Twinj SS- pg 14

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

1082575

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: maisarah
Its amusing harshi ...
I needed it...
Thnks ...love u

Glad that u liked it

Quote

1082575

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Finally I wrote a reasonably long update. This was d part that I've truly enjoyed writing. Finally I've been able to keep my idea into words. Hopefully this part is unexpected after reading the first part[sorry for killing Twinkle]. Hope u like it.

Chapter 2

It was evening. I had to go to Hissar. I had to plan a wedding over there. I prayed to God so that this project goes well. Then I close my eyes for a moment to see her face.

Just then, "Puttar! Hissar Jaane ke liye waqt lagega tho agar tumhe time par pahunchna hai tho abhi nikalna padega" Bebe comes in and says. "Ji Bebe!" I say ,I bend down and take her ashirwaad and leave.

I had to drive there. There was a lot of Traffic and then it started getting darker. I knew I wouldn't reach there tonight. God! I should have left earlier
I thought to myself.

On the way I stopped by to get some Dinner and ask directions, and unfortunately my cellphone was dead.

The only place nearby was a dhaba. I really didn't wanna go there as it only reminded me of her. How we used to go to the Dhaba and have parathas.
How much she used to love the food their.

But my stomach was growling. So I went and ordered the food. I did order parathas with extra butter just the way she likes it.

I started eating and how I wished that she was with me right now. How she made fun of me that I eat a paratha with a fork. The moments with her they all flashed right in front of my eyes. Tears rushed out of my eyes. I want her back.

I looked up to the sky and wished upon the brightest star which was Twinkling. "I want her back, please" I closed my eyes.

"Bhai saab, paisa" the man asked me breaking my trance.

I gave the man the money and asked him the directions. He pointed towards the right.

I got into my car and drove a little further to find two paths. I was confused which path to take.

I thought for a minute. I decided to go with my gut feeling which was telling me to go through the first path I didn't know why. The road was pretty good. I was initially enjoying the drive I put the Windshield down. The breeze the drive was really nice.Until I heard someone shouting. It was a man. I drove towards the direction where the sound was coming from. I got down and walked down there. I hid behind a tree to see exactly what was happening.

A man was bruised he was surrounded by a group of people he said "Tiger aap Sab ko chodega nahi Aur jab..." He says trying to grasp his breath.

"Jab kya?" They say laughing at him. I decide to call the police.

I take out my phone. Then I realise that my phone is dead. Damn! I thought to myself. One of the guys of the group takes a gun out and points in towards him. That's it I have to stop them.

"Stop!" I shout.

The group of people look at me. "Tho Tum bhi Tiger ke Aadmi Ho, Marne ke liye tayaar Ho Jao" the guy with the gun says giving an evil laugh. He tells two of the men to come and get me.

They come towards me. One of the guy grabs my arm. I hit him in the stomach using my knee. He screams in pain. The other one screams "Oye!" And punches my jaw. The pain takes over my face. It hurt so much I started feeling dizzy. But I didn't give up. I kicked him , he falls on the ground.

The other men of the group come running towards me leaving d man with the gun. They had sticks , they all attack on me at the same time. I fight back.

Until someone hits me on my head from behind. Another punches me in the stomach. I fall down hitting the ground. I try my best to keep my eyes open. I felt that I was gonna pass out any moment. Two men drag me to where the man with the gun was standing there he pointed the gun, towards the man.

The man who was bruised looked at me with appreciation. I was helpless at the moment, I knew it was the end of me. "Twinkle..." I say as the pain started becoming more evident.

Suddenly a roar came, a roar of an engine. A bike came and stood in front of us. The rider had a helmet on, he was dressed in black he wore a black leather jacket. The guy put his gun down. "Wah! Ek aur..." He laughed. "Aaj Sultan bahut khush hoga, Tiger ke theen aadmi " he says putting his sleeve up.

The bruised man "Ab Tera band bajega" he said trying to get up. The rider removed the helmet, it was a girl. Her brown hair flew along with the breeze. It was hard to makeout that it was a girl because of the oversized leather jacket. She removed her leather jacket showing her petite figure. I couldn't see her face her back was turned towards me.

The men laughed and said "Tiger Kudh nahi aa sakta tha apni Behen ko bheja ". "Tu kya bigadegi hamari, tu tho ek ladki hai" said the guy with the gun said laughing.

She kicked him hard on his chest. He fell straight on the ground. All the other men were shocked.

"Tiger ne apni Sherni ko bheja hai" the man who was bruised says smiling.

The other guys attack her. She punched them, she kicked them and few of them even fell unconcious.

The man with the gun got up with difficulty and came to shoot us. I wasn't able to get up the pain was too much.

The girl had made the other men unconcious. She turned.

"Twinkle!" Her name comes from my mouth. It was her, she was right in front of me.

How? Didn't matter. All that mattered was that she is back. She didn't change a bit. Her beautiful face.

I thought I was gonna go to her. But Babaji sent her to me. My happiness had no limits.

"Twinkle!" I say. She couldn't here me.

She grabbed the man who was gonna shoot us by the neck and bangs his head straight to the ground. She twists his arm behind and takes the gun from his hand. "Kya bola Tum ne main ladki hoon Aur main tumhara kuch nahi bigad sakti" she tells him. " agli baar Tum ne ek ladki ko underestimate kiya tho..." She says banging his head to the ground once again. The guy falls unconcious.

She gets up , she doesn't see me. She goes towards the man who was bruised and says "Madhan Bhai aap teekh tho hai na" dusting her black jeans off. He nods and keeps her hand on her head blessing her.

"Twinkle " I say one more time hoping that she would realise. She turned towards me moreover shocked. Even the man looked shocked. She bends to see who it is. Tears rush down her eyes. "Kunj" she says.

Character Name credit : Griffy and Sanju

Hope u liked it

To be continued...

Edited by harshi2000 - 9 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Ohohoho...
Fascinating update ...
I didn't expect this ...
This is something beyond my imagination ...
Loved it completely ...
Twinkle in action mode ...wawawa ...
Who is tiger ? and why they people tried to hurt kunj ? what is role of twinkle here ?
Oh my god ...so many questions...
Update asap...
But brilliant job ...

Special mention : I commented even before receiving pm 😆
From that you can guess how much I am curious about this story...

Edited by Alvapriya - 9 years ago

Quote

1082575

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Alvapriya
Ohohoho...
Fascinating update ...
I didn't expect this ...
This is something beyond my imagination ...
Loved it completely ...
Twinkle in action mode ...wawawa ...
Who is tiger ? and why they people tried to hurt kunj ? what is role of twinkle here ?
Oh my god ...so many questions...
Update asap...
But brilliant job ...

Thank u Harshu

love u yaar

Glad that u liked it

Gosh! Itni jaldi pad li

I just send d PM

Thanx for reading