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Posted: 9 years ago
nice part Shriti
I love this caring Kunj and horrified Twinkle
And that Ice cream part was so cute
I m just loving everything you writes buddy you are too good at showing The perfect Couple 😃
ohhh the last is also good reminds me that Twinkle always want to sleep with Shirtless Kunj😆
Thnx for the PM
and m super happy for having a update daily
keep updating
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hii everyone.. I hope the chapters are not getting boring. If that is so, u can freely tell me. Keep reading and commenting. Warning: It's really a long chapter.

Chapter 23:


Next morning, Twinkle woke up and looked at Kunj sleeping peacefully. Her mornings were perfect by waking up next to Kunj. She slowly removed his hand from her waist and gave a quick peck on his lips. His lips curved into a smile. Even in sleep, they could feel each other's touch. Twinkle then looked towards their room balcony and was surprised.
She ran towards the balcony and opened the door and was welcomed by a cold breeze that swept into their room. Kunj groaned and slightly moved as he felt cold due to sleeping shirtless. B4 he could get further disturbed from his peaceful sleep, Twinkle ran towards him and covered him till his chest with the blanket.
She then went to the balcony visibly excited because this was the first time she was witnessing a snow fall. She looked around and everything was covered with snow. It looked as if snowfall started in the night itself.
The roads, the distant mountains, trees, cars everythng was covered in snow. It was mesmerizing. She extended her hands catching falling snow and twirled around. All pain and happenings of last night were far gone. She was ecstatic.
She looked down on the road and saw some small children playing with snow and making snow man.
Her childish heart came to forefront and she ran down from their room without disturbing Kunj and without bothering to wear something warm over her pajamas and full sleeve tees. In the excitement of the moment, she was not feeling cold.
She approached the children and started playing with them freely. She was occasionally laughing and giggling with children.
When Kunj woke up, he looked at his side to find Twinkle nowhere. He gazed towards their bathroom but the door was open and Twinkle was not there. He panicked a little. Then his eyes fell on the balcony. He saw snowfall and in an instant knew Twinkle wud be out. He hurriedly went towards balcony but dint find Twinkle. The snow falling on his bare chest was making him shiver. He looked down and saw Twinkle playing with snow. He was mesmerized in her beauty and innocence. He thanked god that events of last day were long forgotten. Kunj muttered to himself.
Ku: Hey baghwan ! Iss ladki ka kuch nahi ho skta. She dint even wear any warm clothes and is playing with snow. Ekdum bachhi hai yeh.
He shook his head in disappointment.
He immediately went back to the room, pulled over a jacket on himself and grabbed one for Twinkle too and rushed downwards.
When he reached the ground, Twinkle waz facing her back toward him and was oblivious of his presence. Kunj smirked as an idea ran through his mind.
He bent down, picked up a little amount of snow and made a ball out of it. He aimed it towards Twinkle's neck and threw it. And it was a perfect aim. The ball hit her neck where their was no cloth covering and she hissed in coldness.
She immediately turned back and was greeted with a group of snowballs directly hitting her face.
When the single sided encounter was over, she cleared her face and looked at the person doing this. A wide grin crept over her face and she ran into Kunj's arms. Kunj stumbled a few steps back with the impact of Twinkle almost jumping on him.
Ku: Aaram se Jaan.. I am all urs, calm down !
Tw: Kunj look around. Snowfall ! Pata hai this is first time i m witnessing snow fall. Its so beautiful. Thank u for this vacation Kunj.
Kunj grinned and kissed her forehead.
Ku: And may I noe why my sweetheart is not wearing jacket ? Baby plzz apna dhyaan rkha kr. Now wear this fast.
He handed her jacket and she wore it immediately. She went back to kids and made a snowman with them. Kunj lovingly adored her standing there.
Tw: Kunj y are u standing there ? Come here. Aren't u excited seeing snow ?
Kunj walked towards her and sat down beside her.
Ku: Baby I lived in London for 4 Years.. And have seen snowfall so many times. So its not new for me. Anyways, I will get hot coffee for us. And then we will go for a snow trekking. Okay ?
Tw: Yayy ! It wud be so much fun.
Kunj returned with 2 Cups of coffee and they sat on the bench entwining their one hand and sipping coffee.

They then went to their room, wore warm clothes and gloves and shoes and went for trekking.
Sometime later, they reached a hilltop which was covered with snow and they could see a whole valley covered in snow. The place was very peaceful and hardly had any visitors.
Tw: Kunj ! This is so beautiful. She said while looking at the valley.
Kunj gazed at her and spoke.
Ku: Not more than u sweetheart and engulfed her in a side hug. Twinkle smiled and blushed.
They stood their side hugging each other silently. When finally Twinkle spoke:
Tw: Kunj !
Ku: Hmmm
Tw: Kunj kiss me !
Kunj pulled back at looked at her surprised but he could not refuse her order and her cute pouted face. He leaned in and captured her lips. He started playing with her tongue. Twinkle moved her hands around his jacket finding his phone. Kunj was confused to what she was searching for. She pulled out his fone from his jeans pocket and clicked a selfie of them kissing and covering the view of valley behind them. She then pulled back from the kiss and grinned.
Tw: Kunj ! See my wish came true. I told u na we wud kiss everywhere we go for holiday. I am gonna enlarge this foto and then we wud paste it in our bedroom. So this has to be our ritual. We are gonna do this wherever we go. Okay ?
Kunj laughed at her childishness.
Ku: Yes baby.. Ur wish is my command. Morever, whats the harm in getting some extra kisses from u !
Twinkle then bent down, made a snowball and before Kunj cud run away, she hit it on his face. And this is how their own war of snowballs started. They ran here and there throwing snowballs at each other and laughing their hearts out.
After sometime they both were tired but Twinkle was in no mood to accept her defeat, so it was Kunj who hosted a white flag of peace b/w them accepting his defeat.
Ku: Baby we need to leave from here b4 we get stuck due to snowfall. The roads may get blocked. So lets go back to room, pack our stuff and leave for Chandigarh. The driver is here with the car.
Twinkle nodded and they went back to their room, they packed their stuff.. Had their lunch and left Manali.
This time Kunj was too tired to drive, so the driver was on duty. Kunj was sitting at back with Twinkle who had kept her head on his chest and entwined their hands.
Tw: Kunj are u going to office tomorrow ?
Ku: yes sweetheart, I am !
Tw: So are u going to ignore me again ?
Ku: No sweetheart, not at all ! I promised u I wud come early from work. Plzz dont worry.. We will spend time together everyday !

Kunj got a phone call and he checked it was his new frnd from Chandigarh, Karan (chinky's fiance).
He picked up the call and updated him abt his vacation with Twinkle. The boys then made a plan to meet over dinner with their ladyloves at a famous night club of Chandigarh.
After the fone call,
Tw: wat were u talking abt ?
Ku: Abt going to club tomorrow night.
Tw: with me ?
Ku: not at all, u wont let me flirt with other hot girls, so I am thinking to go alone. What do u say ?
He held back his grin when he saw her burning in anger. She hit him hard on his chest.
Ku: Ouchh Twinkle ! Kya kr rhi hai ? Aise thodi na maarte hain apne husband ko !,
Tw: Yahi hoga tumhare saath. Y are u not taking me ?
Kunj grinned and pulled her cheeks.
Ku: Obviously u are coming with me sweetheart, I was just kidding.
Twinkle leaned back on his chest and slept in no time. Kunj too slept keeping his head above Twinkle's.

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Posted: 9 years ago
As u told it's indeed a long update.
But it's just like a good food,took time to prepare but always finish in less time;u know i am big foodie.😆
Seriously get back into the story;
SNOWFALL😃 ,I am also going crazy that's why I adore Twinky.
And dear u reminisced me the original bucchy scenes.Kunj was saying to Twinkle"Tu Bacchi Hai Bacchi" & Twinkle's reply to him with irritating face "Mai Nehi Hoo Bacchi".
Awww!
Also I love their trekking in snow then pic in high hill with kissing each other.
Love it totally.
And Now the turn is back to home from holiday.
Twinkle is little worried for past happening and Kunj is as usual best his antics which is pulling the legs of his wife.
Waitin... Waiting...
Next One Please.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kiss ki nazar na lage inn dono...
What a perfect vacation.. U penned it really beautifully...
Thanks for the pm
Waiting..for the next part..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shriti ur ff is like a drug.
Its not at all boring.
Infact loving it.
Yes its long.
Loved the part when twinkle openedbut she realised kunj must be feeling cold she covered him.
Snowballs👏
I really love snowballs.
Atleast kunj is aware of wearing jackets in cold weather.
Twinj playing with snowballs nd him accepting defeat was😊
Then snow trekking was awesome.
Their kiss😳
Obviously both were tired.
I love when kunj said tu poori bachchi hai reminded me of tei days when kunj used to say ki poori ki poori bachchi hai.
Aww kunj teased her by saying he wants to go club for the ladies😆
I love kunj teasing twinkle.
Aww later twinkle had kept her head on twimkles shoulder nd kunj had his head on twinkle😳
Seriously an amazing ff shriti.
Continue soon.
Thanks for pm.

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Posted: 9 years ago
wow just loved it'''
their kiss,snowfall... everything was just perfect

and ya its not getting boring at all ...infact with every passing episode I am more and more falling for ur ff
seriously I am in love with ur ff..''
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its really beautiful update..snowfall, their kiss
Its not at all boring.
Love them..they are such a cute couple😳
This was a long update and I love reading long update.
Please update soon
Thanks for the PM.
Edited by tricksters - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
A collective Thank you to everyone for commenting and motivating me to write more ! And yes the next chapter will be updated on time.
And I m really sorry as some of u had given me suggestions and I have not added it till now. U can plzz remind me of ur suggestions so I can add them !

A big thank you ! 😆

Love, Shriti ! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful update..
Am.little busy to post a long comment..
But am following ur FF...
It's going amazing..
Plz continue soon..
I ll be commenting long reply once am back..
Thx for pm and plz continue pming me..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hii everyone ! The next chapter is here ! Keep reading and commenting !
Warning: Again a long update. I dont know y i m not able to type short chapters. :(

Chapter 24:
They reached Chandigarh late at night. All the way they were almost asleep as they were too tired.
They opened their apartment and they could already feel warm. The temp. in Chandigarh was exceptionally high today.
Twinkle straight away went to their closet and changed into her nightwear. She came back to their living room and saw Kunj laying down on couch and watching TV.
Tw: Kunj its quiet late and we wont get any restaurant open for home delievery, So I am going to kitchen and will prepare some dinner for us. Till that time u plzz go and change. U have to go to office tomorrow.
Ku: Baby, wait I am coming ! I will help u in preparing dinner. U must be tired na !
Twinkle was surprised. She always thought that men ran away from kitchen. Her man was an exception though. She went to him and wrapped her arms around his neck.
Tw: Aww Kunj ! U truly are a superhero.
She pecked his lips and moved away.
Ku: Hero toh dekh main hoon. Toh apne hero ko ache se kiss to kr na !
Tw: No.. Not now. She showed her tongue.
Twinkle ran towards kitchen and stopped at the door and looked back.
Tw: now come fast chef husband. Ur wife is feeling hungry.
Kunj nodded, changed into his nightwear and came back into kitchen.
He saw Twinkle cutting vegetables facing her back towards Kunj and she was looking so hot in her short nightwear. So how cud Kunj control himself.
He quietly went to her and engulfed her in a back hug. His hands were on her stomach and Twinkle's hand above it. He brushed his lips around her earlobe and Twinkle gasped.
He slightly removed the strap of her nightdress and kissed on her shoulder.
Tw: Kunj are u here to help me or distract me ? Plzz lets make dinner fast. I am hungry.
Ku: Kya baby ? Saara romance ka mood kharaab kr diya.
Twinkle turned back and kept her hands on his chest and eyed him sensually. Kunj lifted her up and made her sit on the kitchen slab. Kunj stood b/w her legs and leaned in for a kiss.
They were kissing wildly. While kissing Kunj slid his hand b/w her thighs proceeding forward. But Twinkle tightly held his hands.
Tw: Kunj no ! Plzz not now ! Plzzz !!
Kunj was a bit irritated.
Ku: Fine !!
He started helping her make food but dint talk to her. Twinkle tried to make conversations but it was always one sided.They sat on the table and served themselves food. Kunj was eating his own food stealing glances at her but looked away when Twinkle looked at him.
Twinkle was just picking at her food and playing with the spoon.

Twinkle had a perfect idea in her mind. She dint even eat a single spoon, made a sad face, pushed away the plate and stood.
Tw: Kunj I dont want to eat. I am going to sleep.
Ku: But u were the one feeling hungry, No ?
Twinkle had thought that Kunj wud make up to her. But too her surprise, he dint even talk properly. Denying romance was not such a big issue that Kunj had made. She bursted out.
Tw: Yes I was hungry.. But not now. I wanted to eat with u.. And not like sitting here like strangers. And y r u getting so rude ? I just refused to the romance, thats why ? Fine ! Then be like this only. I am going to sleep.
She walked away but Kunj pulled her back and she was on his lap. He tightly held her waist. Twinkle tried getting up 2-3 Times but failed miserably and gave up at last.
Ku: I m sorry sweetheart. I dint mean to be so rude.
He forwarded his spoon near her mouth and Twinkle instantly ate. She smiled and Kunj smiled too. So they ended up feeding each other and laughing on how they fight like children.
It was already 1 Am now and they slept as kunj had to go to office tomorrow.

Next morning around 6 Am----
Kunj's phone alarm woke them up. They stirred here and there in sleep. Kunj switched off his alarm and slept again. Twinkle shook him slightly though she herself was feeling asleep. She was never an early riser and from the time they shifted to Chd, she had been sleeping late due to no restrictions.
Tw: Kunj wake up. U have to go to office. Wake up na. And she yawned in b/w.
Kunj too was feeling sleepy. He mentally cursed himself for setting an early time for office.
Ku: Twinkle just 5 mins more. Plzz let me sleep.
Tw: Kunj no ! Wake up.. Otherwise u will get late.
She again shook him and he woke up lazily !
Ku: Good morning sweetheart. U can sleep for another half an hour till the time I get ready.
Tw: But ur breakfast ?
Ku: Arre I will wake u up when I get ready. So jao aaram se.
Twinkle smiled and slept again.
Kunj went to get ready and came 25 mins later with a towel around his waist.
He went to Twinkle and sat by her side. He leaned down and kissed Twinkle. She instantly smiled.
Ku: Come on Wifey! Wake up ! Make a yummy wala Twinkle's breakfast for me !
Twinkle woke up little later and stretched her hands smiling.
Tw: Good morning Kunj.
She looked at Kunj who was getting ready infront of mirror wearing his shirt.
They had a cute eye lock and then she went to kitchen to make breakfast.
Kunj came to the kitchen and they settled down at the small dining they had in kitchen. While having breakfast:
Ku: So baby whats the plan for today ?
Tw: Kunj I was thinking, it has been a week we are here, and I have not even learnt cooking. And moreover I am not managing home very well, so I have decided that From today I am going to take up this responsibility very well like u r managing office well.
Ku: Twinkle we can hire servants for all this. U dont have to worry.
Tw: Nhi Kunj I want to do this on my own. I want to learn all these things. So today I am going for grocery shopping and then I will buy some cookery books and learn cooking.
Ku: Hmm ! Okay ! U can do watever u want. Dont worry, U will become a vry good housewife baby. And I m going now. Take care. Bye sweetheart.
He stood up holding his blazer in one hand and hugged her tightly.
Tw: Bye Kunj.. And come home early. I miss u so much !
Ku: I miss u 2 Baby !
Tw: Kunj ?
Ku: Hmm !
Tw: Kunj if u dont mind can I come to ur office today to meet u ? Mayb we cud eat lunch together.. I dont feel like eating alone.
Ku: Twinkle y wud I mind ? U can come weneva u want. U r the boss's wifey ! And yes have lunch with me and then I will show u the whole office and introduce u to the employees.
Kunj went and Twinkle got ready in a pink knee length dress.
She quickly went for grocery shopping and filled her kitchen with all the necessary items.
She looked at different cookbooks and then decided on making chinese, her and Kunj's favorite.
Almost 2 Hours later, she is still at the same point from where she started bcoz the first 2 tries were horrible. Now this is the third time she is trying fully frustated. But then maybe it's her lucky no., she suceeds, though it tastes not so good but it is not bad either.
And she is so excited to take it to Kunj and plans on giving him a surprise visit though he knows she is coming today but let the time be a surprise she thought.

-------Precap: Twinkle in office----

So how do u want the next chapter to be.. Funny or romantic ?
Comment ur choice. The one which I get maximum comments for wud be chosen.


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