TwiNj 5S - Don't Fall For The Tutor - Part4/Page21 - Page 9

Originally posted by: kardooks

]okay so I'm going to go out on a limb here and assume that you've read the books or see the movie, it's where he was about to show her his playroom and she thought it was his gaming room with his xbox and stuff. Let's just agree I have a dirty mind☺️

I believe Ps4 is more popular than Xbox. My son have both and the Xbox is gathering cobwebs, also I heard Sid in an interview once said he likes to play on his ps4.

Originally posted by: 17.sonal

I am gonna trouble U alot Fr this...

Update this at the speed of Light..

Whenever it comes up on Frnt page i am like going Crazy..

U r Updating this asap..

This is my Most Favorite... Pls Guys i love all of Urs..

But dunnoo i wnt to read this At this Tym...

Pls Pls Pls. Update ...plsss

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

Sonal you just made my day 🤗

I dont actually know why you guys like this so much 😆 but I'm so glad that you all do! Dont ask me about updates yaar, I am in the most crucial period of my studies right now so its not on my priority list yet, but as soon as you update your deewangi ff, I'll write out the next part of this too 😉 I'm so good at bargaining I know 😆

Thank you so much for your lovely comment!

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

LOOOL Karen my gutterness might drop in your eyes because I havent read any of the books or seen the movie. I attempted to watch it to see what the hype was about but I got bored 20 minutes in so I allowed it. I dont intend to watch or read them in the future either 😆

Seriously dude, I used to think you were such an innocent soul, emphasis on the word used 🤣

Most of the people I know are still into their Xboxes so I just used it. I'll keep the PS4 in mind though 😆

Originally posted by: MaliciousAngel

Okay so i read the first part now. I know i am late, sorry 'bout it but dude this is awesome.

So Kunj and Yuvi are jocks. Cool

The first thing that came to my mind on reading this was how Nate convinced Haley to tutor him in one tree hill. That show is love

Before i go off topic again, kunj's coach sounds so much like whitey. Wait i am again off topic lol

Kunj is a borderline stalker now lol

I liked how they struck a deal. Date ke badle tuitions. Nice plan

So i'll read the next part and comment then

P.S lovely and refreshing concept you got here. Really enjoying it. You are too good a writer

Originally posted by: 17.sonal

DEEWANAGEE FF... I haven't strted writing

No no nooo bargaining here.. Plss..

This 5S is amazing.. It is freakishly Amazing...

Goshhh u here wanna Strike a Deal...

I need to work faster...coz i jus want the next part of this...

U better remember this Comment... I am Gonnna Torture u .. After my update is done...

Studies r Imp.. No.comments abt tht...but pls. BearkTym..u cn.🥱 i am Good at persuading...😉

Originally posted by: kardooks

You falling a few levels down the gutter ladder🤣🤣seriously Nemo don't crack such jokes.

I could understand you getting bored with the movie, they really did a hatchet job, it didn't do justice to the book and yes there was too much hype surrounding the movie.

The first book was the best though, the others were like a romance novel.

YES I AM AN INNOCENT SOUL, what would make you think otherwise😆

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

Take your time Natasha

I have a habit if neglecting commitment (lool I sound so bad)

So not updating it again anytime soon😆

Looking forward to your response!