TwiNj Drabble::My Heart Betrayes Me 6/3/2016

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TwiNj Drabble::My Heart Betrayes Me


Bejaan Dil Ko , Bejaan Dil Ko Tere Ishq Ne Zinda Kiya,
Phir Tere Ishq Ne Hi Is Dil Ko Tabah Kiya
Tadap Tadap Ke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi, Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki,
Aisa Kya Gunah Kiya,
Toh Lut Gaye, Haan Lut Gaye, Toh Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein,
Tadap Tadap

Ajab Hai Ishq Yara, Pal Do Pal Ki Khushiyan,
Gam Ke Khazane Milte Phir, Milti Hain Tanhaiyan,
Kabhie Aansoon, Kabhie Aahen, Kabhie Shikwe Kabhie Nale,
Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye,
Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye, Mujhe Din Ke Ujalon Mein Teri Yaadien Tadapayein,
Teri Yaadien Tadapayein, Raaton Ke Andheron Me Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye,
Machal Machal Ke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi, Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki,
Aisa Kya Gunah Kiya, Toh Lut Laye, Haan Lut Gaye,
Toh Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

Agar Mile Khuda Toh, Poochoonga Khudaya,
Jism Mujhe De Ke Mitti Ka, Sheshe Sa Dil Kyon Banaya,
Aur Us Pe Diya Phitrat Ki Woh Karta Hai Mohabbat, Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat,
Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat Uspe De diya Kismat, Kabhie Hai Milan Kabhie Furqat,
Kabhie Hai Milan Kabhie Furqat, Hai Yahi Kya Who Mohabbat, Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat,
Sisak Sisak Ke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi, Mujhko Saza Di Pyar Ki,
Aisa Kya Gunah Kiya, Toh Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye,
Toh Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein,
Tadap Tadap

His father was in critical condition but his attention was not occupied by him,his mind was filled with her,why would she do this,why will she hide this truth from him.

Her plees her cries and her begging is haunting him from past 3 days,he havnt seen her from past three days,not even talked to her.
He was angry on her,why always she hides things from him dosent she trust him,isnt he worthy to know everything.
Why she did it,his mind was occupied by these thoughts but his heart drifted to some other point,is she fine,was she eating,kahin uski tabiyat kharab toh nahi,was she still crying.
His heart was betraying him.
Why it always happen with him,whenever he is happy his happiness is snatched away and why always it has to do with twinkle.
TwiNj Drabble::My Heart Betrayes Me
Why why always whenever they are happy something or the other happens and distances between them grows thought kunj,resting his head on the headboard.
His mind replayed everything that happened today.
How both of them were so happy,going to confess thier love,and then the one phone call changed everything.
Why twinkle didnt told him about the MMS why did she kept quite,his mind wanted to go against her,shout at her scold her but his heart betrayed him,his heart just wanted to hold her to him and hug her tight,he so missed her 3 days he dosent know where is she,heck he havnt even asked for her how can he be soo selfish.
But due to her his father is in hospital,his mother is crying his family can break apart,he should not think about her,he should just think about his father and his family but isnt she part of your family? Asked his heart.
Twinkle kyu tu hamesha aise karti hai,janti hai na tu ki how much I love you,Fir bhi tu kyu aise galtiyan karti that I have to get away from you kyu twinkle kyu,mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai tujhpar chilana yaa tujhe dantana par mai kya karo twinkle Mai nahi dekh skta ki someone else will raise thier voice on you,I just cannot let someone hurt you twinkle he said to himself.
I am bruised twinkle,my heart is paining soo much please come and heal me twinkle please come,No matter how much try to be away from you ,how much I try to be upset from you I just cannot do it,My heart always betrayes me twinkle..
Please come and heal me twinkle..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hridey 🤗
This is amazing
Loved it.
Kunj's pain has been so clearly expressed
Love u fr this
aur stories de ab lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow ! ! Hrideyy so amazing yaar 😃😃
I could sense ,the pain of Kunj ,so realistic 👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Ragini.

Hridey 🤗

This is amazing
Loved it.
Kunj's pain has been so clearly expressed
Love u fr this
aur stories de ab lol

Thank you Ragini didi!😳
I have written it parallel to twinkle one!
Hopefully I did justice to His feelings too.
I want both Kunj and twinkle's monologue on the show!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Wow ! ! Hrideyy so amazing yaar 😃😃

I could sense ,the pain of Kunj ,so realistic 👏👏

Thank you Glad you guyz liked it.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyanvs

amazing drabble dear

loved it

Thank you soo much😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hats off Hridey.
Poor Twinj. U have pen down kunj emotions so naturally. Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aalina.

Hats off Hridey.

Poor Twinj. U have pen down kunj emotions so naturally. Loved it

Thank you soo much alina😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kunj ka Dard E Dil,.
U knw in these situations...Guys R at much more pain thn grls..
We grls Cry out our despair but Guys cudn't even.do tht..

My heart ached for Kunj... Oh boy..He is madly in Love with her ...
He cudn't contain his own pain...
Thanks Hridey...
Its very rare im TEI tht we get to c Kunj POV...
I am Loving it here...

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Originally posted by: .FlightOfEagle.

Thank you Ragini didi!😳
I have written it parallel to twinkle one!
Hopefully I did justice to His feelings too.
I want both Kunj and twinkle's monologue on the show!😳

Even i want that
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