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kingmessi

@kingmessi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

May I just say, every word of this one shot gave me heart palpitations.

OH MY GOD. So much fluffy, beautiful domestic!Twinj gooddness I DIE. You're a lovely writer, you've managed to capture the essence of not only Twinj but the other characters too, and so well at that! :D Coming to our adorable couple - the interactions and dialogues exchanged between them were just so Twinj.

I hope I made sense. 😆

WRITE MORE BULBUL ❤️ I'm going to hassle you every couple of days until you surprise us with a new OS 😃 Such a chhupa-rustam you turned out to be :O Now we all know your secret about having the gift of writing adorable Twinj OSs 😆

Edited by kingmessi - 9 years ago

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Aalina.

@Aalina.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Omg teddy.. This is so adorable. I love this goplu twinkle and kunj ki choti siyapa queen..twinkle ka chotu sadu sarna... Loved it..

Cherry.. Hehee and raman mama bhi hai.. Hmm

Keep writing yar

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

THIS IS SOO CUTE AND CHEESY AND ADORABLE!!

The whole dupatta scene in the room was so cute and then the whole moment where Kunj realized she was going into labor. OMG OK I so loved Cherry's inclusion and then Raman Mamu and him fighting over leg piece! It's hilarious and so realistic!

Write often now!!

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RUBAB

@Rubab_Naqvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Omg teddu 🤗

You are brillient my girl realy you amazed me..

It was actually a surprize for me..

M sending you a biggg bear huggg 🤗

Let me tell you this was the cutest os i have ever read..

Realy and lol twinj k chotu waly siyapa queen and saru sarna was beyond the world realy.. btw i missing both of them calling each other this..

Lol cheery or mamu v hain😉 dont tell me cherery likhty hoye tujy mery yad ayi lol😆btw tera title parh k ragian yad aa gyi lol

This was a completely awesome os there was romance tgere was comedy and everything..perfect

Love you teddu 🤗😳

M telling you ab mojhy esi or OS v chahiye.. 😃😆 or chapal tab parain gy jab tou or nhi lekhy gi..okk doo write more

PS.or see see gu m comnting on an OS main karti hon yar stories oy comnt lol just for funn nothing serious😆

Edited by ZawraMalik - 9 years ago

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Eshita

@tikit

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Teddy, it was ur first os it was awesome. Hopefully u will be writing more. This was a brilliantly written one including the major characters. Twinj as twins's parents woohoo. This ones for u❤️🤗

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Sumaiya

@sumaiya-kay

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

OMG Teddy!!!! WHERE have you been hiding your talent?!

This was sooo adorably beautiful! You managed to capture the essence of TwiNj perfectly! This was so THEM! Not only TwiNj but the other characters were captured really well too!

TwiNj were so adorably domesticated in your OS and I could picture them exactly like this if they ever decide to show us them having kids on the show!

This was seriously too cute for words! You really should write more often! A very enjoyable read indeed!!

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docritu99

@docritu99

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+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Awww.. Teddu... It gave me so many feels..

Beyond adorable..

So beautifully penned down.. The idea of twinzies was so cool.. Well thought and well executed..

Now I badly want this in show..

Plz cv's sun rhe h aap..

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teddyyy

@teddyyy

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Guys I am literally blushing AND SO OVERWHELMED by all of your sweet words! As always I pakka wala promise to respond to every single person very soon! I just want to go make other posts pink and look at my tea party too 😆 But I'll be back, seriously I don't think I've smiled this much in a while haha, love you all 😳❤️

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rithvikrocks

@rithvikrocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Aww. This is so cute 😳

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

W*F I AM SO ANNOYED THAT YOU WAITED UNTIL I WENT OFF TO REVISE BEFORE YOU POSTED THIS. WTH TEDDY!

RES.

Okay Unreserved and I'm much more calm now 😆

Oh myyy gawddd Teddy! Seriously how have you not written anything till date? I cant stop laughing and smiling at this! This is like thee pregnancy scene I want to see in TEI. Seriously bro, this was so damn good!

I was laughing at the Raman and Cherry parts in your story, it made it so much more real and hilarious! Cherry wanting to go hospital with them and then his suggestion of recording the birth. Omg stop it I cant! 🤣

Awwhh man, have I said I love this yet? DUDE I LOVE THIS! Kunj's frustration is so on point, like bahadh mein gaya sab kuch, you're fricking having contractions Twinkle! 😆

Raman and Pinni at the end was sooo adorable, you really have their characters etched into your mind #RinniForever 🤣 Cherry coming in and asking why Kunj has two babies was the best! 🤣 Like someone hit the guy up with an anesthetic please just do us the favour!

They had Twins yaaay! I loved how Twinj bickered about the baby being a Sadu Sarna or Siyappa Queen like omg are you being for real? Poor child! 😆

Side Note: I read 'tranquility' in your story and fangirled about myself for a bit 🤣

You definitely need to write more! I really loved reading this. It was so amazing and funny. My sister was giving me dirty looks because I was laughing at my screen 🤔🤣

Edited by Tranquility123 - 9 years ago

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