Twinj Fan Fiction:*Ishqana Dill*-Last Part updated - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Awesome Aura [can i call u that]
loved it
I love d way Kunj calls Twinkle aap how cute he gives her so much of respect
Cant wait for d next part
Thanks for d quick update


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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Wow...nice..
How rude twinkle nah..she shouldn't be this much harsh...
Poor kunj...but I luved his attitude..
Exciting plz update next part soon..
Thx for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Waah thanks for such a quick update ritika. Wonderful!
My poor kunj 😭 such a sweetheart
Twinkle is too much here..kunj shouldn't speak to her before she apologizes to him.
Can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
awww
it was painfully beautiful
I mean, super awesome
well written
do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: griffy.fz

awesome update loved the last two parts...

u r a great writer dear looking forward to read mre :)


plz cont soon


and thanks soo much for the pm




Awww means a lot to meee...
Thnkuuu...
I ll cnt asap...
Love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: ..queen..

awww
it was painfully beautiful
I mean, super awesome
well written
do write more




Box of huggies nd thnks...
I ll keep wrtng ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: harshi2000

Awesome Aura [can i call u that]

loved it
I love d way Kunj calls Twinkle aap how cute he gives her so much of respect
Cant wait for d next part
Thanks for d quick update






Of course u can call me aura... Cute nme...
Thnks harshi ...
I ll keep updtng as u guys r lvng it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: amlavs

Wow...nice..

How rude twinkle nah..she shouldn't be this much harsh...
Poor kunj...but I luved his attitude..
Exciting plz update next part soon..
Thx for pm...




Yp buddy ... Thnks fr ur apprctn ... Means alot...
Ths tashn ll trn in love ...
Hope u ll enjy ...
Love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Part 7-

Days were passing bt the rltn btwn twnj were all the sme... As twinkle prmsd hrslf to ruin kunjs lyf she was doing evrythng tht irritatd kunj ... Kunj was totlly frustrtd with twinkles tricks bt didnt uttr a wrd against hr ... How will he??? Aftr all kunj lvs hr , no mttr hw she bhvs, his lve fr twinkle will nvr chnge ...
She was his lucky charm , Her smle mks hm relax, her tears stbs his heart , his hpnss was only surrounded by twinkle ...She was the only one fr whm who cn scrfce his lyf hpply...

Twinkle was really angry on hrslf ... She flt bad hrtng kunj bt ...
T- He babaji!!! Yeh kis mitti ka bna hua insan hai ??? main isse jitna dard du , isko jitna chhe prshn kru par ... Par is bndey ko koi phdak hi nhi padta ... !!! Ise to mjhe ghrsa nkl dna chahiya ...par nhi ...
Twnkle was blabberng whn an intrstng pln cme in her mind ... Twinkle didnt ate anythng the whle day though it was the most dfclt thng fr hr to do bt she didnt hve any othr choice ...
Whn kunj came bck hme Manu kaka tld hm about twinkles deed ... Kunj was shckd to hear tht and ran twrds twinkles room with her fvrte dishes...
Twinkle was sitting on her bed mkng a puppy fce ... kunj knckd the door nd went in ...
K- Kaka kehrahe the ki apne khana nhi khaya pura din?
T- Ha ...
K- May i knw the reason ?
T- No...
K- Ok ...
He sat bsde he nd took a full spooned soup to mke her it ...
T- Yeh ap kya krrahe hai , Mr.Sarna ... Mujhe nhi khna ... bolana
He took the spoon near to her mouth ... bt twinkle pushd his hand nd threw threw the soup ...
Kunj was as usual expressionless ... He again took another spoon soup bt twinkle again did the sme wrk ...
Kunj was also relluctant ... He cldnt let his wifey stay in empty stomach ...
Kunj again took tge soup , ths time twinkle cldnt throw it ... She was amused by his bhvr ... She ate the soup ...kunj wshd her gd nght nd was abt to leave whn twinkle askd ...
T- Mr. Sarna ... Gussa nm ki bhi ek cheez hai duniya me , woh aati bhi hai kbhi apko?
Kunj smld a bit ...
K- Gusse se bhi jyada takat pyaar mein hota hai ... Bht rat hgaya hai ... You tke rst ...
Kunj left twinkle in a overloaded confusional state... She threw her pillow nd slept ...

3 weeks later-
Twinkle was so hppy ... Bcz Amaya , her choti was cmng bck frm paris ... She was so exctd to see her ...
T- Amu arahi hai ... Awww ... Mujhe kitne sari preprtns krni hai ... Ok frst of all mjge mall jana chhiye ... I shld buy a nyc gft fr her ... Perfect ...
Twinkle left for mall ... She was cnfsd abt wht ro buy fr her choti ... Bt suddnly she rmmbrd about her fvrte perfume which wasnt available in paris ... So twinkle went to perfumes shop ... She saw a huge ravishing ladies collections shop... Dhe entrd thre... She bought 3 prfms fr amu , chinky nd hrslf ... After pyng whn she was abt to leave she jogged with a shelf nd the shelf whch was full of prfms fall...
All the staffs cme running ...
Staf- Mam , yeh kya kiya apne ...Sare tod dia??
T-I m really vry sry... I .. i ...
Kitne ki loss hui hai aap bata di je ... I ll pay fr it ...
S- Yaha pe 1000000 ke prfms tha... And ofcrse ye aphi ko pay krna pdga ...
In tht mmnt mngr came ...
Twinkle said to hrslf " Babaji main ab kya karu ??? Ek aur siyappa "
M-Are mam ap yaha kab ayi ?
T- Ji ??
M- Raghav(staffs nme) yeh prffms gire kaise?
Raghv- Inke wajh se sir ... Ab inhe bhar pyi krni to hgi na?
M- Shut up ... Malkin se koi bharpayi mngta hai?
T- Malkin ???? Kaun malkin ?
M- Arre mam yeh shp apki hi to hai ...kunj sir ne yh shop aphike nme pa kharida hai ..."My T's world" sir ne khud shop ka nme rakha hai ... Kamal hai ! Unhone btya nhi apko kuch?
Twinkle was shckd ... She fnshd hr shpng nd strtd fr hme ...
While drvng hme she was thinking
"Kaise kar sakte hai ap mujhse itna pyaar , Mr Sarna"
Tears were rolling dwn frm her eyes ...

Thts it ... Hws tht ??
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
wow awesome updatedear
i just loved it very much
i really hope twinkles behaviour changes
i really hope she also starts to uderstand kunjs love for her
plzzz do continue soon
thanks for the pm dear😃

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