Trapped in the Past and Present TwiNj SS Part 10 PG26 - Page 10

Originally posted by: 3dancelover

Yay another update!

It was lovely di

TwiNj are gonna meet again yay, I want them together

continue soon!

Originally posted by: .Anisha.

Loved the update 😳
waiting for the next part
Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: MNsTrous

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(need lil time)

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1st chapter

Hmm.. Finally read it..

It was awesome story choco aapi I loved it completely.

Love mahi but feeling bad for twinkle.

Leela aunty is caring mother it was also good.

Then riya and his father and probably his wife.. This chakkar I didn't understand. Lol..

The the tring tring made me too annoyed but I laughter mahi getting irritated..

. Umm.. Twinkle's friends were good loved their lil friend friend fight and opinion disagreements..

Over all it was fantastic and expertly crafted story.. And realistic one as well.

Running to read next part.

Originally posted by: MNsTrous

Hmm Chapter 2 was super doooper awesome choco aapi. Thanks MN🤗

Loved the family talk and then everyone forced twinkle but main thing which I liked is prem supporting twinkle. Glad you enjoyed it..yes he did

So there are 4 kids on taneja house Hmm. Prem twinkle ishaan and then mahi. Wow. Yeah😆 too many characters

Nicely crafted story.. I must say. Thanks 😃

Coming to the breakfast scene everything was so sweet.. As everyone got worried for twinkle but one thing I felt bad is for heer bhabhi.. So much work for poor soul. It was good she asked Prem to make his own coffee Hehe. And yup heer works as well omg supergirl lol

Yeah I wanted to keep its very family oriented.. yes she is

Aww that sweetie riya.. It was so awesome lunch scene.. Loved it.. Glad you did

Oh and them comes the promo scene..

They went and met maan Singh khurana.

Uff.. Such a boring name. Lol..

Sorry.. But it was hilarious twinkle making faces. But then read the next part and felt maan was nice man.. Hmm.. Mahi is irritating me now. Huh.. So finally twinkle is forced to accept.. Yes he is positive, heheheh yeah little sisters are irratating sometimes, it was her decision they need her to move on in life

Next comes Kunj chinki and muskaan scenes. Umm.. Something siyappa here. I want to know who is riya? Kunj ki daughter nahi lagti kuch aur mamla hai. Hmm.. So Kunj left twinkle in some circumstances so muskan is angry.. It looks interesting and deep story.

Its a very good questions MN you have to keep reading to see I will reveal it in the coming parts

Over all it was superb story. Oopsi sorry for itna bada wala comment but it was truly worth reading.. Keep writing. No need of sorry i love reading viewpoints of everyone 🤗

And running to read next part Hehe.

Originally posted by: MNsTrous

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Aaj pakka unres! Hehe

(All 3 Parts) 😆 Yes you read all 3😊

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Parr 3

Hmm Kunj ne galti ki hai and no he wants to fix.. Huff.. Seems things are wrong. Like he wants her by hook or crook.. I didn't liked it but yes he should get one chance to tell the truth and let twinkle decide. Yeah you will find out in the coming parts

Next was the meeting it was nice. Felt strange twinkle knows to make only desserts lol. And mahi is so cute but irritating. Huh.. Slowly Getting on my nerves lol. Lol yeah A lot of readers are saying that about Mahi 😆 I will tone down her character in the coming parts

And kunj desperate to meet twinkle.. Nice nice. Hehe.

And then this both mom's talk. No doubt maans mom is nice but they are hurrying. I didn't liked it. Yes they are as they have been waiting for so long Prem is good bro. yes he is

Good twinkle wants to move forward.. But she wants to tell her past. I feel something big here. Hmm.. And then she left early for the internship and her dad upset. Huh.

Oh twinkle went an hour early.. And muskaan with her.. Nice.

Then my fav character riya haha.. So adorable.. Kunj taking care of his daughter omg. And it was awesome better French toast than mom. Lol. So Kunj got married.. Nooo.ooo. Lol. Glad you like Riyas character

Hmm then at the hospital.. It was awesome one, muskaan.. Lol got bord and that buddah made me laugh Hehe, so both twinj are in same department only different shifts. Glad it did MN im trying to keep it light hearted too not too serious

So Kunj and twinkle confronts.. Hmm waiting for next part Hehe.

Dekha all three in one go..

Uff it was tiring but it was my laziness and business Hehe. Keep going choco aapi loved it completely. Tata! Will update the next part in few mins, i write such long updates too sorry 😆

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