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ok guys so like i'm posting 2 parts to make up for the delay.Oh and there's alot of grammar and spelling mistakes because this was typed in my phone and i didn't get time to edit and also i'm lazy.😳.So enjoy.😊

PART 7&8

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RECAP (story abb tak)
(*)All the characters were introduced..
(*)Twinkle met with accident..
(*)kunj and reena helped her..
(*)Twinkle lost her memory,she is wife of kunj who were seperated few years back
(*)Twinkle and kunj enjoying their day with each other
(*)Twinkle was in danger..in office..as few office staff eve teased her (they din know that twinj are hubby-wife)
(*)Twinkle had head ace..due to which she fell unconcious..
(*)Doc made her go in mild coma..
(*)Kunj remembering the earlier days of their life
(We are in flash back..)
were kunj is remembering his and twinkles first meet..

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Twinkle leaves kunj in shock..
he is such a shock that he could not defend him self..
and he was feeling ashamed..
behind there far away stood a guy..who was so eager to meet his little sister that his facialy expressions showed all what he only wanted..
then in that crowd he saw a girl..
a chubby,fair.thin,and her eyes just like a twinkling star..or a pole star..and the glow on her face was as the glow on moon on full moon day..
he ran to her and hugged her..
he fliped her and said chotiii u are back atlast..
she huged him and said i missed u so much..
she just said that went forward..
(yes,the guy was uv..twinkles big brother)
he noticed that something was fisshy..he asked her the reason..
and she shewed off the question..
and asked where is my bhbhbi..
i want to meet her..
oky..
meri twinkle koi wish mange and vo complete na ho..thats not possible.. na
So come..
T-dont tell me..shes here..and u bought her here..
Uv-smiled..
she ran toward the enterance leaving her huge bags..their..
making uv just look like a koli..
but he was waiting for someone else too
now who was that some one else..?
guess guess?
so ur guess is right
its Kunj..

kunj waved him from far..and his tall figure made him visible..
both had a cute hug..
K-so how r u..uv..or should i say my DJ
(now dont say u dont know what DJ means..
DJ is what i call my jiju..
DearJiju=Dj..just gave the name what i call my jiju..
Just wish sid would really be so..)
Uv-hmm.uv sound better..
K-then i ll call u DJ..(both laughed out)
well were is my behena
Uv-with my behena..
K-ohh yeah i forgot..
U-well y r u wet
K-forget it..coz i dont even whnt to remember..
and fumes..
and wese U became kuli again na?
UV-yup..
soon u ll also be..dont worry..
K-really?
UV-yup ..
now lets go out..
else both behena wll make us do baingan ka benena..
K-wow what a PJ
Uvyeah seroisly man..
that was so bad word forming..
they both move towards enterance..

here twinkle was hugging mahi,a most simple girl u can ever meet..
with her formals..
T-i was just dying to meet u..
M-i too my dear nanadji
t-twinkle sounds better na..
just then kunj and uv also arrive their..
kunj notices twinkles pony tail..
and he stops..
UV-kya huva salle sahab..?
K-vo pony tail..
(to himself- i just hope the girl and twinkle are not same)
Uv-ooo..shes twinkle..
he screams twinkle..
and she turns back and looks at kunj..
K&T together-tum?
T-what the hell are u doing with him bhai..
K-what?bhai..
T-i m not talking to u ?
K-who the hell said i m talking tou..
i m talking to Dj
T-now who that bl***y..
before she could complete..UV kept his hand on her mouth..
its me its me..
now stop..
T-first say how u know him..
Uv-hes my..(before he complete twinkle interruts)
T-han..
K-yeah Dj is she...(before he complete twinkle interruts)
T-stop calling him that..
K-i ll call him..
T-no u wont..else
K-else what han..again u ll put water on me
T-i can do that..
mahi and uv look at each other..
and screm stop...!!!!!!
they stop at once..
bahi bhabhi u dont know him..
he broke the gift i bought for uv bhai..
do u know the gift had perl in it..
i started to prepare the gift since 4 yrs..
and u cheptster u were showing toward kunj..
he was showing me the power of money..
just then twinkle starts crying..
Kunj feels sad as he broke her gift..
Uv-are its oky..twinki..u are my biggest gift..
and u are with me and thats enough for me..
so..
before she could say anything she just went and sat at front seat of car..
as she knew UV only would drive it...

uv-kunj..dont feel sad ..shes a bit sensible about ..
K-actually i must be sorry..as i broke..
i must say her sorry..
uv stops him..
m-plz kunj dont go to her and come with me..
plz be silent and dont utter a word..
Uv-y are u scremiming at him..
twinkle is nt a kid she should understand..
M-kunj is at fault..not twinkle..
cant he see and walk..
UV-u know what talking to u is just waste of time..
M-then y are u wasting ur time..
now kunj shuts stop plzz...
MAhi goes in husss..
takes the bags from Uv..(of twinkle) puts them in car..
and goes and sits in car and drives..
T-bhabhi where is bahi..
he said he has some work..
he ll come..
(still twinkle dont know that kunj is mahis bro)
their,
Uv and kunj are pampering each other..
and waiting for taxi..
at last they get one and reach home..
Twinkle an mahi had already reached their..
twinkle was hugging everyone..
all were standing in a line...now..
all servents of her home too as all were old..
& they knew twinkle since she was small kid..
she was kissing all on cheeks..
then arrived kunj and uv..
and they were also standing in line..
(and u might have guessed what might have happened)4
yup twinkle kissed kunj on cheeks and all were shocked...
K-i know i m kandsome.hot..dashing..but plz control ur self..
T-to her embaresemnt wanted to run away but cant
handsome?hot?dashing? n u ?My foot mr sadu..
and what r u doing in my home..
bahi..
u bought him here also..
this time uv choose to stay silent..
as he knew that if he spoke then mahi ll be miffed with him

Leela& usha-kunj beta..
maa..aunty..
he runs to them and hugs both and takes their blessings..
and hugs manohar..
twinkle is shoked..
so mIss..?
whts u r name
han twinkle the siyapaa quenn i m kunj sarna..
son of usha and manohar srna..
and brother of mahi sarna..

all laugh at his introduction!

twinkle huss off to room in anger..

Kunj had freshed up and was roaming in house when his eyes fell on a beautiful girl..who had spread her hair..
her long left straight hair..
her back was facing him..
he wanted to enter but stoped hearing a voics
(u guys might have guessed who the girl was..
yup she was our star..our twinkling star our twinkle)
Twinkle was talking to some one..
kunj was hearing their talks..(note-K din know that the girl was T)

T-u know na i love the most..in this world..today i m back again..
and again i din speak to ur mom..
i m still very angry on her..
u know what i met a mad person today who broke my gift
(by now kunj knew that the girl was twinkle)
he is just ssooo saduuu i wish i could kill him for breaking my gift..
and u know what the worst of all..
he is my bhabhis brother..
and worst of this is hes calling our bhai as DJ..
and more worst or worst of it..
bhai supported him

Kunj peeped a bit into room...as he was desperate to know to whom was twinkle speaking..

but when he enterd there was no one in room..
he heard some noise from washroom so he taught that she was there..
suddenly he noticed a picture frame there as he went forward to take it..
he scremt in fear..
and climbed the bed..
saying chu chu chu..
yes...u guys guessed it right..
there was a dog there..
the bog started wagging his tail..Kunj became scared and started running all over the room making it messey..
Twinkle from washroom made a loud cry aasking whos there
are siyaapa queen zaldi baharaa..plzz meri maa..zaldii aaa...,said kunj
Twinkle hearing his voice and quickly came out..
and started laughing aloud...

guess what the dog was on kunj..and kunj on floor...
and kunj shutting his eyes in fear...

twinkle took the dog..
and said browine..u go..mumma ll be back..
go..she kissed him and sent him out..

T-mr sadu u can open ur eyes..
K-dont call me that..and what were u saying..
mumma ll be back..
are mummy hone ka itna shock hai toh shadi karke bachha pada karleti..y did u make this dog as ur child?
and do any one keep such dangerous monter like dog as pet?
and that to in room..?
T-first and formost..
it my life..
second..the dog is not monster its name is browine..
third and most important..
wht the hell are u doing in my room?
K-vo..sorry i din know its urs..
anyway frnds..?
T-no way..
and was tying her hair..'when kunj interrupted Kulle hi rehedo plzz.
it suits u more..
(let it be open only,it suits u)
T-what?
k-beheri ho?(are u deaf?)
i said lev ur hair open it suits u?
t-and y shd i listen to u?
K-coz i guess i m ur frnd?
T-no u guessed it wrong..
as ur not my frnd..
K-toh bohot zaldi ho haunga..
T-now u can lev..
K-oky..but remember u ll be my frnd soon
T-u know what?my memory power is a bit dumb..
so i ll not remember..
K-attitude haan?
T-any promblem..
K-No..
T-then..plz leave

Leela and usha who witnesd all this..
l-thanku so much usha..
U-thanku kyun?
L-ajj after 7 yrs i saw twinkle laughing like she used to laugh before..after Tejs death..
she had stopped laughing..stopped enjoying her life..
and today though it had scared kunj..but still she laughed coz of it..
now i just hope she starts talking to me..
U-she ll..coz i trust my kunj..and my would be DIL too..
L-DIL?
U-don't u think they make a good pair..?
L-u mean..
U-yes,i want twinkle to be my DIL
L-whats the happiest thing in world than this..
but i should talk to uv..coz only Uv can make her convince..
U-no,u don't talk to him..
we ll make both fall in love..
and then u know..
both hug each other

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PART 8

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RECAP (story abb tak)
(*)All the characters were introduced..
(*)Twinkle met with accident..
(*)kunj and reena helped her..
(*)Twinkle lost her memory,she is wife of kunj who were seperated few years back
(*)Twinkle and kunj enjoying their day with each other
(*)Twinkle was in danger..in office..as few office staff eve teased her (they din know that twinj are hubby-wife)
(*)Twinkle had head ace..due to which she fell unconcious..
(*)Doc made her go in mild coma..
(*)Kunj remembering the earlier days of their life
(We are in flash back..)
were kunj is remembering his and twinkles first meet..and there old days..

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Twinkle comes down..
all elders were sitting there..
she was about to go when leela interuppts her
L-kaha jarahi ho beta?
T-personal stuff
L-oky..but take driver with u..and be carefull as u dont know much about the city..
she was about to hug her..when twinkle steps backward..
Sarna family notices this..

on the way she meets Uv(in hall itself)
T-bhai..bye..i m going to shopping..and then some small personal work..
love u bye..
UV-but twinki..
T-hanhan i know take care of ur self..
keep calling me after every 30 min..
dont fight with anyone and take panga..
and love u chuti
u ll say this only na..
i know all these
challo bye..
UV-smailes...no re baba this all is there but one more thing is u take kunj also with u..
he was also going there only..
he too dont know much of roads..
and one car is available now..with one driver..
hope u dont mind..

Kunj smirks and looks at twinkle
Twinkle makes faces but agree..

they are done at shopping..
and come back..

days pass and both become friends..
not only this but they infact become close enemies..
now dont think i miss wrote it..
yes guys they became close ENEMIES..
who are ready to fight for each other..with others..
but keep fighting for small things with themselves..
strange friendship na?
they keep fighting every min..
nonstop bbut cant tolrate others blunders!

mahi and Uv had bullit a strong bond among themselves..

and all was oky..
but not with leela..she was with sarnas when she shared her pain with usha
L-u know na usha that now i have really less time..and stoll twinkle is angry at me..thinking that i m the reason behind his death..
U-time heals everything..
L-how much time usha how much time..
U-believe in god..he ll set all fine..
L-i dont care now if she speaks to me or no..
but i think its time to execute our plans..
U-yes,i think ur right..

so..whts the plan?
Y twinkle angry on leela?
and lots more to be revealed soon..

its a pleasent morning..
usha and leela are in Uvs room..
hes sleeping peacefully..
he gets up to the alaram..
and says goodmorning world..
and opens his eyes..
and then..
& then
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shouts badly...
terified and in full of fear..
imagine if u get up from ur peacefull sleep,and open ur eyes and find 2 faces so close to ur face..
& worst of it is the two faces staring at u..
more worst of it would be..
the 2 turns out to be ur mom & mom in law

at his scream..both of his mom closes his mouth.
and asks him to get ready..
he nods..

and in full of tension he comes to them..
first he peeps out out of his washroom..and sees if they are present..
not finding them he relaxes a bit then again goes down and meets them..

now both MOM & MIL of uv
start their atyachar on him..
leela-beta i want u to gettwinkle married..
Uv-what?..i mean its good but shes a kid..
Usha-shes not dud pite bachhi
Leela-so u talk to her..
UV-what?i..u mean ..mom dont u want ur son to be fit and fine with both legs and hands safe atleast till his marriage..
leel and usha- give him what the hell type look
Uv-i m saying truth..

"- * FLASHBACK * "-

all are in party..
a old aunty comes to her and asks where are her parents..
twinkle polietly replies that she came with her bhai..
the lady asks her to take her to him..
twinkle asks if its for any business deal then he wont speak up..as he dont mix any such bussiness parts in persnal..
aunty says no beta its personal only,so chill..twinkle nods and takes her to UV
LAdy-hello beta
UV-hello aunty
Aunty-actually i was thinking of my sons proposal for ur sister..
UV-what?
(looking at twinkle)i mean..thats cool..but we dint think of any such things yet..
shes still small
AUnty-kis bhai ke liye apni behen choti nahi hogi..how much ever she grow old u ll say either any bro would say her sis lil only beta..
UV-oky..i ll think of it

later uv and twinkle reach home..
then Boom boom
twinkle taking belan and running behind UV..and UV getting many kicks from her later
and then to repay what he said he had to agree to her terms and conditions which were going to shopping with her..
and carrying her bags

"- * FLASHBACK ENDS * "-

Uv-uff mom..i m one of the biggest bussiness man of state and i was behind twinkle like servent..
i mean i can be her servent whole of my life as i lov emy sister a lot..but can never bare her shopping bags..
her shopping for 1 function=an years shopping of me..
and u are seding a rat to lioness den
its something like
aa beil muze mar..

Leela-beta..u know i cant talk to her..so i came to u..
UV-oky but first u find a guy..
Leela-i found him..a perfect match for my kudi..
usha-whos he leela?
Uv-yeah mom whos he..?
Leela-u know him..uv..and usha u though are full to familiar to him
guess who?
oo ho Kunj re baba
USha-what?
i mean are u sure
UV-falls down..
and starts laughing loud..
mom are have u lost it
chutki and kunj
wow what a pair..
Usha-y whts wrong in my son
infact i m happy at this leela
i ll send one daughter to ur home and so i ll get ne..
mahi ki kami twinkle puri kardegi

Uv gets up side hugs both his mom and MIL and says
my dearest MIl if these both get married na then insted of doing romance their fight would be more..
and imagine
both in one room..
and what whould be the halat of room?
it would be just mess
but my dear MIl u are benifited by it
as if twinj are married then u dont need a TV in ur home..
full to entertainment machine..
hahahaha!
mom sorry to say but i complety disagree with the proposal of kunj and twinkle..
just then they hear some noise
UV-lo shaitan ke bare mein abhi pori bate huvi bhi nahi and they are here
challo lets c how wht these are up to..

Kunj is full to wet and is running behind twinkle..
t-sorry kunj..i really din c u
K-ohh really..?
T-bhai ki..nahi..browni ki..nahi nahi meri kasam kunj
K-dont lie siyappa queen...i now u
T-aree my cutie pie i m saying truth only
k-first dont call me that and u wait..

Twinkle runs towards uv and hides behind him

K-DJ move away..i m not goinfg to lev this siyapaa queen today..
UV-abb kya huva
T-bhai i was watering plants and talking to bhabhi on cell..
i din c kunj there and splashed water on him..
K-dont lie oky siyappa queen
T-i m not lying sadu sarna
K-cant u see a 6ft tall handsome and hot man
T-handsome?hahahaha!
and hot also? hahhahhahahha!
shakal deki hai kabi ayeenee main?(did u c your face ever in mirror)
K-now i m not going to spare u..
u wait..
TWinkle runs and kunj chasing her..
suddenly twinkles ankel twists and she falls down..
all are shocked at this..
kunj immediately runs to her and cares her leg
sking if shes fine..
he immediately pics her in his arms..and moves in..
Uv smiles at this..
leela and usha are tensed..
and were about to go in
maaa..,a voice is heared from back,yes its Uv
han beta,says Usha and leela
Uv-i think ur right
kunj is perfect for our twinkle..

U&L-we are always right!
trio share a hug..

kunj places twinkle on bed..and asks if shes ok..
she nods..
he asks if its paining..
she says no i m fine..
K-let me c once..
he touches her ankle..she feels a unusual feeling
he gives a massage..and asks her if its feeling better..
she nods..
just then our trio enter-usha leela and uv
K-so u fine na?
t-han kunj i m..and ur massage was good..
y dont u open a spa..
u call ur self handsome and hot na u ll get to know through it..
when all girls will run far away from u..
Kunj gives his dedly look..that look with which all girls can fall off..guess which?
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yup its one eyebro up wala look

seeing this twinkle says but u dont get sad ok..i ll cm to ur spa..
K-ohh really?
and starts tickiling her ...
Uv-twinkle ur fine na?
T-yes,bhai perfectly
UV-btw say me one thing..
u guys are friends or enemies ?
some time frnds
some time enemies

k-let me clarify..
T & K lok at each other and kunj winks at her
K-I m her enemy
T-he is my enemy
T&U-and so what are enemies enemy called
friend!
but v are Enemity+friend=Enemend
all laugh..
just when twinkl also notice leela standing their.
and stops laughing..
just then twinkle gets a call..
she attends it..and starts jumping..
she hugs Uv and kunj and usha and was about to hug leela but stops..
Uv-kya huva y so happy?
T-bhai i had applied in clg..and i just got a call that i m selected..
K-Ohh no..
bagwan ko meri kushii dekhi nahi zati kya?
abb muzje isse clg mein bhi zelna hoga?
T-that was my dialogue..
she says i m so happy
i ll call bhabhi and tell this news..

Precap-depends on my brain..

hope u enjoyed and sorry for playing few pranks in between..
just wanted to irritate u guys..
i ll be back on 2nd or 3rd with another episode..

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This story is interesting..many twist and turns..loved it
Kunj and twinkle are enemies of each other 😆.
Want to know their past..how they got married, abt their child, Y they got separated nd ol.
Please update soon.
Waiting for the next update.
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Originally posted by: tikit

Vaishali interesting story.

Want to know how did twinkle have memory loss.
Lol he will seriously buy the mall.
Sadu sarna siyappa queen😆🤣
Continue soon.


You'll soon find out and yes Kunj loves his Siyaapa Queen.😊😊
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Originally posted by: tricksters

This story is interesting..many twist and turns..loved it

Kunj and twinkle are enemies of each other 😆.
Want to know their past..how they got married, abt their child, Y they got separated nd ol.
Please update soon.
Waiting for the next update.


Yeah Yaar u'll soon find out😊😛
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Originally posted by: justchillalways

Nice update. Very eager to know what the past is. You are increasing the suspense day by day. Please update soon.very well written and the suspense is build amazingly.


Thanks and yeah i'm trying to keep u guys in suspence😛😊
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Originally posted by: amlavs

Awesome..

Am so curious abt the past..
Twinj babies..
Loved it..
Plz continue soon..


Thanks😊😛
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Thanks guys soo much for the support u all have been giving me.Love u all⭐️
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Originally posted by: tricksters

This story is interesting..many twist and turns..loved it

Kunj and twinkle are enemies of each other 😆.
Want to know their past..how they got married, abt their child, Y they got separated nd ol.
Please update soon.
Waiting for the next update.


You'll find out and btw thanks😊😛
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PART 9

Twinj Love Strategy (Episode 9)

So,i m back..
with the next episode..
and remember guys we are still in flashback..

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and some one asked me a question..from where twinkle came back..
so guys as i mentioned before twinkle was studying in abroad so she came here and is wishing to study in India now on instance of her brother Uv..

and some ome asked me..how twinj got seperated?,who is tej?,why is twinkle angry with leela?..so for that plz stay tuned to FF..I'll release it also soon

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Recap-twinkle gets admission in the clg..and the clg turns out to be the same one in which kunj's studying..and leela and usha blackmail Uv to convince twinkle for marriage

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Want to clear one confusion of u all-
Plz note that usha ,kunj and mahi are staying with leela only
Usha is from amritsar so is leela..
but usha and family stay in mumbai
and leela and family stay in amritsar..
but due to marriage preprations all are in amritsar..
kunj is studying in some clg in amrtsar..
so due to this all are staying in one house only..i.e with leela and family..in amritsar

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Twinkle get up from sleep..
she doesn't open her eyes but simply takes a pic and says good morning baby..(u might have guessed who's it?)
look today is first day of my clg..i know i m not a fresher their but in final year but still i'm new to it and want all to be oky..
so as my pamperer i'm must c ur face..right..
here kunj comes and stands infront of her just listening what is she saying..
and smiles at her..
she open her eyes sees the pic..kisses it and says love u..
then sees kunj their..

T-what are u doing here..?
don't u have any work..
K-i have but maa..said me to take u with me to clg as u are new..so came to check..
but u are still on bed..so i m leaving..
T-what u think of ur self?i can come by my own..
K-oky..but the clg is new to u
T-i can manage..
K-lets see..but if u can't call me..don't dare to become 'jansi ki rani'..there got it..
T-oky my cutiee pie..
K-i literally don't get u..
some times i seem to u as sadu and some times cutie pie..
ufff
come fast..and
T-i know i know don't dare to become jasi ki rani,or do any siyappa or use ur brain..
right..
K-wrong..

both laugh..
K-shall i ask u something..
T-u r my Enemnd so u have full right..
K-then plz if u really feel i m so,then move on and forgive leela aunty..
T-i have moved on..but cant forgive her..and u say me are u here to justify her..?
If so then just leave today is my first day in clg..
i don't want to get late..
K-but..
T-plzz..
K-fine..

Twinkle sees the pic and says i'll never forgive ur murderer. Tej .Never !

She gets ready and comes down..
L-puttar have ur break fast..
T-makes face
U-han puttar come have c..ur fav salad is here..
T-thanku so much aunty but i m late..i ll have something out..
i ll leave
M-wait..
first have curd..as its ur first day..
mahi makes her feed it..
twinkle hugs her and usha and says them bye..
and UV comes their..come i ll drop u..
T-han bhai..

Twinkle reaches clg with Uv..
just then kunj also comes..
Uv hugs twinkle and gives her a long lecture to stay attentive in class..no need to mingle with boys more..
and bla bla bla..

Kunj and twinkle look at each other ..
twinkle pleads kunj..
K-ok,ok,ok,ok..now if all this is over then shall we leave..
actually now Singh sir s class is their and he hates late commers..
Uv-oky
twinj are about to leave
when uv calls kunj

Uv-kunj,take care of her plzz..and don't fight also atleast for me plzzz
K-oky

k-abb chal twinkle
T-oky my rasgulla
K-twinkle seroiusly? rasgulla?
t-han i mean ur so chikna(🤣) ,fair..like rasgulla then i can call u that right?
k-u are too much nautanki basfirst sadu.then cutie,now rasgulla..aur kuch baki hai..
T-haan but not now..btw who's this Singh sir,
K-now we don't have any class..as all lecturers have went for meeting..
T-Haww u lied to bhai..
K-u pleaded me to save u so i lied to DJ..
t-don't u dare call him that i said u many times but u never listen to me..
K-do u listen to me..i m saying u since one month to forgive leela aunty
T-do u want me to again repeat same..fine u never understand me..i said u so many times not to again and again hurt me by repeating it but u..u never listen

She has tears in her eyes..
Kunj feels sad..
he side hugs her and says i m sorry..
yaar plzz..i was just..
i mean..(he was less of words so he changed the topic)

I HATE THE TEARS PUSHPAA..

Twinkle smiles a bit and says i'm not puspaa..
K-oky come i ll make u meet my friends..and yeah twinkle listen..i need ur help..plzz

T-my help?
K-actually..he sees a girl coming towards him he identifies her.and gets shocked..twinkle tu meri dost hai na..so u should lie for me..

T-lie..hmm...oky..
and whats that..?
K-be my Gf..!
T-what?are u crazy?
K-plzz yar..
T-hmm..oky..badle mein kya milega..
K-jo tu mangee
T-promise
K-han han han..
chipku is comming..so get ready for acting..

Kunj drags twinkle to all his frnds..
(guys i have added 5 frnds here-Chinki, Rahul, Nikhil, Maya, Shanaya[urff chipku])

K-hai guys meet her..she's twinkle..
and twinkle these are my friend..
chinkii,rahul ,nikhil,and maya
Shanaya-and me..?she comes and hugs him..
Twinkle is shocked..
kunj frees himself and pleads twinkle..
T-ohh hi guys..and hello i think ur shanaya..
S-hello twinkle...
She was holding kunj's hand tangled in hers..
twinkle comes and seperates it..and tangles her hand and says nice to meet u..i hope kunj said to u that i m his girlfriend..
all 5 friends together -what?Girlfriend?! And that to of kunj..?!
Nikhil-he never said me about it..
rahul-yeah..kab se chal raha hai yehh?
Kunj and twinkle look at each other
K-2 sal
T-3 sal
chinki-what?2 or 3
T-let me explainkunj proposed me 3 yrs ago..and i accepted it after a year..


Kunj gives 'what the' look..twinkle smirks..
Kunj having no option stays silent..
Twinkle gets a call..and excuses her self..
Shanaya also had left the place in anger and seeing her gone he starts laughing..
Hugging nikhil
RAhul-hi bro u are fine na..?
K-han yaar absolutely.Did u see that shanaya..i mean when i introduced twinkle to her?
Chinki-she is madly in love with u but leavet that shanaya u tell us..when did this twinkle some from and 3 yrs man seriously..u didn't even bother to tell us..
K-twinkle is my best friend that's it..not any GF..i asked her to help me get rid of her..
Maya-what?
K-but seriously..she's damn good actor..
RAhul-tabhi toh main sochu..ki tujh jaise duffer ko itni hot and happening ladki kase mili..
(that y i was wondering how did u get a hot and happening girl like her)
Nikhil-kunj chipku is coming this way..
Chikki-worst part she is happy kunj..and smiling too
Maya-more worst then this twinkle is not with u to save u
Rahul-and more worst is(kunj cuts him off)
K-han han abb plzz stop and lets just move to class..but where is this siyappa queen..
Nikhil-what did u say.?
rahul-which queen?
Kunj-are leave all this
Kunj is about to run away when when Shanaya calls him
K-yes,any prob Shanaya

S-i knew it..
K-what u knew it
S-about twinkle
K(get tensed)-what u knew..?
S-that she is not fit for u..!and is a cheap girl
K(in angry tone,as obvious being a hero he won't listen anything against her)-mind u r tounge shanaya..and before speaking about her..make sure about whom are u speaking and to whom are u speaking..
S-fine..i knew u won't listen to me..so i came here to show u something..
come with me..
she drags him..and all other people also follow her..
S-see look their..
(pointing at a guy standing near a car with twinkle)
Kunj-siyappa queen plz not another one..
S-i said u na..,come lets go their..
All come towards twinkle and she hugs a guy...and just then a oldy guy comes and says hello to them
Nikhil-are he's our principal..
chink-but what is twinkle doing with the guy and the princi
Rahul-only she can answer..
Maya-but directly going and confronting is wrong..
and princi and the guy had left and twinkle was coming back..
(note the guy was facing his back all the time)
T-what are u guys doing here..?
she hugged kunj saying all right na kunj?u look tensed
S-common kunj question her..now..
T-about ?
K-nothing twinkle come lets go it time for our class
T-haan but what is she confronting about..atleast let me here her..
K-nothing u met DJ na..so she taught something else
T-donlt call him that ..
K-what ever u say he is my Dj and he'll be called same by me..oky..
T-you..i wont leave u today..
she runs behind him..but slips and falls down...he laughs..
C-this is very bad..how could u make her fall haan..she come to maya..
pats on her back and by pushing her and making her fall fall purpously..says u should not push her this way..
all laugh on twinkle and maya..
now all make each other fall..
and have a cute time..

C-Vaise twinkle who's this DJ
T-my bro
M-bro?is his name DJ..
T-are no his name is Yuraj Taneja
M-What did u say Taneja?
T-haan..i m Twinkle Taneja..
N-omg yar so ur the sister of that business man Yuvraj..
R-and also nanand of Mahi dii right..
M-and also sister of Tej Taneja the great piano artist..
Twinkle was in tears and just ran out..

Kunj comes their after attending a call..and see all tensed..
hi guys ,what happened ?and where is this twinki?and maya r u crying?
M-no,but vo twinkle
K-kya huva twinkle ko..?all fine na?
all stay silent
K-guys plz speak up..twinkle is very sensitive..plzzz
nikhil and rajat narrate all things..
Kunj gets tensed,but maya how u know about tej..and y d hell u guys opened this topic and that t infront of her..u girls didn't had anyother topic kya to speak..i just hope twinkle is fine..
she can go to any extent in anger and depression..
Just then twinkle comes..
Kunj hugs her and says all fine na...u are fine na..
look twinkle they didn't know anything about him so plz relax..and control the anger plzz..
kuch toh bol yar
T-i want to go home..
K-what
T-Home!
K-now!
T-yes
K-fine come i ll drop u
T- no i'll go alone
K-no u r not! I'll accompany u and thats final!
T-ok
Maya-twinkle i m sorry..
T-its k..but how u know him
M-hes my past
T-so u are maya kapoor
M-yes..
Twinkle hugs her and says I'll leave now..bye..


Precap-Another episode also on way so chillax..

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So a treat for u all i'm still continuing this FF but am starting a next one.

Recap-
Remember v r n flash back still...
Twinj n Clg..Maya gets our d truth f tej...

Twinkle is very frustrated..kunj notices this..
but seeing kunj is with her she controls herself..kunj very well knowing her behaviour tries to distract her mind..
he says ur a great actor yar..
T-hmm..
K-u just drove off..did u see shanayas face when i said u as my GF..hahaha
T-hmm(she was lost in her own world)
kunj understood it..
K-so shall we go home
T-hmm
K-u love DJ na
T-hmm
K-U love mahi
T-hmm
K-u love maa
T-hmm
K-u love me
T-hmm
K-u want me to kiss u
T-hmm
and sudeenly kunj puts break and twinkle in jerk comes to her sences and says what?
K-what?he comes close to her..few inches apart..
T-what are u doing..
K-u said u want me to kiss u..so fulfilling my promise
T-no..never..nahi..nahi..ille
kunj laughs loud
K-did u c ur face..
wait let me take a pic of u..
he clicks a pic and twinkle gets more frustrated
T-are u driving or shall i lev and take a cab
K-no..its k i m here na..
twinj reach home..
T-kunj u go back to clg..
i m fine..u go and attented the classes ii m absolutely fine..
K-but..
T-all are waiting for u..u muct lev..
K-hmm..k

twinkle goes in..and just walk to her room..
she locks her self and cries..
she takes out the pic..

"- * "- * FLASHBACK * "- * "-

Its shown that their are 3 people sitting their..
Its uv and tej and twinkle..
Twinkle with two plats
and Uv and tej making her hair proper as shes their ankon ka tukda..
their are her next parents..
just then a lady enetr and starts laughing..
Puttar what have u done to twinkles hair..
T-mumma they are my worlds best brothers..i know that but in them whos best?
so they are checking it by making my plat..who makes it best will win this competation..
she was having bread and jam..
accha channg..but have one bread at a time..
u are two are having it simultaneously..
no mumma ..both my brothers prepared it..so if i eat one at once then other will feel bad so..both at atime..
leela laughs..
just then leela says tej puttar..go and get few clips from my draw it ll look best..
to her he nods..and runs to get it..
but twinkle stops him..
and says no tej bhai dont go..alone..i ll also come..
tej-dont worry mein yun gaya aur yun aya..
he gets the clip..leela stucks them to her and makes her look like a princes..

"- * "- * FLASHBACK * "- * "-

Twinkle looking at photo frame,kitna pyar tha na..teju btwn all of us..
but all was the fake concern..her love was fake..her smile to our deeds was fake..
she her self is fake
but u know what i met my bhabhi today..u know na u said about her onnly to and today c shes was here..with me..she turned out to be my classmate..
i wish u could be here..
Y did u lev me alone..y?
just then she gets aknock at the door.
she clears her face..
and removes the bolt of her room for her surprise..
there stood few people fully covered with flowers..
she stood same for few minutes..
some voice over took her cons
can we enter our legs are paining..
she took a flower out and said yes..
and it was revealed that all are her friends..
nikhil,rahul,chinki and maya and kunj..
all get in..
Chinki-wow yar ur room is so good..
any way how was our surprise..
T-good
maya-just good..
kunj notices tejs pic their..
he goes and just keeps the pic on its place..
kunj-anyway now no more rona dhona..
come we are going out u get ready fast..
chinkii and maya..plz help her coz she takes 2 hrs 18 min exactly to get ready and we dont have so much time..
Nikhil-what so much time?
Kunj-han
T-dont complain on me oky..
did i ever complain when u keep speaking to deepika's pic showing her ur body..muscles..
bada aya Sharuk khan bane..
K-dont compare me to the oldy of 50 oky..
T-ooo hello mr..ur not even a inch close to him..
and dont forget ur deepika loves to do mivies with him..
and the guy ur telling oldy na has millions billons girls back of the same oldy..
han
Bandar kya jane adrak ka swad..
K-awww
T-aww ctiee is getting angry..
K-dont call me that'siyappa queen
T-sadu kahi ka
just then usha enters
uff hooo chuppp
u guys again started naa..
she puuls kunjs ear and asks y is he troubling her always..
K-aa..uchhh..maa its paining n i din trouble her she started..
T-aww! kunj is lying he started
K-lying han n that too me..wait i ll tell u..
both run all over the room..
and knowing kunj is full too in form..
she quickly starts trowing pillow on him..
but it hits nikhil..
N-y did u throw it on me.. twinkle
wait i ll tell u..he throws it aand it hits chinki..
now chinki throws on kunj and kunj on rajat and he on twinkle and she again on maya..
all start fighting..
and just then kunj smirks at his idea and says stop...
i ll say whos the culprit..
who started the pillow fight first?
all look at twinkle

who threw it on nikhil..
again all look at twinkle..
so the culprit is..
and all start chasing twinkle now twinkle huridly runs down and and runs hear and their..and at last goes to browine..
kunj suddenly stops looking at going to direction of where brownie is.
he stops
R-aree now what come fast..
twinkle ll escape
Kunj has flashback of his and brownies first meet and shouts nooo brownie..
N-what
maya-whos this
Chinki-seems a dogs name..
T-exactly..meet my dog browine..
it just loves kunj a lot..hai na kunj..
Kunj starts sweting..
ye..yeah...i mean he loves me so much that..
he quickle climbs the sofa..
twinkle winks at chinki and then others ..
so all understand that kunj is scared of brownie..
but not only kunj but there is someone else too..
suddenly browine starts barking..
and UV comes out and says whats going on..i m not able to concentrate..
T-hai bhai..these are my frnds..and we were just playing..with browine..and kunjs and browines relationship a
Kunj takes a shie of relief and says thank god u are here Dj these all were..(uv cuts kunj)
and shout browinee..
browine had some file in his mouth..
twinkle starts laughing..
and says browinee chuuu chuuu!
now browine starts running behind Uv and UV sees mahi their and goes to her..
ISS duurr bhaga yarrr mahi plzzz
Mahi starts laughing and says i was waiting ffr u in mall and u r here..
T-bhai very bad..
Chinki wishpers something in twinkles ears and twinkle in mayas ears so slowly..
twinkle walks..slwoly to browine..
and takes it with her and says something to it.
K-siyappa queen tu iss kutee ki kan mein kya kusur pusur kar rahihai..?
Mahi-dont dare him call kutta..
he has so cute name..
Maya-exactly..
all girls start playing with them..

Mahi-twinkle plan B..
T-oky bhabhi..
So ready chinki..
C-whats that plan but..?
Maya-the oe u said just..
C-oky oky..
Nikhil and rajat were gigling all around..at kunjs and UV..twinkle asks them to stay silent..
twinkle slowly takes brownie and says chuu!
Kunj says abb hasso!
all boys run here and there..
and all get tired..
at last Uv screams to put him in..else i ll remove it from home..
KUnj feels good seeing twinkle laughing and forgeting what had happened in morning..
Mahi-now challo get to work..
T-work..
Mahi-han did u see what mess we created here..
come on guys..
all clear the mess..
and says they are hungry..
kunj orders pizza..and every one have it..

Evening..
usha and leela are talking..
L-now i m revealed..usha
U-y?
L-i got a perfect match for my daughter..
U-smiles
l-s..she ll be happy ..now i ll decide about clothes and jewelery as very less time is left..
and date also we revmoved only na for marriage..so all ll be ok..
Twinkl who heard all this could not stop her anger..
T-s,...so the history is repeating..my marriage is fixed..clothes and jewelery shopping list is done..date is fixed and i dont know anything right..
L-no beta..
T(shota)-dont dare come front or show ur fake concern to me..
Y are u back of me..first u killed my bro..now want to control my life..
han
(kunj uv and mahi come their)
Uv-twinkle stop it..
T-no bhai i ll speak today..
she is doing my marriage u know!n the best is she choose boy..fixed date..and i dont know about it..
bhai ko mar ke jee nahi bhara jo abb mere jaan lena chahati ho(are u not satisfied by killing my bro that now u want to kill me han?)
UV-(in anger and in loud voice)twinkle i said st op..
T-woww...
did u c..
my bhai din raise voice on me till now and today that also happened..
hope u are satisfied by it..
i just hate u got it!..
i hate u..
ur not fit to be called mom also..
Uv -(could not take it)and gave a tight slap to twinkle
Twinkle was in such a shock that shetouched her cheeks to c if its true..that her bhai slaped her..
twinkle cryingly goes to her room..
she bolts the door..and cries heavily..
K-what th hell DJ
how could u raise a hand on her
MAhi-uv..are u my Uv who love his sister..is he the sm Uv who could not c tears in his princess eyes and is reason today for her tears..
U-Uv u should not have did that..
twinkle cries vigorsly
and takes a bottle in her hand

"- * "- * FLASHBACK * "- * "-

It was a fine vevening..
Both brother and sister were having fuu with leela when the fire caught their home..
leela and all the others gor scared..
leela quickly took twinkle with her and rn out and said beta u two be here i ll come back..ok
she gave them her shawl and said wrap it around u..i ll save u my child wait for ur mumma..
tej and UV just noded..!

USha took first twinkle as she was smallest..
she kept her out..
t-mumma plz save bhai and tej..plzz..
L-han beta mumma is here na i ll save them
Ok..
leela runs in and gets two boys..
but while exiting she got struck..
she quickly made one of the boy torun out..
but she got struck...with the other..
and later she left tej their only and came out with Uv which was witnesses by twinkle
"- * "- * FLASHBACK ends * "- * "-
leels was crying and uV was making her feel that it was not her fault..
Uv-maa..u know na that the truth is differnt
u tried saving tej but..winkle took it wrong..
and taught it smething else..but truth was something else..

"- * "- * FLASHBACK * "- * "-

tej uv and leela were coming out..
when leea was about to take them..
tejs hand got struck and exit was blocked ..
but leela managed to push uv out and was shouting at tej to come..
but tej hand had got struck..
and fire was about to lit his hand..
so tej pushed leela and he jumped in fire..
where it was looking as if leela was trying to escape and pushed tej to herself become safe..

"- * "- * FLASHBACK ENDS* "- * "-

twinkle looks at tejs pic and says teju i love u..now i cant stay away from u..and if i m alive this women will make me marray or her benefit..
and destroy my life..
so better na if i come to u..

twinkle swallos few pills and says goodnight..
she keeps the bottle in drawer..
and goes and sleeps..
and thinks even if any one comes and finds me then they ll think that i m sleeping and wont be able to save me also..

Twinkle sleeps..
its night...
Uv comes to dinning area and asks where are all..
every one come their..
as Uv dont like anyone to disrespect food..
a brothers eyes,a moms eyes,a best friends eyes are searching for some one..
they all wait..
for some time..
UV-she wont come..lets start eating..
Kunj was controling his anger..mahi kept hand on his sholder to calm him..
K-dii i cant take it anymore..
I dont get it how a bro can act so calm..
i m going to call her if u want or dont want..
UV-no..u wait..i ll go..
K-if u really wanted u could havebefore only..u enjoy dinner i ll call her..

kunj goes and bangs the door..
he keeps banging..
twinkle plzz open yar..
(some thing strucks his mind..)
browinee cms their and starts barking
all go up listing to browine..
all start banging the door now..
kunj breaks the door with Uv and get in..
UV-lo..yee t..shes sleeping so deeply
K-but she gets up at browies voice na
Uv-goes to twinkle and cries miserably..

Precap-twinkle in hospital..
and a new twist in story..



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