TEI OS -Zindagi bhar rehna tum saath mere

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Twinkle: promise karo kunj...hum humesha saath rehenge...har kadam pe...tum kabhi mere saath nahi chodoge...
Kunj: I promise twinkle...
...
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The car stopped..driver came out and opened the door for the lady ...she was in her trance..
"madam" the driver said...breaking her trance..
She looked up...took her handbag..and made her way into the saran mansion..not before plastering a smile across her face..
...
"chaachi" she heard ishaan's voice as she came in...
"hi ishaan" she said hugging him..
"chaachi...aap bhulgaye?..."
"haaw...mein kaise bhul sakti hu ...ye lo .."she said giving him a two big bars of chocolates .
"thank you chaachi" said ishaan .
"mein tode dher mein aati hu..."said twinkle ..
...
After dinner she talked to manohar regarding few business matters and went back to their room ...sat on the big yellow chair with her laptop and finished the remaining work...
The door creek opened and she saw him enter the room...
"Abhi tak soyi nahi?"he asked..
"Neend nahi aa rahi hai" she said keeping her laptop on the table in front of her..
"par mujhe toh badi neend aa rahi hai.." he said as he made his way to the bed...and he continued "aur mujeh pata hai ki tumhe bhi neend aa rahi hai...mere liye wait kar rahi thi na"
She smiled lightly as she got on the bed and snuggled close to him.
Pulling the comforter over them..she said..."jab pata hai ..toh phir itne late kyu aate ho?"
He chuckled and said "sorry".
"Aur batao siyapaa queen..aaj tumne kitne siyape kiye?"he asked
"correction ..ab main siyaapa queen nahi rahi...mein ab bas tumhari queen hu...so zero siyaape"she said hugging him.
"acha baba...par mere liye tum hamesha meri siyaapa queen hi rahogi "he said placing a soft kiss on her forehead.
"Kunj" she called out very slowly..
"haan bolo"
"phir mujeh chod kar nahi jaoge na?" she asked as she hugged him tightly...
She dozed of waiting for the reply...
...
@Mrng..
Twinkle wokeup...slowly turned to other side...
...she took the photo frame on the side table
She smiled looking at the photo
"good morning kunj "she said as she kissed the photo frame...
She looked at it for few more mins... and put it back
She got down the bed...and thought..."apna promise kyu tod diya kunj" ...





Ho sake toh rehna tum saath mere...


Zindagi bhar rehna tum saath mere...







'''''''''' ... '''''''''' ... '''''''''' ...''''''''''


ummm...u can use tomatoes...no eggs plz...and shoe size...ermm...leave it...and no glass articles plz...(though i have a helmet on for safety...😎)...
i feel..many wud b confused ..(my writing skills are horrible..😆)
so ...for your clarity...this is after kunj's death...(no yuvle shaadi bakwas here😳)

and no eggs plz...only tomatoes...

and...plz feel free to correct my mistakes(grammatical mistakes...both in hindi and eng😛)

and plz forgive me...for this bakwas...i'm sholly😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohk ! So an emotional one !
It was nice !
Keep writing.. 👏🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Okay.. So an emotional one !
I like it.. It's nice.. Keep writing ! 👏🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shraja

Okay.. So an emotional one !

I like it.. It's nice.. Keep writing ! 👏🤗


ohh I am sorry for replying twice... Happened due to internet issues !😕😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sanju...
Amazing story..
Emotional it was😭
Plz do.write more..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shraja

Ohk ! So an emotional one !

It was nice !
Keep writing.. 👏🤗

Okay.. So an emotional one !
I like it.. It's nice.. Keep writing ! 👏🤗


no ande..no tamatar??...😃
haayee..i'm soo happy...
thankyou shriti..😃😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shraja


ohh I am sorry for replying twice... Happened due to internet issues !😕😕


lol..it's ok...i understand internet issues😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: amlavs

Sanju...

Amazing story..
Emotional it was😭
Plz do.write more..


thankyou soo much di..
i'm glad i didn't get tamatar and ande...
ty ty...🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was very nice!
The end 😭
Loved it!
Keep writing more!
No andas and tomatoes only🤗👏
Well written dear!👍🏼
Lots of love
Sayli
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetSau

This was very nice!

The end 😭
Loved it!
Keep writing more!
No andas and tomatoes only🤗👏
Well written dear!👍🏼
Lots of love
Sayli


ty sayli🤗
glad u liked it..
hein?tomatoes only?...nvm..😆
ty for the comment sis😳

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