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tricksters

@tricksters

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

It was a sweet update Shriti 😳

Loved it yaar...twinj's conversation was very cute

So Twinkle is getting kidnapped..now its time for some action ...Our hero kunj is there naa..he will save his Siyappa Queen😉

Thanks for the PM.

Please update when u get time😊

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Aditi

@adi_FMT_ct

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Never Mind dear.

Ja Shiriti Ja

Jeele Apni Zindagi

3-4 dino ke liye.😆

By the way i did not read.

I will be back.😃

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Auritrika Ashraf

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Ok ok budddyyy...
Heartfull sry fr the late feedbck...
I had a strct routine to maintain these days thts why i remained a sclnt reader...
No doubt tht ths stry is so glmrous nd loveable and i ve fallen fr it...m
Thnks fr ur rglr pms ...
I love the way u pen dwn our twinjs rmnce nd nokjhoks ...
Love u nd sry ince again...
Be actve nd rck the frm like u do always

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justchillalways

@justchillalways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Amazing update Shriti. Very emotional episode. Love how Kunj expressed his feelings as he only can open up before twinkle. Keep rocking with your episode as you make me wait for next part always.

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Jambread3

@Jambread3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Shritiii,I've finally read all the chapters! Yes,I being the laziest finally read them!
Firstly I'm really very sorry I couldn't comment or read it earlier but better late than never right? Also I will compensate that by writing a super long comment,maybe as long as a chapter 😆
Also,in your story Twinj settle in Chandigarh which is a place extremely extremely close to my heart so your story automatically becomes special for me!
Now coming to the FF,I would start by giving you a tight tight hug!
You're blessed! You've written so beautifully and I don't regret one bit reading it!
I loved all the chapters but if I had to choose one,I would choose Chapter 15❤️
There were a lot of things I loved like,
-How Kunj proposed to Twinkle with the family members witnessing it through the laptop
-How Kunj picked up a dress for Twinkle so that she didn't ask for Veer's opinion 😆
-I loved how you've showed an authoritative Kunj,it makes me very happy imagining Kunj like that..!
As for the mature content,wow! Simply wow.
You've so beautifully and explicitly showed their consummation.Its very difficult to actually put such ideas across readers but you've done it with so much ease.
As for the jealously part,It's something that makes me super excited and happy.
I think the best thing for me would be to see a jealous Kunj/Twinkle.It just shows how much they love each other and cannot afford to lose each other.I enjoyed every bit of their jealously.
You're an amazing writer,please please continue this soon...I'm eagerly waiting to read further.
I'm so glad you shared this story with us.
Also,once this ends,continue writing,would love to hear more from you.
Love you for this Story!
Amazing job and congratulations for it being a success.
I'm sure you know how much your story is being loved with the amount of views 😉
So thank you so so so much for this story..
After this also maybe I won't be able to comment after every chapter but I'll be back with another big comment later 🤣
Lastly,sorry for this super long comment.What to do,I'm known for these 😆
God bless you!
👏 🤗

Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago

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Blissfullife

@Blisfulllife

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#156

wow their convo was so sweet.. 😛

omg twinkle kidnapped... eagerly waiting for next update
waise when kunj is there not to fear
hehehehehehe 😃
WO bacha hi lega apni syappa queen ko.. 😊

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Shriti

@shraja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: Jambread3
Shritiii,I've finally read all the chapters! Yes,I being the laziest finally read them!
Firstly I'm really very sorry I couldn't comment or read it earlier but better late than never right? Also I will compensate that by writing a super long comment,maybe as long as a chapter 😆
Also,in your story Twinj settle in Chandigarh which is a place extremely extremely close to my heart so your story automatically becomes special for me!
Now coming to the FF,I would start by giving you a tight tight hug!
You're blessed! You've written so beautifully and I don't regret one bit reading it!
I loved all the chapters but if I had to choose one,I would choose Chapter 15❤️
There were a lot of things I loved like,
-How Kunj proposed to Twinkle with the family members witnessing it through the laptop
-How Kunj picked up a dress for Twinkle so that she didn't ask for Veer's opinion 😆
-I loved how you've showed an authoritative Kunj,it makes me very happy imagining Kunj like that..!
As for the mature content,wow! Simply wow.
You've so beautifully and explicitly showed their consummation.Its very difficult to actually put such ideas across readers but you've done it with so much ease.
As for the jealously part,It's something that makes me super excited and happy.
I think the best thing for me would be to see a jealous Kunj/Twinkle.It just shows how much they love each other and cannot afford to lose each other.I enjoyed every bit of their jealously.
You're an amazing writer,please please continue this soon...I'm eagerly waiting to read further.
I'm so glad you shared this story with us.
Also,once this ends,continue writing,would love to hear more from you.
Love you for this Story!
Amazing job and congratulations for it being a success.
I'm sure you know how much your story is being loved with the amount of views 😉
So thank you so so so much for this story..
After this also maybe I won't be able to comment after every chapter but I'll be back with another big comment later 🤣
Lastly,sorry for this super long comment.What to do,I'm known for these 😆
God bless you!
👏 🤗

RES.

will be back sometime later to give u back a long reply.. 😆😆

Love, Shriti

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Shriti

@shraja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#158

Hii I am uploading the next chapter. Keep reading and commenting.

The next chapter wud be uploaded after 2 days as I go for a break.

Chapter 21:

Meanwhile Kunj had gone to the icecream parlour, some men came behind Twinkle and started whispering. Before Twinkle could react anything seeing them, they gagged her with chloroform on her mouth and dragged her from there.

Kunj turned around with the icecream, but did not see Twinkle. He scanned all around the road but could not find her anywhere. He ran to the place where they were sitting and started calling her name loudly.

Ku: TWINKLE ! TWINKLE !! Where are u ? Come back wherever u are. It is not a joke. I noe u are hiding somewhere.

He panicked when he didnot see her for the next few mins. He frantically kept searching her around the market by showing people her photo. But all in vain. Nobody had seen her.

He had this intuition that something bad was going to happen. His stomach was twisting in knots and he could not decide what to do next.

He again went back to the place where they last sat and searched around.

----Some Godown-----

Twinkle had been tied to a chair and her hands and feet were tied. Her mouth was also covered.

When she opened her eyes a litte later, she found herself in this condition. She heard some men talking at a corner who had not noticed her awake.

G1: Arre dekh toh kya hot maal hai ?

G2: Haan bhai, sahi mein. Aaj boss humse bahut khush hoga.

G3: Arre main to kehta hoon ki hum boss ko iss ladki ke baare mein btate hi nhi.. Boss toh usse bahar hi bhej dega, hume toh kuch nhi milega na. Jaise jitni bhi ladkiyan hum pakadte hain, sabh ko vo foreign bhej deta hai.

By now Twinkle had understood that she was in a mess. Whoever their boss was, was a bad guy.. She had tears in her eyes, but still she knew deep inside that Kunj wud in any case save her. She trusted him with all her life. She needs to be strong. Kunj wud definitely come.

Twinkle talked to herself : Twinkle u need to be strong. Kunj will definitely find u. First I need to find a way to escape from here.

-----other side with Kunj-----

He was searching for her madly when he saw a little boy hiding behing bushes looking afraid. He went to the boy and after much insisting and promising to give choclate to the boy, the boy spoke that he had seen some men taking a girl in car. Kunj knew it cud be Twinkle.

Kunj thanked the boy and ran to the police station. He was really angry when the officers told that they cud not report a kidnapping or missing case before 24 Hours completes. He instantly knew the police is going to be of no help. He himself had to reach Twinkle asap. After giving a chiding to the officers, he ran out when suddenly a woman officer called him.

WO: Look I noe u r worried for ur wife and the officer wont be much help. But being a women I can help u find ur wife. I noe these gang of men. Come with me to their place.

Kunj profusely thanked the woman officer and followed her.

They were rapidly walking through the market.

----Godown----

Twinkle had successfully opened her ties and very cleverly almost reached the door.. But the goons had seen her at the last moment.. They had very tightly held her and tied her back on the chair. Her resisting and constant screaming was of no use. When she was being tied again, she bite the man's hand and ran out.

All the goons immediately ran behind her. She was screaming for help but the road was deserted. She ran ahead with all the speed she could muster.

She was running looking behind at the goons when she bumped into a person.She closed her eyes in fear. Without even opening her eyes, she started to plead for help.

Tw: plzz help me, they r after me.. Plzz plzzz help me.

She was surprised wen that person immediately hugged him but was relieved when she felt the touch.

Tw: KUNJ ! I knew u wud come to save me. Plzz mujhe bachao. Vo log !

She pulled back from the hug and pointed towards the goons who were coming towards them.

Kunj cupped her face and wiped her tears though he himself was crying !

Ku: Twinkle ! Tum thik ho na jaan ?

Twinkle cryingly nodded.

The goons yelled to Kunj to leave Twinkle.

Goons: Aye bhai, tu hai kon ? Iss ladki ko chod yeh hamari hai.

Kunj's blood boiled with anger. He made Twinkle stand with the woman officer and started beating the goons black and blue.

Ku: Tum meri biwi ko haath lagaoge ? Tumhari himmat bhi kaise hui ? I will kill u today.

Kunj wud have actually killed him if police wud not have arrived on time and arrested the goons. Kunj heard a light and faint voice of Twinkle from behind.

Tw: Ku.. Kunj !

He immediately ran towards Twinkle who was falling unconcious. He hugged her tight sitting on his knees.

The woman brought some water and they sprinkled it on Twinkle's face. She gained consciousness and immediately hugged Kunj. Kunj carresed her hair to comfort her..

Ku: Baby plzz stop crying. Dekho abh main tumhare saath hi hoon.. U r completely safe.

Tw: kunj mujhe bahut sukoon mila hai tumhe dekh kar. Agar tum na aate, to vo log... Vo log mere saath ...

Kunj kept his hand on her mouth hugged her tightly. Twinkle felt pain in her body due to manhandling, so she winced in pain when Kunj hugged her tightly.

They stood up and saw that the woman officer was still standing there. They both thanked her profusely. She went away saying it was her duty.

Kunj picked her up in arms and walked to their hotel room.

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Sristi Malhotra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#159

amazing update
really this one is so superb that I can't even describe in words
the way you described about Twinkle's trust on Kunj is the best
and at last when he hugged her ohhh she felt his touch their love is so perfect and your writing also
m in love with your writing Shriti
it would be very difficult for me to wait for 2 days
please do come back soon and continue it
m very eagerly waiting to read more
want to know how Kunj will handle all this