Ficlet 8/50: I'm sorry I yelled at you - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
😲my god...what was this??
Mehwish...ur amazing...
got me close to tears
ur very talented mehwish...very!
thankyou very much for this story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its really awesome Mehwish
after reading those lines of ficlet I always have so many things in my mind but you always write something that's so different n unexpected
I loved this new POV approach
and his apology was so cute and Twinkle accepted it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: amlavs

Res

--unres--
Omg...
Wats this??
Luv u Buddy..
I got soo much emotional aft Reading this..
Speechless..
Apt title and the way u used it on the story..
U should be proud of urself for writing such wonderful stories..
Am loving it..
Waiting for next..

Thank you So much Lavanya Di!
I am glad my stories can evoke such emotions out of you!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: SweetSau

God di yeh kya tha!!

This was awesome rula diya aapne thanks for that!
I'm completely speachless I'll comment maybe later a larger comment but even if I don't all I want to say that this was just totally and completely amazing and I loved it a lot!
The emotions god!
Love you for this story!
You write such beautiful and different stories each time that leave me speachless!
God!
Loved it!
Was waiting for your story the whole day thought you won't post one today!
Okay I think yehi bohot lamba ho gaya so now I won't post another long comment and bore you!
Loved it!
Love
Sayli

Hayye hayye, Sayli!
Tu ne itna sweet sweet comment de kar mujhe ru la diya!
Thank you so much dear!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: ...Shakti...

this was so emotional and just so well written! i love how you incorporated "i'm sorry i yelled at you" as not just an apology but his plea for her to wake up! it was terrific!

amazing job, can't wait for the next one!

Thank you so much Shakti.
Glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: tikit

Mehwish it was truly heartwrenching and emotional.

Twinkle in hospital.
Kunj feels sorry for yelling at her.
Aww twinkle accepted kunjs apology.
Loved it.
The new approach emotional one is very nice.

Mehwish idk how to thank u for writing these ficlets and it reminds me abt. sidmin s twinj with good memories.
Ofc missing sidmin s twinj.
Mehwish continue with ficlets.
42 more ficlets to go. Yay.

Thank you so so much Eshu!
🤗
Well you can thank me by simply leaving down a comment. That's all I need😆
Love you buddy!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct

Res😃

Unres
Dear Mehwish,
You are evil.You took me in emotional land all of a sudden.
But I really love this.
This story is surely heart warming.
I felt the feeling of kunj's emotion without any vision.
Your writing is that good buddy.
By the way you bring in two favourite characters except Twinj.
Like it.
Looking forwad to your next story.😊

Dear Adi,
Yes, I am evil!😆😆
But I am the good kind of evil that is why I am sorry for getting you all emotional!
But I don't think you are complaining, right?

Thank you so much😳
Glad you liked this
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: ShikhaSharma19

How do you do this?? How do you write such beautiful stuff (I know I shouldn't be calling it stuff, because it is way beyond it).
So beautiful, so calm and so emotionally hitting.
Seriously, words are not gonna be enough for this piece'
Always loved to read, and hoping to continue reading more
Thanks for these amazing ficlets that you have been working on lately
You are awesome'

Its okay Sikha, you can call them stuff.😆😉 I don't mind
But thank you so much! Thank you so so much
🤗
Yea its taxing, writing one fic for everyday but all your kind feedback is worth it😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: kardooks

Once again I'm blown away, the way you depicted those emotions so real, so raw,

Lovely story yet again.

Thanks Karen!
Super duper glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Sdea

OMG mine one is here.🥳

Mehwish this was sooo beautiful.I was hoping from the title that this was angst filled and am sooo happpyyy that this was a sad one.
Every time you mentioned the hands of the clock i had to imagine a clock and the time lol😆
And the whole emotional front of kunj was so beautifully depicted. I honestly loved it soo much.
Waiting for the next one!!

Hey Sammy!
I am so so so happy that you liked it!
Ok, tbh I kind of wrote two versions for this, one was the cute one but then I thought lately most of my stories have been cute so I decided to down the angst path. I am so glad I did!😆

Thank you so much!

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