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@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

tashu why do you write such angsty pieces that play with my heart!!!

😆😆 you know how much i love your angst filled OS's and this one was amazing as well!!

i loved every part of it! and you played with the emotions so well!!

waise i'm happy there was a happy ending 😆 i think i would have died if there was a sad ending!!

loved it as usual 🤗

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sakshi

@..queen..

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

oh didi !!

such perfection, I would not want yuvi to do something of this sort, btu if he does, then this is all I want

well didi, it was amazing, all ur os's are amazing(do I even need to say this?)

but god, I loved this story, high on emotions I agree, but im glad you wrote it, it seems...I don't know...relatable?

whatever it may be, I reallly loved it,

sakshi

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Komal1298

@Komal1298

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

I had tears nd happiness all at once.. thanku so much natasha😊

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

SO PERFFF!!!

I can totally feel the agony Twinkle goes through and the disappointment and pain Kunj felt over her decisions.

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Tranquility123
I am coming back with my cup of tea and reading this after I've read Shakti's shot first 😆
Res.

Unres.

I'm glad they reunited quicker than I expected! Thank you for having mercy on our hearts 😆
This was adorable! I loved how Kunj figured out the donor thing so quickly, our sher ❤️

Lovely read Natasha!

I was contemplating about the 3 days too lol but thoda time toh separate karna hi tha😉

Our Sher truly

Thank you😳

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: harshi2000
This is really touching
Absolutely loved it
But what happened to yuvi

Thank you Harshi😳

I sort of made him escape,i wasnt keen on adding Kunj and Yuvraj's fight😆

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Anisha-k.
Wow it's amazing di...
FAB it was !!!
Awww the end was so sweet!😳

Thank you Anisha😳 you are too sweet🤗

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: -WalkThatWay-

This was such a good read..it's no secret that I enjoy reading stories that are filled with angst and emotions and this was such a wonderful piece..your story really reeled me in and I wanted to continue reading further, why did it have to end

Your use of words and style of writing is immensely impressive..beautiful emotions etched out by the characters and you fully justified their inner turmoil and their never ending love which makes them fight for one another

I'm going to get a little greedy here..if I may request..please do write more such stories

Your comment definitely made my otherwise depressing day!😃😳

Thank you so so much for such appreciation,motivates me to write more🤗

I would definitely write more,THANK YOU😳

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: .Anisha.
Lovely OS 😳

Thank you Anisha🤗

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: tikit
Brilliantly written. High on emotional content and i guess the cvs would show something on these lines. Definitely u are one of the beautiful writers we have on tei forum. Will be waiting for ur other stories as well. Thanks for pm.

Oh!thank you,that is really sweet of you🤗

Glad you liked this one😳

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