One-Shot:Kunj!{Last Part Updt} *29th Jan 2015* - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Zawra

I loved it.

Someting different realy nic concept..
continue soon


Thankx😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Duumps

You have visualized this so well ,want this to be played out like this in the show.

Twinkle acts mature and is trying to figure out the situation and asking help.Kunj like this ,in the show too needs someone to knock some sense into him.


I wanted somethhing like this to happen and So wrote it😆
Thankx😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: kabirslover

that was amazing..plz cont


Thank you😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

It was 9 in the morning when kunj's sleep broke,and he looked at twinkle sleeping peacefully in his arms,still clutching him tightly,he smiled at her and kissed her forehead,he woke up quitely not to wake her up and went to get freshen up,he quickly went downstairs and knew today no one will be at home because everyone was supposed to go at an important function and they have left in the morning already.
He went to kitchen and made fresh tea for twinkle and himself and placed the cups in a tray and brought them upstairs to thier room,twinkle was still sleeping,he silently placed the tray with tea cups on the side table and sat beside her sleeping form,he touched her forhead lightly and whispered in her ear,
Kunj:Twinkle wake up,its morning now.
Twinkle stirred in her sleep and turned her face towards other side pulling the covers over her face to protect her from the sunlight.
Kunj removed the cover from her face and touched her shoulder,he again called her name and this time she finally woke up,rubbing her eyes she raised herself from the bed and rested her back on the headboard,she smiled and greeted him good morning,kunj smiled and handed her the cup of tea twinkle was surprised and happy that kunj had made the tea for her today.

It was the first time ever he did that,twinkle felt happy.
Kunj asked her to finish her tea because they have to go somewhere after this.

Twinkle didnt knew that kunj has planned a 3 days/2 nights stay in Mcleodganj, Himachal Pradesh,it would take them approx 5 hours to reach there so they have to leave soon or else they would get late,the time when twinkle was getting ready kunj oacked thier bags and loaded them in the car,when twinkle was ready they had quick breakfast and left for thier journey.
Twinkle kept asking him where they are going,he asked her to keep quite and she'll know where they are going.
Soon twinkle got bored as kunj was drivibg she closed her eyes and slept,she woke up after 3 hours and kunj told her that they'll be reaching thier destination in another hour,twinkle opened her side of window and starting enjoying the scenery outside,the lush greem mountains with traces of fog,sun trying to show his light behind those mountains.
Kunj was happy seeing twinkle enjoying the view,atleast his plan was making her happy.
Twinkle suddenly asked kunj to stop the car and showed him an apple tree,which had lots of apple on it,twinkle asked kunj to get her some apples and kunj was like how can we do it,what if the owner of the garden will see us twinkle pushed him out of the car and got down herself too,kunj only for twinkle picked up a stone and threw on the tree and few apples fell down twinkle quickly picked them up and asked kunj to run towards the car because the owner of the garden was coming for them,they quickly got in the car and left from there.
Twinkle was so happy to get those apples and starting eating one.
Twinkle:Kunj the apple is very tasty,you wanna take a bite?
She placed the apple infront of him and he took a bit from the same place from which twinkle took it,twinkle didnt noticed it though,and it was a matter of half n hour and they reached the resort,kunj parked the car and they went inside,got keys of thier room and asked the bell boy to bring thier lugage.
The room was a super delux suit with all latest aminities,it was spacious and had a balcony on top of that a wonderfull view of the mountains.
Twinkle was happy coming to such a beautifull place,but the continous 5 hour drive tired kunj and he just wanted a bed to lay down on,he was on the bed when twinkle came and sat beside him,pulled the warm quilt over them and lied down beside kunj.
Twinkle:You must be tired naa kunj,you should take a nap,so after that we can go for sight seeing,kunj smiled and turned towards her.
Kunj:You should also sleep,you'll feel fresh.
Twinkle smiled and said,
Twinkle:Kun its too cold her can I hug you and sleep?
Kunj:You dont need excuses to do that,come here and twinkle quicky hugged him and felt soo good in his warmth.
Although they have not spoken of last night but kunj knew twinkle was still quite upset from last night and was trying to overcome it,so he didnt wanted to deny her anything.
Kunj hugged her back and in a matter of few minutes they slept.
It was twinkle who woke up first because she was feeling crushed due to kunj's strong hold on her,she looked at the clock and it was 6:30 in the evening,twinkle tried to come out of his hold but it was too strong for her to cone out she shook him and called out his name.
Twinkle:Kunj wake up,we have to go for sight seeing.
Kunj woke up and rubbed his eyes.
Kunj:Twikle,ajj rehne dete hai kaal subah chalenge saying this he again hugged her and slept.
Twinkle bieng twinkle will go for sight seeing she finally manages to get kunj out of the bed and he agrees to take her out for sometime,as soon it will be night and them temperature will drop further.
They went to only one place and soent sometime there it was 8:30 when they returned and they were damn hungry,they went to a resturant and had dinner.
They were back in the room,twinkle was sitting in the balcony,on a couch with a balnket,kunj came out of washroom and went to her twinkle opened her blanket and asked him to come in,kunj sat on the couch and went inside the blanket,twinkle rested her head on his chest and was looking at the moon.
(Imagine them sittinv like this
kunj called her.
Kunj:Twinkle
Twinkle:Yes,kunj.
Kunj:Are you seeing the moon,it looks so beautifull from here,scarless but as you go closer to it you see the scars in the most beautifull thing in the world.
Twinkle:I know kunj,why are you saying this?
Kunj:I am saying this because our relation is exactly same as this moon,to everyone else it appears as perfect and flawless and but we know that how many flaws we have in this relation,
Twinkle turns and faces him.
Kunj continous,I am not saying twinkle that you are at fault,I am equally at fault no,I have always been on fault,You have always tried to give your best to our relation,I was the one who took our relation for granted always,took you for granted,I always felt that you are childish,you are immature but I myself failed to understand you,I myself behaved so inmature,always took all you words as fun,Twinkle have never seen kunj crying but today tears were just about to flow out from his eyes,I forgot twinkle that you didnt had only one thing to do,poeple wanted you to be a good daughter,a good daughter in law,my mom hated you,my dad dosent like you,you had the task to make them like you My mother always insulted you,yuvi wanted to hurt you and I always failed to protect you,I was never there to protect you from the insults my mother threw at you,Yuvi would have killed you and I was so late in saving you,You succeded in everything twinkle you gave your best to be a good daughter-In-law ,you are the best wife,he was crying by now,But I failed to be a good husband,a good friend,a confidant,The onlr role I had to do,I was never serious with yoy that is why you never trustrd me enough to telk me about the misunderstanding you had about me and maya,I am so sorry twinkle.

With him twinkle was also crying,she never thought kunj will ever confront her like this.
Kunj:I am so sorry twinkle for not bieng there for you,for not understanding you,for always underestimating you,you know somewhere I always tried to impose my weaknesses on you,My male ego never allowed you to show my weaknesses,I though If I will hide them and blame you then I will be cominh across as a better person,I became selfish twinkle,please forgive me,I am very sorry twinkle,But I am very very weak in handlinh relationships,I have never done it correctly, I have always disspointed my dad,somewhat my mom,I was not able to handle my relationship with alisha,I have always failed to work on my relations twinkle,I though If I wil not be able t do it correctly then I might fail in this relation too twinkle,this was all a defense mechanism to avoid the difficulties involved in a relationhip,I dont know twinkle why I am.
So weak,I know I have hurted you alot,please forgive me twinkle,the pain is his voice was clearly evident.
Twinkle cupped his face.
Twinkle:No kunj no!please dont say like this.
Kunj also cups her face and says
Kunj:Twinkle I want you,I want you to be with me,I dont want to loose you,I will keep doing mistakes twinkle,I want you to be there to rectify my mistakes,to complete me to accept me with my flaws,I wont you to fill in my flaws to tell me when I am wrong,he rests hos forhead on her,A tear from his eyes falls onto her cheek and says Twinkle I love you very very much,Please dont ever leave me,I need you so badly in my life,With me in every step,promise me you wont leave me,Scold me,slap me whenever I do any mistake,But just dont leave me,I love you twinkle I love you.
He hugged her tighly his hold getting tighter on her with every passing moment,Twinkle hugged him back and said
Twinkle:Kunj I love you too,I wont ever leave you,and dont say that you are at fault we both are at fault,we'll be toghther and will complete each other,we will rectify our flaws and I know kunj you are a perfect husband,I cannot get anyone better than you,You are my life now kunj and it will always be you no matter what,I may get upset with you but I will never leave you.
Twinkle made him face her and wiped the tears from his face,and said
Twinkle:I know you love me and I love you,we'll always be toghether no matter what,twinkle sealed this promise with a kiss on his lips assuring him that they'll always be toghether.
Kunj got up and went into the room,he brought a wide pot and some woods from the fireplace in the room,he kept the woods in the pot and lighted them,asked twinkle to get up and held her hand.
Kunj:Twinkle today we will take the 7 vows of our wedding again.
Kunj held her hand and started taking the vows moving around the fire.

1st We would provide prosperity as a household to the family and would stand against those who try to hinder.

2nd We would lead a healthy life by developing our physical, mental and spiritual.

3rd we would earn a living and increase by proper means, so that our materialistic wealth increases manifold.

4th we would respect, love & understand each other and would acquire knowledge, happiness and harmony.

5th we would expand our family by having healthy, brave and honest children, for whom, we will be responsible.

6th we should have self-control of the mind, body and soul and should have long marital relationship.

7th we promise that we would be true and loyal to each other and would remain companions and best of friends for the lifetime.

They stopped after the seven rounds and the seven vows and kunj said,these were the ordinary vows I want us to take some special vows to twinkle,I will start and just add whatever you feel is neccesary.

Kunj: We will always stand by each other no matter what,will never leave any one of us alone.

Twinkle:We will always be vocal about our feelings and thoughts,wishes and desires so that any kind of misunderstanding would not come between us.

Kunj:We will tell each other everything,no matter how small it is.

Twinkle:We will love each other till the enternity.

Kunj:Forever toghether.
Twinkle smiles and says
Twinkle:Forever toghther.

Kunj hugs her and twinkle hugs him back,he breaks the hug and kisses her on the lips sealing all the promises that they have made infront of the fire with moon bieng the witness to thier love.

Kunj:I love you siyyapaQueen.
Twinkle:I love you too khadoos sarna.
And they slept in each other's arms...

Epilogue to come soon!
Edited by .MysticalWaters - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
So beautiful update.Loved it.Especially the special vows.So beautifully written.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: VIMAL.M

So beautiful update.Loved it.Especially the special vows.So beautifully written.


Thank you very much bro😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
omg its just fabulous MW
i loved it very much
kaash this scene was there too in the show
i really loved the vows they took
now when will u give us epi
beware cvs are roming here they will still ur idea put copyright claim😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: kusharberry

omg its just fabulous MW

i loved it very much
kaash this scene was there too in the show
i really loved the vows they took
now when will u give us epi
beware cvs are roming here they will still ur idea put copyright claim😆

I hope they copy this and show this in show😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: .MysticalWaters

I hope they copy this and show this in show😆



Agree CV's need to copy some romantic scenes from the OS n show it in the show.Especially hugging n sleeping together in the bed.The blanket one.More than cheek kiss in Hindi soaps.I love forehead kiss.CV's should show a forehead kiss in the show.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Awesome update beautifully written.
Loved it. Thanks for pm.

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