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Posted: 9 years ago
2nd😆
Unres
This Chapter is really a good one.
Twinj's relation is beautifully deployed here.
I am very happy that they sorted out all.
Your next chapter will be roamed around the relation between Father & Son.That will be definitely interesting.😊

Edited by adi_FMT_ct - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shriti this part👏 love u for this.
Yay twinj r back together.😊
Was waiting for their reunion nd hope they never ever separate again.
I love twinj😳 a lot.
I love their hug, smile, care, concern for each other.
Bebe is
Btw i requested the bonding of manohar nd kunj nd kunj's childhood.
Shriti thank u for this surprise🤗
I love twinkles part where she says i will say truth but kunj stops her.
I love kunj s he does not want twinkles izzat to be lowered in anyones eyes.
Thanks for pm.
So continue jaldi jaldi.
Edited by tikit - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
So so good ..
Loved their emotional confrontation...
Waiting for more such dhamakas
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Posted: 9 years ago
updates are awesome Shriti
I totally loved each of it
and my favorite one among these emotional parts is 30 I cried reading it
and Twinkle shared everything with Bebe and Leela ...you nailed that part Shriti
Leela little pissed behavior and Bebe like always calm and sweet ...just perfect like them
and coming to this part their reunion its really amazing
Twinkle coming towards their room with the slow pace and being nervous was so beautifully penned by you
Kunj's mood swing like really he was having it 😆 sometimes he was sad and other time frustrated
And their little nok-jhok about telling the truth to the whole family was so cute
Thanks a lot for the PM
Edited by twinjlover9 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tikit

Shriti this part👏love u for this.

Yay twinj r back together.😊
Was waiting for their reunion nd hope they never ever separate again.
I love twinj😳a lot.
I love their hug, smile, care, concern for each other.
Bebe is
Btw i requested the bonding of manohar nd kunj nd kunj's childhood.
Shriti thank u for this surprise🤗
I love twinkles part where she says i will say truth but kunj stops her.
I love kunj s he does not want twinkles izzat to be lowered in anyones eyes.
Thanks for pm.
So continue jaldi jaldi.



Ohh u are most welcome.. And I love u too ! 🤔
😳
Actually I was too lazy to go back to each page and check who requested it.. And yeah thought on giving this as a surprise.. I remembered it from the time u requested.. Was finding a correct plot to write about it and now was the perfect time..
Wait for it.. The chapter is coming soon ! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct

2nd😆

Unres
This Chapter is really a good one.
Twinj's relation is beautifully deployed here.
I am very happy that they sorted out all.
Your next chapter will be roamed around the relation between Father & Son.That will be definitely interesting.😊



Hey aditi..
First of all thank u for the back to back comments for the last 3 chapters..
Yes they are finally back together.. All sorted out !
Next chapter coming soon. 😆 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely updates...
Read from chap30 in one go..
Fantastic u r amazing in writing emotional stuffs..
Felt bad for twinj..
Kunj took all.blame on himself..
Twinkle god...loved it she openly apologized to him..
Finally twinj mu sorted out..
Hope all will be well.soon..
Thx for pm


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Posted: 9 years ago
indeed the most awaited chapter...
glad they sorted their issues...
loved their confrontation...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hii everyone.. So most probably the last chapter with emotional stuff ! Hope u enjoyed this plot..
Keep reading and commenting !

Chapter 33:-

They walked down holding hands and this was enough for Bebe to understand that everything was sorted out between the couple. She sighed and smiled at the couple.
Kunj met everyone one by one.. Inaya silently asked Twinkle and Twinkle nodded. Inaya too understood that the fight was sorted out.
Manohar sat down beside Kunj.
Ma: Kunj.. I am happy u came here.. Its ok.. U r new to business and such losses occur.. I can never trade my son's life and happiness with business. So dont be depressed we will sort everything out. I know u will easily and quickly overcome these losses. Tum mere liye bahut important ho..

To say everyone was shocked wud be an understatement.. They had expected some severe scolding from Manohar.. Everyone in the house knew about their bitter relation.. Twinkle slightly pressed Kunj's hand to break his thoughts. He was the most shocked. Twinkle had this knowing look on her face. She was always the confident one that Manohar had changed. Kunj had tears in his eyes and he hugged Manohar crying.
Ku: Thank u dad for supporting me.
Ma: kunj now tell me kya hua exactly ?
Before Kunj could speak.. Twinkle spoke.
Tw: Main aap sabh ko kuch btana chahti hoon..
Bebe and Inaya instantly knew what she wants to say.
Ku: Twinkle NO !
Tw: Kunj plzz let me speak. She entwined their hands together started speaking.
She told everyone the whole incident. Kunj continued telling about the deal that lady offered and loosing other contracts. Manohar was a little shocked. Before he could speak, Usha spoke.
Usha: Dekha aap sab ne.. Maine toh pehle hi kaha tha yeh ladki apshaguni or manhoos hai..
Ma (angrily): Usha chup ho jao.. Isme Twinkle ki koi glti nahi hai.. No one has a right to point finger on a Sarna bahu.. Aur uski self respect damage krne ka haq kisi ko nahi hai.. She did right.. To hell with deals like this..
Usha: dekho iski wajah se kitna loss hua.. Pehle iski vajah se aap Coma mein gye aur abh kunj ko nuksaan hua.. Yeh hai hi manhoos.
Twinkle was in tears and crying. She stood up and went running to her room crying.
Kunj was getting really angry. Infact everyone was angry at what Usha spoke.
Ku(angrily): Mom just stop it.. Hadd hoti hai kisi cheez ki.. I dont believe in all these things.. This is disgusting. Aur agar aapko aise hi Twinkle ki disrespect krni hai toh its better we dont live here.. We are going back tomorrow itself.
He left the living room and ran to his room.
In the living room---
Bebe: usha rani yeh tune thik nahi kiya..
In: mom this was disgusting. And everyone went to their rooms.

Kunj entered his room and saw Twinkle was sitting on floor near the bed crying and chanting continuously.
Tw: main manhoos nahi hoon.. Main apshaguni nahi hoon..
Kunj's heart broke into million pieces to see her like this.
He ran to her and kept his hand on her shoulder and sat down beside her. Twinkle saw him and immediately hugged him. Kunj hugged her back tightly.
Tw: Kunj.. Mummyji ne thik hi kaha shayad.. Main hoon hi manhoos.. Hamesha meri wajah se koi na koi problem hoti hai..
Kunj hugged her tightly and rubbed her back to calm her down.
Ku: nahi Twinkle.. Tum mere liye bahut lucky ho.. Aise mat kaho.. And just stop thinking abt this.
Twinkle spoke crying and like a child.
Tw: Kunj main manhoos nahi hoon na ?
Ku: bilkul nahi Twinkle..
Ku: Twinkle thats Y I told u not to tell the truth.. Tumhe pata hai na mom tumhe bilkul pasand nahi krti..
Tw: Kunj tum mujhe chod kyun nhi dete.. U have so many problems because of me..
She stood up and started walking away. Kunj was now angry.. From so much time he is telling her to let go of this matter and she is thinking more about it.. He stood up and pulled her back. They both fell on the bed with sudden jerk. Twinkle was above Kunj and he tightly held her by her waist.
Tw: Kunj mujhe jaane do..
Kunj pulled his face closer and gave her a kiss.
Ku: will u stop crying now ? And I am never leaving u.. Get this clear in ur head.
Twinkle nodded and kept her head on his chest while Kunj caressed her hair.
Ku: I love u Twinkle.
Tw: I love u 2 Kunj.
A voice came from the door.
Voice: and I love u both.
They composed themselves.
In: bhabhi aap thik ho na ? Mom ki taraf se main aur bhai aapse maafi mangte hai.. She joined her hands.
Twinkle immediately held her hands and hugged her.
Tw: nahi Inaya.. U both dont have to apologize. I am okay.
Kunj hugged Inaya too.
Ku: aww meri choti si baby doll itni badi aur samjhdar kab se ho gyi ?
In: bhaiya !!
Ku: acha sorry na baby doll.
And the trio laughed.
In: ohh I totally forgot.. I came here to give u guys dinner.. Aap yahi par khaalo.. Lekin usse pehle ek shart hai bhai !
Ku: kya hai Inaya ?
In: aap kal chandigarh vaapis nahi jaaoge.. Promise me !
Twinkle looked at Kunj in surprise and spoke.
Tw: nahi hum apne weekend yahi spend krenge.
In: yayy ! And now the second thing. Bhai aap kal mujhe.. Bhabhi ko... Umm aur haan mahi ko bhi dinner pr lekr jaaoge ? Bolo do u agree ?
Ku: haan thik hai meri maa.. Jo tu kahe.. Abh main dinner kr loon ? I am so hungry.
Inaya grinned and left the room.
Twinj fed each other and were happy to be back together.
After their dinner---
Tw: Kunj can we plzz go out for a walk.
Ku: yes sweetheart..
They went out and started walking on the road. Their were not much people and traffic at this point of time.
Twinkle entwined their hands and Kunj smiled. After sometime Kunj spoke.
Ku: Twinkle tumne dekha dad ne mujhe kaise support kia.
He was getting emotional.
Ku: tumhe.. Tumhe pata hai mujhe pehli baar laga ki I have a father. Dad kitne badal gaye hain na..
Tw: Haan Kunj.. I could see the happiness in ur eyes.
They approached a park and sat down on the bench. Twinkle kept her head on his shoulder and he wrapped his hands around her arms.
Ku: u noe My relation with dad was always bitter. From the very starting. Would u like to listen ?
Tw: Go on.. Tell me freely. Man halka hoga tumhara.

Kunj started speaking with tears in his eyes.
Ku: When I was small and Inaya was born.. I was so happy.. I was 5 at that time. Dad tabh bhi mujhse zyaada pyaar nhi krte the.. For him it was always either his business or Inaya. Sometimes I used to be jealous of her.. But then my love for her wud overtake my jealousy. Mom ne mujhe dad ke hisse ka bhi pyaar diya.
Jabh bhi I did any mistake.. Dad would scold me so much. Aisa lagta tha ki isse acha hota that I dint have a father. Mom mujhe hamesha support krti thi. Aur fir when I was 8, dad decided on sending me to London for further studies. And this was not out of love but out of comparison. So many of our family friends had sent their children abroad for studies and dad also did the same to show his status. Mujhe bahaar nahi jaana tha.. I wanted to live with Mom and Inaya. Pata hai mom ne bhi kitna try kia but dad nahi mane.. And from that time I was in London.

He had tears in his eyes and Twinkle too was crying by now.

---To be continued---
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Posted: 9 years ago
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