Ficlet 4/50: It doesnt look like you'll need stitches - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Mehwish yaar.
This ficlet is bless dear.
I am laughing still now.TWINJ are adorbs.
And yes,the doc never want to visit them.😆
But who remove the stiches?I guess another doc.
I adore ur skill of story development in short span.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

BRUH TWINKLE MADE ME LAUGH SO MUCH I CANNOT! Kunj being exasperated was perfect! That dude should definitely get a bravery award at this!

The poor doctor though! I'm in stitches myself! This is perfect!

😆
Thanks dude!!
Yup, Kunj should defo get a bravery award fro putting up with Twinkle and her antics!!
Thanks again!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: docritu99

Res..
Will be back soon..

Unres..
Dude.. M speechless..
I can totally relate to it..😆😆

I m laughing more on condition of doctor.. 😆
PERFECT..!!
Each and every line was depicted with perfection..

You are raising my Standards high in search for my partner..
Y does Kunj has to be so perfect..

This was so so so adorable..
Their negotiation for icecream was so apt.. And as usuall kunj bowed down for her emotional atyachar..
Lovely..

Mehwish m being habitual to ur stories now..

Yoo 46 more to go.. N m already thinking what's going to happen with m after that..

Doc! Loll..i really want to know about your encounters with patients such as Twinkle!!😆😆
*Sigh* Don't we all need a Kunj in our lives!😳

Thanks. I am really happy you liked this!😃
Yup 47 more to go! I don't know what I am going to do after that!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: tikit

Ha ha cutie pie twinkle.

Bechara kunj.
I loved how kunj tried to cajole twinkle into going to doctors place.
He he the doctor was shocked to see grown up twinkle behaving like a child.
How sweet four ice creams.
Mehwish it was so adorbs, fun filled and cute.
So 46 more yay.
Continue soon.

Eshu! Thbak you so so much!
Lol Twinkle and her Antic! Sometimes I pity Kunj but then again he loves her too much to mind!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dude!!!! This is something Twinkle can so easily do. I have a feeling that the doctor was more traumatized than her 🤣
This was uber cute, i just can't! So many feels
Shakti does have an awesome choice
Also, you already know i love you and your writing right?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jambread3

Hahah Mehwish,I'm running out of words to describe how much Im loving your writing
I always look forward to your ficklets everyday
This was perfect. How cute Twinj are man
Twinkle was adorable
I was blushing all through it
all I can say is,love you buddy 🤗

TwiNj are adorable and i'll fight anyone who says otherwise!
😆
But Thank you so so much!
I look forward to reading all your comments everyday too!!
You people are hella Amazing!
Thanks again!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaveerkti

hey...dear...

U r surely capable of killing people with ur stories...

Why they have to be so good every time...

& KUNJ is such a sweetheart & twinkle 🤣
I think now all the readers want a husband like KUNJ...

Ur stories will create a different bar of expectation for true Love or life partner...

#46 more to come...

Hahaha...but baby please don't die yet, I have more stories to come!😆
But Thank you so so much for such lovely words
🤗
Babes..we all want a husband like Kunj!
I will purposefully be scared of needles just to re-create this scene with my Kunj!😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kardooks

'And now that I'm without your kisses, I'll be needing stitches'

Couldn't help myself, that song popped into my head reading the story.
Twinkle truly is a Siyappa Queen, poor Kunj having to put up with her antics, I think he was more traumatized than Twinkle😆
Count on Shakti to request this ficlet😆
This was awesome dude and very funny.
Superb writing can't wait for the others.

Ah! That song is perf!!
Lol..now that you mention it, Kunj was kinda traumatized more so than Twinkle! But then again who wouldn't be when they have to literally fire-man carry their wife's to get the stitches in!😆
Thanks dude!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: twinjlover9

its superb buddy
Twinkle's freedom part 🤣🤣 was so hilarious
and Twinj's situation at the time of getting stitches was so cute
and Twinkle get 4 scoops how sweet is Kunj always melts by her emotional atyachaar 😃
and 46 more is on the way yayyy m so excited

Thanks so much buddy!
Really glad you are liking this piece!
🤗
Yupdi dup! 46 more to go!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sdea

Mehwish this was crazy hilarious. Twinkle is such a drama queen and its not even surprising.🤣.And the whole ice cream thing was so cute

Bechara kunj aur usse bhi bechara doctor😆.
Girl you write beautifully i am always in love with your work.❤️

Thank you so much buddy!
🤗
Its no surprise that Twinkle is a Drama queen...infact Kun would probs think something is wrong with her if she agrees on going to the doctor without creating a scene!😆😆
Thanks again😃

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