FF:Mr & Mrs Kunj Sarna

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi friends I am trying to write this I dont know whether it will be OS or FF
hope u all like it... please do put in your views

this is based on after kuwara kunj sarna tries to impress Miss Twinkle Taneja...

CHAPTER ONE
finally Kuwara Kunj Sarna succeeds in wooing Miss Twinkle Taneja
Twinkle & Kunj express their feelings to each other and finally confess their feelings to each other at a family friends wedding

after coming back to Sarna house Twinkle and Kunj looked extreemly happy and Twinkle could not stop her self from smiling thinking about yesterday
looking at Twinkle Bebe finally asked her what happened why she looked soo happy
finally Twinkle told her everything and Bebe was extremely happy
later Kunj came up to Bebe and told her that he wanted to complete the rituals after marriage which they couldn't complete when they got married
Bebe agreed and she was extremely happy
suddenly a plan came up in her mind and she put it in action
she spoke to leela Ush and cherry about it and they decided to put her plan in action
In the evening on the dinner table Bebe said that guruji has asked to perform some rituals for Kunj and so that no more problems come in their lives... Bebe tells Kunj and Twinkle that they will perform the ritual tomorrow in the evening
In the Morning in Twinj's room:
Kunj is getting ready to go to college and twinkle is helping her dear husband
Bebe enters and tells Kunj that he has to come back home early as they cannot delay the ritual
In the evening
Kunj returns from college and starts searching for her beautiful wife but she is nowhere he wonders where she was suddenly from behind he hears a voice it was none other then cherry bhaiya:Oye good for nothing teri aankhain jise dhoond rahi hain woh ghar par nahi haim
Kunj wonders ghar par nahi hai toh Kahaa gai
from behind Bebe comes and tells Kunj that Twinkle has gone to her moms house
kunj says lekin Bebe hamain toh rasam karni thi naa Bebe says ha puttar guruji ne kaha hain ke Twinkle apni Ma ke ghar se taiyaar hogiii ab tu aur sawaal naa kar aur jaldi taiyaar ho jaa tere kapde bed pe rakhe hai
when he enters his room he sees his wedding sherwani on the bed... he is very confused and thinks ye chal kya rahaa hain aakhir yeh chal kya raha hain
on the other hand leela ask Twinkle to wear her wedding dress
and Twinkle tells her mom par yeh kyu... leela tells her up zyaada sawaal naa kar aur jaldi se taiyaar ho jaa waise bhi der ho gai hain
scene ends leaving Kunj and Twinkle totally confused

chapter 2 coming up soon
hope you liked

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is amazing.
Very sweet ,Love it.
Eagerly waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is so amazing!
Cute!
Loving it
Waiting for the next chapter eagerly!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyc.. Please continue soon..
I feell thy r planning for marrying thm.again..😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I did not like it...but i LOVED it!!!
Amazing ff dear...
Aww i wonder what they r trying to do!?
Update the next part soon...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the start 😳
[B]Seems like their planning TwiNj remarriage

waiting for the next part
Do PM me when you update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you for the motivation... glad u liked
wiil update the second chapter vvv soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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i guess i am late
but i loved the start
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter Two
everybody was getting ready in the sarna house where as Anita Luthra was informing UV about what was happening on hearing this UV got vvv angry
Usha heared the entire conversation and went and told Bebe everything then Bebe and cherry where thinking Cherry said dont worry us UV ko toh main dekh loonga
Cherry left hastily to stop UV from doing his rubbish
on the other hand Twinkle and Kunj were heading outside they where wondering why where they going out when the rasam was suppose to be done at home when Bebe and Leela said that venue was out
Kunj and Twinkle where still confused... kuch toh baat hain
Cherry bhaiyaa finally managed to trap UV
on the venue Twinkle and Kunj where suprised and before they could ask any questions Bebe spoke... Kunj tujhe rasam karni thi na to iski sabse badii rasam yahii hain... achchaa Bebe toh yeh plan tha aapka said Kunj haa puttar isi bahaane main tumlog ki shaadi dekhloongi
all headed towards the mandap... UV came running towards the venue but it was too late the rituals had already started and it was time to take the pheras Kunj forwarded his hand towards Twinkle and they took the pheras hand in hand seeing this UV was getting vvv furious... Cherry bhaiyaa interrupted oye good for nothing kyaa huaa bolti kyu band ho gai teriii... dekha UV added Bebe sachche pyaar karne waalon ko laakh koshish karne k baad bhi koi alag nahii kar saktaa...
finally it was time for sindoor and mangalsutra
as kunj put the sindoor and mangalsutra Twinkle closed her eyes and started crying seeing this Kunj wiped her tears and whispered oye siyaaapa Queen tujhe pataa hain na tere aankh main aasoon nahii dekh sakta... and it was time for vidaai and go home
they finally reached home and the grah pravesh was being done... Usha laughingly said is baar sai pair andar daalna warna phir se gau mutra se snaan karnaa padegaa... they all started laughing

hope you liked it
chapter three to b updated soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow superb eagerly waiting for next update

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