TwiNj 3Shot::Talash Twinkle Ki *Teaser* Pg1 19.4.16

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Here I present to you the teaser of my new
3shot:Talash Twinkle Ki.😳
-Teaser-
"Maa mujhe yeh karna hi hoga"Said twinkle who was packing her bags.

"Puttar tu ek baari fir se soch le is it the right thing to do?"asked leela who looked not very happy with the decision that her daughter has made.

Twinkle turned towards her and said
"Maa I don't have any other choice,Mai kunj ko kho nahi sakti aur mai apne app ko yuvi ka hone nahi de skti."
"Lekin puttar kunj ,How will he live without you,woh tujhe bahut pyaar karta hai"said leela.
"I know maa,but iss time kunj ki jaan bachana mere liye bahut zarori hai,yuvi ne blood donate kar diya hai,aur woh mere pass hi atta hoga,mai usse shadi nahi kar sakti"said twinkle.
Leela placed her hand on twinkle's head and gave her blessings.
"Maa mujhe apne pyaar par pura bharosa hai kunj mujhe zaror dhund lega,leking promise me app usse kuch bhi mahi bataoge"said twinkle.
"Haan puttar tu jaa mai usse kuch bhi nahi bolongu aur mujhe bhi nahi oata tu kahan jaa rahi hai,akhir mujhe toh bata de"said leela.
"Maa agar apko bata diya toh app kunj ko bata doge lekin abhi kuch waqt ke liye mera kunj se dur rehna hi sahi hai warna yuvi fir kuch ulta sidha kar dega,kunj mujhe khud dhund lega"said twinkle picking up her bag and leaving to her unknown destination.
-Teaser-

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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Awesome can't wait for chapter 1
Yay! Was waiting for one of your stories absolutely love them
I just can't stop re reading them
They r that amazing
Love the concept eagerly waiting to know how Kunj is gonna find Twinkle
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
ooohh new story !! by you !*grins super big*
well, update soon na...the teaser has me going into the story and I lovvved it
well, jaldi se update dena please
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Bro is back with a Bang...
Nyc start...i mean teaser...
Twinkle goin to unkwnn destinationsm.. Cool.
Wat will Yuvi do...hehehehe..
Kunj toh pakka dhund lega..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Wow. Amazing teaser.
Loved it!
The concept is really nice.
Can't wait for the first chapter.
I'm sure you'll rock it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
awesome start. loved it Hridey. very well done
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
awesome teaser hrideyy
plzzz do continue soon
iam really excited to read more and know more how will kunj find twinkle and alll
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Awesome teaser 😳
Waiting for the first part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
great start hridey. honestly i love all your stories.They all have such unique concept.And the way you shape your characters though very different from the show it somehow still makes me love them.
waiting for you to continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Love the teaser.
Can't wait for the first chapter.

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