Twinj- new beginning [updated part 3 pg 5] - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Somu your concept is different dear... I like it 😳
Please continue the story and PM me your next update 😃
It's really interesting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
good start somu😃😃😃

continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Realy different concept yar..
Realy interesting
I loved it ..
Sory m late but dont knw hw i have not seen this before read in one go and its amazing ..
Continue kar jaldi baby..lol
I guess m not in ur buddy list yet🤔
Edited by ZawraMalik - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Zaw dekh kaisa bf mila tujhe!!!
And yo zaw ke bf i loved this
Read this is one go
Missed out on it
Its awesome
Jaldi continue kar ok?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Han ragini meri photi kismat..
Esa Bf jisky buddy list main m not there..hwww
Life barbad ho gyi meri..lol
Edited by ZawraMalik - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

NANDHINI in my story
Imagine her whenever u read about her in story 😳
I will post other characters pics also soon...
Edited by Butterfly.1993 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Nandhini's pic updated check it 😉 n let's continue story...
In restaurant :-

Varun brings his friend sharath who is in love with a girl and now that is getting married to someone else so varun broght him to kunj 😆 for help. Kunj stares at varun... Because even though knowing that kunj doesn't like love n lovers he brought him.

Location change: main road
Only kunj,varun,n ajay discussing about Sharath

Varun: kunj plz husko help karo na.. Voh mera purana dost he... Plz help karo husko mereliye...bas ek baar baar help karo na...

Kunj: varun tum janthiho na ki mujhe aise log pasand nahi he n love my foot... Ye sab jhoot he... Voh love dove... Kuch nahi.. He.. Sab natak he... Aur tum...

Ajay: just staring at them n noding his head for everything...

Varun: plz.. Ek baar mereliye karo na plz...

Ajay: haa... Haaa.. Karlo kunj karlo... Ek baar...

Kunj: stares at ajay...angrily..

Some how varun managed to convince kunj...

Sharath became so happy listening to this news...

Location: marriage hall entrance
Varun,kunj,sharath n ajay standing at gate


Sharath: accha... Huva.. Aap mangai... Kunj...

Kunj: me ye sab mera friend kiliye karahihu...with angry face...

Sharath: murmurs to varun: kya ye karega...

Varun: haa... Karega...me hu na...

Kunj: kya karna he ab..

Varun: kuch nahi bas ladki ko kidnap karna he...

Kunj: kya... Kidnap... He gets angry..

Varun: plz mereliye...

Kunj: teek he tum sab yaha rukh jao...me hiske saath andhar chalthi hu...

Varun n ajay: him bhi chalenge... Na.. Saath me...

Kunj: kaha.. Na... Rukho.. Yaha...

Sharath: k sir come we will go...

Location: inside hall..
Sharath shows the girl's room to kunj...

Kunj: chalo... Chalthe he [for the girl holding her hand]

Girl: stops...

Kunj: kya... Huva... Tumara..boyfriend ne bheja he tume kidnap karne keliye ab chalo...

Girl: mujhe darrr... Lagragahe...

Kunj: accha... Ab tume darrr.. Lagrahihe... Love... Karne ka time kuch nahi laga.. Ab darrr lagrahihe tume.. Drama chodo aur chalo...

He takes her to her father who will be busy with arrangements of marriage...

Kunj: dekhiye sir aapki ladki ne his ladke se pyaar karahihe... Isliye ye shaadi nahi hogi...

Father: kya bolrahiho tum chodo huska haath...

Sharath is tensed... N ask kunj: ye kya karahiho.. Aap.. Sir..

Kunj: tum rukho baat karahihu na... Me...

Father: ye kya tamasha horahahe...me police ko phone karti hu...

Kunj: ye... Rukho... Holds her father's hand tightly...police... Ko kyun.. Haa... Tumari... Beti.. 2 saal se kisi ladke ke saath ghoom rahihe aur ek baap hokar.. Tume kuch patanahi.. He.. Kaise... Baap ho tum..

Girl: aap meri baapu se aise baat mat kariye...

Kunj: lo.. Agai... Jhansi raani...ab tum hi.. Pucho hisse.. Kya kiya.. Ye..

Father: beta tum teek ho na... Tum.. Daro.. Mat.. Meri bacchi...kaho..na.. Ye log kaun he tumara dost he kya...

Girl: nahi... Nahi... Baapu.. Ye.. Log... Voh... Voh... Me... Hus ladke se pyaar karti hu... Mujhe ye shaadi nahi karni he..

Her father slaps her... N sharath comes between n holds her hand n tries to change the girl's mind he starts to say bad about her father... So that her mind won't change..

Sharath: bola na me dekho tumara.. Baap tume pyaar nahi karte he... But I love u baby... I love u so much.. Chalo chalte he.. N they walk away...

Kunj holds sharath to stop them.. N ask the girl to come with him..but sharath says sir thanks for helping now I will manage u can leave..

Kunj: holds girls hand n bring her near her father n asks: dekho.. Dekho.. Tumara... Baapu ko... Tume itna.. Baada... Kiya he voh...aur tume kya chahiye voh sab tume denekiliye inko kitne kaam karna.. Padthahe.. Patahe kya? Tujhe.. Ye sab arrangements tumara shaadi kiliye kitna karcha huva he kuch patahe kya? Nahi.. Sirf ek pata.. He... Pyaar... Khabhi pyaar ka matlab janne ki kosish ki tum.. Pyaar ye hotahe Jo tumara baapu tume khone ki wajese rorahahe... Aur voh ladka.. Husko pyaar karahiho tum.. Dekha tumara baap ka kya.. Haal kiya.. Voh... Tujhe kya dekhbal.. Karega... Tumare baapu ko koi izzat nahi karta he voh.. Husse pyaar... Chiii...



Precap: varun angry on kunj.. Kunj.. Manaoing varun...


Continues...


Edited by Butterfly.1993 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Somu i loved this
Aww sanskaari kunj
Lol ladki kidnap karne ka plan 🤣
But i loved this
Agli baar jaldi update chahiye
Rofl i have a friend named sharath
padhte hue usska khayaal aya 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: .Ragini.

Somu i loved this

Aww sanskaari kunj
Lol ladki kidnap karne ka plan 🤣
But i loved this
Agli baar jaldi update chahiye
Rofl i have a friend named sharath
padhte hue usska khayaal aya 😆


Raggz 🤗
Glad u loved it 😆
Exams ke baad next update
Wait for 2 weeks...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Amazing update Soumya. missed this one. thank u so much for updating

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