TWINJ 2s:'Drenched & Dried'

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Posted: 9 years ago
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😳2500 posts complete.Well...This post is for my 2500 post & also for my first TWINJ story.
So,Here I Present my first story & its dedicated to Queen,ESHU,Aditi di,Kiara,Sanju,Doc,Nvl,Athira,Anjum,Jhanvi,Sakshisays,Harshi,Lina,Taanya,Shreya,Sayli,Shriti,Tricky,Dinky...
My whole Crazy khandaan.I hope I didn't miss any name😆.Sorry If I did.

TWINJ 2s
Drenched & Dried

A " " presentation

After So much hardships...misunderstandings...pains...
Rocky accepted that he is Kunj.And the Credit for making The Rock hard Rocky accept his being KUNJ Sarna goes to Sherni Twinkle.She is the person who made the impossible possible with her TWINKLE touch.
A mother got her son back.A house got its heir back..Bebe got his Gabru Jawan back.The brother company was back & it was evident beacause the good for nothing Cherry was on the verge of crying.
It was all getting better & like the happy times..
But there's one thing which couldn't get back to old happy times.Not so soon so easily.That was TWINJ.May be Twinkle could be back to being Twinkle Taneja,KUNJ may get back as KUNJ Sarna but getting back together like the old happy times will not only require time but also patience,repair, healing,love & above all TRUST & UNDERSTANDING.After all it was the distrust & misunderstanding which destroyed the peace of lives & brought in Such indescribable havoc.

The great Yuvraaj Luthra or better say the New born Yuvraaj luthra signed the divorce papers to unite twinkle & kunj.Though Yuvi had signed it a part of his heart wanted twinkle to slap him hard for signing the papers & pull him into a hug & say "I'll live with u only Yuvi".But reality & dreamy wishes hardly match so he sacrificed his Love Twinkle for the sake of Love,for the sake of his Love for TWINKLE.Yuvi thanked babaji for making him understand what Love actually meant.And ofcourse also didn't forget to tell babaji to give Twinkle all the happiness in life.

Then the next morning,
Twinkle woke up after a nap as she wasn't able to sleep the whole night & weariness forced her eye lids shut close at early hours of dawn.
Twinkle turned left to take her phone when she saw a file.A black file.
Twinkle:What's this?
Openining the file...She was shocked.
Twinkle (in mind):Again they have done what they want.Why can't they just ask me what I want.
She goes downstairs.
There she finds the whole family both Sarnas & tanejas including the two Confusion of her life KUNJ Sarna & Yuvraaj Luthra.
Kunj was lost in thouhts & Yuvraaj was fighting tears to smile.

Showing ignorance to all & everything
Twinkle annonced in firm unbroken voice:"So,I can see more than half of the entire world is worried for me & my happiness.And that's not all they r so worriedly impatient & ignorant that they just don't bother what I want or think.
I telling this now & I won't be repeating it;I m not Twinkle Sarna or Twinkle Luthra.I m TWINKLE TANEJA.I have an identity an entity of my own.Do you get it!".The last three lines were meant specially for kunj & yuvi and her tone made it sure that the words hit their both ears & mind well.

Now looking at kunj & Yuvi she said:For God's sake give me some space.Let me Breathe.

Kunj was hurt guilty broken shattered.He knew he is the one.His misunderstanding is the reason of creating such mess in Twinkles life, in his twinkles life.
Kunj decided to obey her words & give her space.Twinkle also wanted to on With her life & got admitted in the Business institution.

But Two things were unknown to twinkle.One was Kunj's hand in getting her admiited & the other was Jassi.

Days went by when one day kunj came to know about Jassi's truth.But kept mum thinking about twinkles happiness.
But fate had some other plan.

The very next day of kunj's knowing Jessi's truth twinkle came to know about it when she accidently fell & twisted her ankle near jassis house.So jassi took twinkle to his house.There she noticed fake beard & got to know everything.

But our Sherni avoided going to Yuvi straight rather she went to Kunj.

When twinkle reached Sarna house Kunj was a little confused cum happy.
Kunj:What happened twinkle?
Twinkle didn't answer.She was looking at kunj continuously.This made kunj even more confused.
Kunj again asked ,"Are you fine TWINKLE? "
This time out Siyaappa queen opened her mouth.
Twinkle:What do you think kunj?
Kunj :What?
Even though In the back of his mind he was scared thinking about what Will be her reaction of she comes to know that he knew about yuvis truth.

Twinkle:How's my dress..?Am I looking good?
This broke his chain of thoughts.
Kunj (boggled):ha...!
It's not that kunj was boggled with her question but the Furious Sherni look & continuous stare was really...Dangerous.
Kunj:Yeah...umm..mm..yeah...u r looking beautiful just like my Siyapp..
Kunj stopped.And his eyes became glassy & this didn't go unnoticed by Twinkle.
Twinkle:Like what?
kunj:You r looking pretty twinkle.
Both were looking at eo.
The pain in his eyes were visible.
Twinkle:Why didn't u tell me about yuvis truth?
Kunj (shocked):What truth...Yuvi. ..Where did he come from?
Twinkle:Why do u even try?
Kunj:kya?
Twinkle:Lying.You can't lie kunj.Mujhse to bilkul nehi.So why this try.
Kunj:I m really not getting ur words twinkle.
Saying this he turned around to avoid twinkles gaze & eye contact.But twinkle being twinkle came infront of him again.
Kunj (in mind):How can I forget she has got legs!beautiful legs..
Twinkle :Where r u lost?If u don't tell me the truth I'll kiss u & I mean it Kunj..!
With this Sherni started moving forward & sher backward.Now they were really close & not inches apart but centimeters apart.
Kunj (all on a sudden):Yes..
Kunj distanced himself by making twinkle move a bit away from him in the most possible humble way.

Twinkle was eyeing him lovingly while his eyes were trying to find gem in his own shoes.

Twinkle then left to her next important stop leaving a sad Kunj behind.Kunj was this much guilty that he couldn't even stop twinkle.his twinkle.

Kunj was standing right there where he was when twinkle left his room.He was standing like a distraught,a frozen statue.
He was brought back to reality by the ring of his cell phone.It's a msg from principal regarding official stuff.

Not being able to take things any more he went for a cold shower.But that didn't help either.The restlessness didn't go.To his utter disappointment even his best friend Mr.Sleep was also betraying him.To keep him busy he started arranging the already arranged books.There one book caught his attention.
Kunj went close to have a better look & found a small round black ornament box just beside the book.Actually it's not a book.
It's was a Diary at the extreme and of the shelf with a box beside it.Kunj took the diary in hand & opened the box before opening the diary.In that process few papers fell from that diary near his legs.Kunj didn't notice at first because what he saw inside the box made him numb.It was Twinkies Mangalsutra that he gave her.Everything every memory came alive infront of his eyes like flashes.

After the walk down the memory lane he came back to reality & picked up the papers & kept them in the drawer without a proper glance .Then he opened the diary.ButThere was nothing in the diary.It was Blank Empty.Just dates were wtitten at the top of each page.Kunj found this a bit weird but didn't fail to recognize twinkle's handwriting.
To keep the diary he opened the drawer & those fallen papers were staring at him along with a few more papers.Kunj unknowingly kept looking at those papers for some time before taking them out of the drawer.
He found that the papers were a bit drenched & dried. Leaving all thoughts aside he started reading the words wrtten on the papers.

1st piece of drenched & Dried paper:
It's me who can
Get lost in the Essence

It's me who can come back with the Essence

It's me who believe in
Your Presence

It's me who Desires
Your Presence

It's me who Imagines
Your Presence
It's me who Lives in
Your Presence
Breathes in your Presence,your Essence.

Its me Waiting-
For your Presence
Its me whose life is nothing but hollow
Without Your Presence.
It's me who was,is & will be Waiting till the Ends of time,
For Your Presence.

It's the Hope,Dream,Belief & Imagination of Your Presence,
That I am Living,Breathing,Smiling,Crying,
Hoping, Waiting
For Your Presence.


2nd piece of drenched & dried paper:
I live you...
I love you...
I live our love every single day...
With the Hope of finding you one day...
With the belief of being together as one one day..

3rd piece of drenched & dried paper:
Let the NIGHT-
Bear the tears;
Let the SUN-
Dry the tears;
Let the Smile-
Be on
Which the people Admires.

Enough.Kunj couldn't hold any longer.Tears rolling down continuosly.He wanted to scream.He wanted to take all the pain away.He wished to go back, reverse time & fix everything but that was just not possible in Reality.
He felt like killing himself at that moment for being the cause of such Pain & misery in his Twinkle's life.Now he understood why the papers were Drenched & Dried.They were Drenched in Tears & Dried in the Painful air of Lonliness & emptiness.

Meanwhile,Twinkle was done with Yuvi confrontation with a slap hard & right enough to bring him to reality.

Closing the bring Yuvi to Reality project twinkle took a step forward to complete the Next most important project of her life which was her life.Her KUNJ. Her Reason to breathe.


While driving to Sarna mansion an idea knocked the door of her Brain.And a smile captured her lips which was not at all innocent but Naughty.
"You are in for some pleasurable surprise with a touch of prank my love",said twinkle to herself.

After reaching the Main Entrance of Sarna Mansion she stopped her car for a while then went to taneja house to park her car.
Then she very carefully reached Kunjs room avoiding Usha & evryone's eye.

There the sight presented to her was shocking would be an understatement.
She saw kunj lying in bed with eyes closed but swallowed enough for twinkle to understand that he has been crying his heart out.Twinkle went close to him & kissed his eyes.

Carefully without distubing his sleep twinkle took the papers from his clutch which are now drenched with his tears too & kept them in the drawer.
She knew kunj loved her with all his heart & these piece of papers broke his heart into pieces.
She wiped the tears which jumped from the balcony of her eyes.And took a deep breathe to get ready for her mission.Her plan cum prank.

Now it's time to put her plans into action.


P.S:I never thought I'll be able to write something that will be readable but Queen (sakshi) changed this thought of mine.She not only changed my idea but also Made me write.And I did.My first piece of writing was a part of "Salamat Rahe"which is Queen's story.It's because of the Stubbornness of Queen that I dared to write.And I can't thank you Enough.
A part of my heart always wanted to write & its funny but true that I wanted a story under my name in the Media gallery..
Tomatoes & Eggs r welcomed as it'll nourish my skin & hair.Do leave a comment to let me know if it was worth reading...good...bad...worse...worst...


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adi_FMT_ct thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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R😃
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Shav...
what is this???😲
I guess it's your 2nd writing.
This is soo well matured writing.

Love it's each part though I most admire the drenched and dried diary papers.
Simply amazing.👏

Also you caught the original story flavour
This is beautiful.
Waiting for next part.
& Pasta
Thanks you dedicated this story to our crazy khandan.
And Special thanks to Saks.
🤗
Edited by adi_FMT_ct - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ress
Will unress after the tears stop flowing from my eyes!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was superb dear unbelivable its ur first story i loved it thoroughly u know i always wanted someone to write something like this after leap wala story n twinkle forgiving kunj n going back ti him but never got one i really really loved ur story i just left the hope that someone will come up wid this type of story but u r a star man love u a loads for this
Do update soon ha 2nd part
ps- thanku queen for encouraging ao well that had resulted in a treat for me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it was just a beautiful story . I always wanted a story after leap especially this jassi ka khulsa I was writing one but then I dropped the idea, it is better actually the bestest thing that could have happened in the show, I just wish it could have happened, par cv's ke pas dimag kahan. Her letter, poem whatever it was made my eyes well up, it was just so touchy, so beautiful, I'm in love with ur writing plz do write more, lo hogi meri bakwass, and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow! This is exceptionally good. Great Infact
No one would believe that this is your first time writing a story
Wonderfully written and tragically beautiful. Loved the poems too

Great work buddy👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pasta yay hamari pasta 😳 badi ho gayi.
Pasta this was so beautiful just like u nd ur beautiful heart.
Thank u for for dedicating this to entire crazy t khandaan.
Love u pasta baby 😉
Keep writing more stories baby of the house pasta.
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Snuggles🤗
I'm so glad that you decided to write something
This was amazinggg!
Everything made so much sense and I loved the concept...
Now I really wanna know whats twinkle's plan😆
I think now I should start calling you 'my enchantress' 😉
Continue soon...

Kudos to Queenie!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow shavs ...
It was ❤️
...those lines on the papers..
Were beautiful...
I just loooved them...

Why were u hiding ur talent from soo long...u write beautifully..

I am waiting to know about her plan... I know its gonna be something dhamakedaar

Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg shavs I am so happy to see a written piece of yours...when I first saw the pm I was too excited to read and my excitement was really wonderfully payed off by ur beautiful writing...I am awestruck ..Love u for this girl...And I am waiting for next...btw sorry for late comment.
Love u ,
Jhanvi
Edited by J.arora - 8 years ago

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