was right. That, by some miracle, her fairytale would come true. But when did they ever?
So here comes Tragedy waving her flag....I don't know if fairy-tales come true but i surely wish n pray that if you had ever dreamed of a fairy-tale...may it turn out true in your life...
#Only in the movies.
Haha.lol...
#To get a rainbow, you have to get through the rain first, right?
Classic one-liner Aishu...Classic....
#When She lowered her eyes, He stood there in front of her.
I have never felt so romantic since a long,long,long time.....words can't describe what I just felt on reading this line..and as usual you give a wonderful description of the weather.
#TAANI FOUND HER RAINBOW THE ANURAAG
Good allegory....
I was left wondering why wasn't this a tragic one??
Wonderful start especially about what a girl feels...
I was hoping to have a twist when I read there are no fairy-tales in real life...but for a change this one ended on a happy note....Nonetheless it was a delight reading it...And I guess you have a knack of writing really well about Lover Birds...so be it Tragic or Happy you flip sides really well....and I find the way you merged the first 4 lines into the climax..really comendable...Are they lines from a poem?or lyrics from a song....I suggest you should never quit writing....you have an unmatched flare for describing characters in a really simple way...
Gr8 effort...I guess this OS is something coming straight out from your personal experiences...Hope I am not wrong?😉

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: kaasshh
beautiful aishwariya......beautiful....the way u expressed the feelings.....hats off to u....loved it......👏 am just imagining the scenes....and.....uufff...haye........😍

heyy sweety thnks for liking nd reading m gladd nd huff u just imagining now nd i kind of imagine the thngs for harshad frm like 3 yrs bckk m maddd tc nd keep droolingg