TEI OS -Zindagi bhar rehna tum saath mere - Page 3

Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct

MERE Bhukkar...🤗

No Eggs or Tomatoes;Only this

Originally posted by: ..queen..

im sorry for comin in late
but my god sanju
you wrote this so well
the end was like,,...ouch !!
gosh, you have to write more
I demand it !!!
loved it

Originally posted by: Jambread3

--unres--
I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you so much 😭 😭
That's why I don't like reading sad stories,it has a great impact on me
From the very start I was like "awww" cause it was so adorable but the lines in the end literally pierced through my heart and gave me unwanted chills.
Having this kind of impact on the reader just shows that you're an amazing writer
No andas and tomatoes for your writing but for making me so emotional,I'll throw some at you 😆
Amazing job Sanju 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Cloudy_Noon

Aww that is so heart aching Sanju. Just loved it. Do write more.

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti

What's wrong with u????

Why do u wanna kill me with ur stories...

The story was so good...

Each n every line touched my heart...

The last part...

Kunj coming & TWINJ sleeping together then again the next moment it's not what I thought...it's painful...

this part specifically proved how good of a writer u are...

This was really good ...

Somewhere I could relate to this story as somewhere I know how difficult it is to be away from that person whom u Love the most but yet have to act happy for the sake of family members...

Love u sanju...do write more but not sad stories pls...happy one❤️

Originally posted by: crazyfan9_sanju

shavs...sachi...was it that good?..

thank you soo much shav...

i knw it's painful to accept that some u love the most is not with u anymore...

and...for any reason...u might show that u r happy..u moved on...but NO...it's not at all easy...

there is some sort of pain...which makes u want to scream out loud ...that pain wont fade away even after crying days together...

shavs...i have one more story...idk..sad or happy...but it's different...i don't know how to end it...so i'm waiting...for the perfect end...