TwiNj 5Shot:Do Pal -Teaser- Pg1 23/2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Do Pal
-Teaser-
Do Pal Ruka Khwabon Ka Karvan
Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahan Hum Kahaan
Do Pal Ki Thi Yeh Dilon Ki Daastaan
Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan
Where is twinkle,where can she go just like that,samjhti kya hai woh apne app ko,jab tak apno man marzi,she dosent even care for me even a little bit.
He was pacing back and forth in the living room that is when cherry comes down with an envolope in his hand,kunj was so panicked that bebe asked him to stay in the house and others will look for twinkle.
[CENTER]Cherry:Kunj Kunj yeh dekho tumhare room se yeh envolope mila ha uspar likha hai"For kunj".
Kunj quickly goes to cherry and takes the envolope from him,everyone looks at kunj andis waiting for him to open the envolop,kunj opens it and there are two papers in it the first one was a letter which he read out
Kunj,
I will keep it short and precise,till the time you will get this letter I should have been away and if not then also I rewuest you to please stop looking for me because it will be of no use,Soon I will be gone somwhere from where there is no return.
I Know kunj how much you love me and cannot see me in pain,in the same way I cannog see you in pain.
Mujhe pata hai ki jab mujhe koi chot lagti hai mujhse zyada dard tumhe hota hai.
Aur mai tumhe dard mai nahi dekh skti,shayad hamara sath yahin tak ka tha,Bas tumse yahi kehna chahti hun ki I love you alot and when you will see the second piece of paper you will know why I left but I just want to say that I hve done whag is best for you,because no matter whag happens I cannot see you in pain and I know it wll hurt you very much to see me dying everyday infront of you.
-Letter End-
A tear trickle down his cheek,gathering his strength he takes out the other piece of paper and reads it.

Pathology Report
Patient name:Twinkle Sarna
Sex:Female
Age:25 years
Husband's name:Kunj sarna
Tests done: Bone marrow aspiration,MRI ,PET scan,Blood chemistry studies,Complete blood count (CBC).
Test Done For detection of Non-Hodgkin lymphoma.
Results:Postive
General Information: Non-Hodgkin lymphoma (also known as non-Hodgkin's lymphoma, NHL, or sometimes just lymphoma) is a cancer that starts in cells called lymphocytes, which are part of the body's immune system. Lymphocytes are in the lymph nodes and other lymphoid tissues (such as the spleen and bone marrow).
The stage of cancer:Patient is at the last and fourth stage of the cancer.
Chances of survival:Due to detection of thecancer at the last stage,the chances of survival of the patient are less than 1%.
City Hospital
Amritsar

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start hrideyy
what twink had cancer 😭
i hope it is not having a sad ending
continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start Hridey. liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing start!
I think you're gonna make me cry with this though.
Zyda mat rulana plzz :'(:'(:'(
Anyways beautiful concept and cont. soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start, loved itit.
Ah poor Twinj 😭 . Hope it is not sad ending.
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting teaser..twinkle suffering from cancer..😭
Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW it's amazing i really love all ur stories 😊 ... ahhh bt twinkle has cancer i hope it does nt hv a sad ending 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyc teaser,...it seems ppl r gonna cry madly here...
Count me in..

But...

Bhai tu kuch b kar ... but Twinkle ko marne mat dena...

Lymphoma.. ufff.. deadly. ., y Kyu ?

😭😭

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yaar how do you come up with such amazing ideas all the time?!?! I am stunned and so intrigued, pleSe update it soon! You always manage to impress and amaze me :D

On a funny note, finally Cherry kisi kaam to aya 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hrideyy just the teaser got me scared and sad
Cant wait to see what you got, update soon!

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