Ficlet 8/50: I'm sorry I yelled at you

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neverlandspirit

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Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Dibs.on.Sid
This was something else. You have a way with words. Heart touching! Very well written!!

Thank you😳

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: crazyfan9_sanju
😲my god...what was this??
Mehwish...ur amazing...
got me close to tears
ur very talented mehwish...very!
thankyou very much for this story...

This is my masterpiece!😆😆

No but seriously, glad you liked it!

Thank you so much😳

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: twinjlover9
its really awesome Mehwish
after reading those lines of ficlet I always have so many things in my mind but you always write something that's so different n unexpected
I loved this new POV approach
and his apology was so cute and Twinkle accepted it

Thank you so so much Buddy!

Glad you liked it!

Lol..i imagine the story going down one way and then my mind is like NO. And I end up writing something opposite to the initial idea😆

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

This was so emotional yet so beautiful

Very well written as always 👏

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

This is so perfect and beautifully heart breaking

Kunj repeating the same thing over and over was too many feels and then Twinkle waking up and saying it's okay, nah I can't. Why are these two so adorable?

Amazing ficlet once again!

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