Twinj FF: Twinj Ki Love Strategy-Imp Note pg 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: tikit

Very nice start. Loved the intro.

Who's ariya and why did twinj separate?
Kunjs pa seems dangerous.
Loved the part when he dedicated the award to ariya. But who is she?
Wheres twinkle?
Waiting for twinkles entry.
Continue soon. It looks interesting.


You'll soon find out and thanks😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Oho finlly mystery solved ariya is twinjs daughter.
Why is reena questioning kunj so much. Is she a detective or something?
So twinkle had an accident and now she is with him.
Did twinkle had a memory loss?
Ajna good going. Continue soon.
The story is mindblowing.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Wow...nice update..
She is just a PA my god..she is too much..
Omg..twinkle lost her memory..poor kunj..
Ariya is their baby..
Am so excited..wanna know Wats gonna happen next..
Plz update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Hey that's a nice update ..
But isn't this the same story which was updated on TU?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice and interesting concept..!
Loved both the chapters!
Update soon and please try to give a long update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jambread3

nice and interesting concept..!
Loved both the chapters!
Update soon and please try to give a long update 😊


Thanks and yeah i'll try😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
PART 3
Continued

Kunj cares the girl..
the girl is none other than twinkle..
Kunj-u don't know twinkle how happy m i seeing u with me..in our bedroom after so many years..
i m just like i cant express this in words..
i just hope u remember me..Our baby Ariya(yes guys Ariya is the darling of kunj..his little daughter...his shining star)

he gently kisses her on her forehead..

he then thinks what if she don't remember me..?
what if her memory is not gained?
no i cant..
he proceeds to go and sleep on couch..

but sees that twinkle blood drained clothes are on couch and now its dirty..
he thinks to sleep with twinkle only but get up early..

He sleeps with her..

Its morning..
Kunj gets up sees that his hand is tangled with twinkles..
he kisses her cheeks..
and says good morning twinkle and goes to freshen up..

Twinkle opens her eyes..
HE loves me so much..
but y m i not able to remember him..

"- * Flashback * "-

Twinkle gets up as she was thirsty..
she sees herself sleeping with kunj..
she says how m i with this stranger..
her head starts paining..
but sees the pics in room and says i m not able to remember anything..
but y?
is he my...?
NO No how can he be..?if he was then i would remember him..!
but if he is not then y m i with him ? and these pics..
she sees the water jar their..
and goes their drinks it and sleeps back..thinking that she will ask him later

"- * Flashbac ends * "-

Shes hears a sound..
she again acts as if shes sleeping..
Kunj comes out from washroom..

kunj talk-Ohh god..
twinkle is still unconscious..
before she regains consciousness i should remove all pics..
as doc has already given me warning that she can have chances of memory loss..
and if she tries to remember anything forcefully then it can hurt her..
he comes to twinkle cares her hair..
tu toh janti hai na..
ki i cant see u with pain..
chall kunj beta before siyappa queen gets up..
u should remove all the pics of urs and twinkles..
atlest till it confirms that she has memory loss or not..

"- * Twinkles POV * "-

he loves me so much..
and his name is kunj..
but he also mentioned that my name is twinkle..
Kunj Twinkle..
Sounds good..
but y he called me siyapaa queen?
anyway i ll ask him..
but before that i should act as if i know him..

"- * "-

Kunj-ohh shit..
I completely forgot about that reena..
she came with me yesterday just to help out twinkle and twinkle ke chakkar mein i forgot..about her..
i should see that shes fine..
and time..
yes i ll go in quick see reena ,ask driver to drop her to her home and then take out all pics from here..

He runs down..
Twinkle open her eyes comes to few pictures..
and says i m glad that i married this guy..
though i dont remember anything..
and y is he again n again telling that he ll remove these pics..
she goes towards the pic of a baby..
(i mentioned earlier that their was a pic of kunj.twinkle and a baby)
whos this cutiee baby..
and y m i and kunj holding her as if shes my baby..
if it is so.
then i should meet her..
if i m her mom..
then i ll meet her she must be worried for me and top on that shes so small too..
she kisses the pic of the baby..

she goes down..and thinks to talk to kunj..

Here kunj comes to hall and notices reena walking here and their..
Reena - Good morning sir,
Kunj - Good morning,i ll tell driver to drop u to ur home..u may be getting late and yeah thanku so much..for yesterday..

(twinkle watches this from upstairs)

Reena-sir,u remember i said u yesterday that their something important to discuss..
kunj-han..yeah i remember..
plz say whats that..
Reena-sir,its personal cum official..
n i know u don't like personal question..
Kunj-yup...proceed..
Reena-sir,media wants u permission to declare something..
Kunj-and whats that something..?
Reena-actually they want to declare u as the best bachlor ..
Kunj-what?are they out of their mind..?
do u even know what are u speaking..
Reena-sir,but whats wrong..
Kunj-reena just stop it...
infact i have a kid..
u asked me yesterday whom did i call darling..the girl was my kid..
and the girl inside their..

n hes interrupted by a voice calling him
Kunj..

Kunj-turned to see that their was twinkle who was calling him..
Twinkle..
twinkle tu yaha..
Twinkle-who's she?
Kunj-just ignore..shes just a employee of my office
Twinkle-she din knew that u are married..and its not her fault..
then y are u scolding ...
(and she faints)

Reena was all in tears..

kunj hurriedly took her back to room..
And asked reena to cal doc immediately..

Doctor examines twinkle..and comes out here Reena and Kunj were waiting impatiently..

Doc-kunj..
KUnj-doc vo teek tohhai na?
Doc-han..
Kunj-and what that u said me yesterday?
Doc-can t say..
Kunj-she called me by my name..
when i was talking to reena..
she din ,mention my name but twinkle knew it...
Doc-ur a personality now..many members know u..its common
Kunj-but no one knows i m married..
Doc-what?
what did u just say..?

Kunj narrates everything to him..
reena was just listening to the convo all time..

doc-thats a great news kunj..
yeah..it is good if she regains all..
they hear the sound from inside..
and all 3 rush in..
twinkle was holding her head and waking up..
kunj helps her get up..

Kunj- are u fine?
Twinkle- han kunj i m fine..
Kunj-what did u say..?
twinkle-are u joking..now don't say me u have hearing problem too..
i called my husbands name thats it..
Kunj looked towards doc..
and then without thinking anything just hugged twinkle..
It was an passionate hug...
Doc- beta u remember that u are his wife..?
Twinkle-actually no and actually Yes..
Kunj-what?
yeah han bhi and nahi bhe ka matlab..
doc-beta twinkle tell me exactly what are u feeling..
twinkle-vo..
Kunj-cups her face..plz say truth only twinkle and plzz no siyappas..
twinkle-vo i remeber that i m married to kunj..i remember about my kid..
i know i m Twinkle Kunj sarna..
But i m trying to remember other things..
and when ever i try my head starts paining..
(she starts crying)
doc-the main thing is..if u remember this then u ll remember other things too..
so chill
Kunj-and plz no tensions and no stress..
Twinkle smiles..
Kunj says i ll just come..
reena plz be here till i be back..

Reena-hello twinkle mam..hope ur good now..
Twinkle-yeah better..
shall i ask u one thing..?
Reena-sure..
Twinkle-from how many years are u working under kunj.
Reena-2 yrs..
and since a year i m his PA
Twinkle-then how come u don't know that hes married..
Reena-actually..this is the first time that i entered his home..
and he never lets anything personal outs..
and hes so strict that to ask him anything personal..i should ask my self..should i ask him this for several time
Twinkle-laughs alod..
is this sadu so strict..
Reena-sadu?
twinkle-aree ur boss
reena and twinkle both start laughing
Kunj comes their..
twinkle whispers Reena lo agaye tumara sadu..boss.
Kunj- i heard it..
Twinkle-kunj i want u to ask reena sorry..
Reena-no mam that fine..it was my mistake..
and its obvio that sir rection was completely okay..
Twinkle-kunj..u..
where did he go..?
Reena-never mind mam..hes my boss..people go mad to work under him..and girls go mad for him but u know what now their hearts will break..when they will get t know that sir is not a bachlr..

(secne shifts)
kunj-even i cant believe this maa..that she;s back..
i just hope all goes well..
and yes say ariya that their a big surprise for her..
now i ll leave and call back after talking to twinkle and yes i know u are also exitd to talk to her ..
challo maa..love u bye..

Reens was standing back of kunj and was waiting for the call to end..
kunj-yeah..u here..
Reena-sir,doubt..
Kunj-abb kya hai..
Reena-what should i reply to them
Kunj-say them i have refused and u better get that i don't like my personal things coming out..
Reena-yes,sir..
Kunj-driver ll drop u to ur home..
and u can take a leave today..as i m also not going to office and doing all work being in home..
and one more thing..
never ever try to reveal what u saw yesterday and today..
Bye..

Reena-Mrs Sarna named him right,
"SADU"
and hushes off..

Twinkle heared it all..and was confused just when kunj entered..
Kunj-so,what is my wife thinking..
Twinkle-Y are u so much sadu
Kunj-what?what did u call me SAdu?
Then do u think ur Mrs India..?
No ur just Mrs Amritsar and a big siyapaa queen..
Twinkle-stop calling me that..and did u scold her?
shes so nice..
Kunj-then make her ur PA!
they keep fighting..

Do u want to speak to maa..
Twinkle-yes,i want too speak to all..
My maa.
Mumijji
Bhai
Bhabhi
and yeah Ariya also
Kunj-what?u said ariya?
how u know..
Twinkle-After all..i m her mom i know her..

okay then we shall have a chat in evening..
u take rest now..i have some office work i ll be in study if u need anything call me..



ok guys its not proof read so please forgive me

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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Yayyy !!
Im glad u updated this one,it wad so cool like fast and awesome
Thank you thank you
Next is, i knewww it, ariya is their daughter , hehe, im just so glad right now
Oooh, reena is already seeming like an idiot to me, i already hate her,
I loved tge talk about kunjs room, it just makes the story more romantic i guess.
Oh and kunj ka gussa, i mean i would have been drooling by now agar yeh show mein ho rahe hota
Awww. I loved the twinj scene too, it wad adorable, i just hope she dosnt loose memory or even if she does, it would be quite cool for kunj fo manaofy her and pataofy her again
Your story is so full of suspense, update sooon okah ?!
Love you loads,
Sakshi

Ps. Typing from phone, toh maafi for typos


Pss. Also show the comment to ur friend, u guys are literally awesome, keep writing more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Nice..its an amazing update..
Reena is irritating man..
Twinj scene was amazing..
Hope twinkle remember everything..
Can't wait for long time..
Plz upload next part soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
OMG...I loved it..its beautiful.😊
Please update soon...waiting for ur next update😃

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