Twinj 3shot: Controlling Desires part 3b page 13 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Abhia2Twinj4eva

Arrey Ian update man milega 😕 jaldi naa plz😉


It's nearly done dear kal pakka update kar dungi. Be prepared for saree romance
I fear for ragini heart lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Iansomer1


It's nearly done dear kal pakka update kar dungi. Be prepared for saree romance
I fear for ragini heart lol

now you r making me feel so thrilled😳 yay update milega😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
I can't believe that I missed part 2!! It was amazing, and oh my god, the tension between them😆 Can't wait to read the next part!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: EmeraldTigress

I can't believe that I missed part 2!! It was amazing, and oh my god, the tension between them😆 Can't wait to read the next part!


Glad u finally found it.
Thankyou
Next chapter is gonna be up in 5 minutes be sure to read it.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
"Yes yuvi. Go play i will come after 10 minutes.you are a good boy na?"Kunj pacified him.

" no dost yuvi needs to see you now.come play with me now.now now now."

"Shut up yuvi and leave."Twinkle slapped a hand on her mouth feeling stupid for her outburst.kunj looked at her.

"Twinky is that u.dost I heard twinky.you both are in there I want to come too.open the door I want to come too."yuvi kept repeating much to their irritation.
"Yuvi you can't come inside.we both are..."Kunj couldn't complete the sentence much to twinkle's amusement.

"You can't even say not wearing clothes kunj.here see what I do"

Kunj stopped twinkle "He is a 5 year kid twinkle don't traumatise him by telling him we were having bathroom romance."Kunj said
Twinkle Turned to him "you mean we were having bathroom romance??surprising because I was under the impression that you thought I was seducing you.
Kunj was speechless l. How did she just twist his words.
This challenge was gonna be the end of him.
Breaking there thoughts yuvi interrupted again.
""Ok just let me see you kunj then I will know my dost is ok and I will leave promise.pinky promise. Open up."

Kunj signalled her to move back he will show his face so yuvi leaves.
Kunj opened the door slightly and showed his face to yuvi."happy now leave please"

"That man is never gonna be happy unless he kills me with his kiddy act" twinkle muttered. Kunj brought his head back in to ask twinkle "did you say something?"
Yuvi took that opportunity to push the door open as kunj was distracted he didn't have a strong hold on it.
Kunj nearly fell over with how hard yuvi pushed but twinkle steadied him by holding his shoulders.
Kunj turned to yuvi angrily "yuvi what is wrong with you?"
He saw yuvi staring weirdly at twinkle clad in a towel.
Kunj's blood boiled in anger in a flash he had twinkle behind him,shielding her he said to yuvi "leave now and don't ever do this again yuvraj "
Kunj said through clenched teeth.yuvi who had gotten a small glimpse of twinkle knew more than enough about what was happening. Trying not to blow his cover he went out trying to reign in his fury.in his anger he broke the cup lying on the table and left. He hated his life now.

Kunj turned towards her.
Twinkle just stared at him wondering why was his reaction so possessive and angry.
Awkwardly she went out followed by him.
He locked the bedroom door to avoid any unexpected visitors.
She went to the walk in closet again.
Kunj set his clothes on the bed and began to get ready trying not to think of the blushing beauty just a door away.
Why had it angered him so much that yuvi saw her like that. For a minute He forgot about him being mentally disabled and just wanted to beat him for laying his eyes on his wife.
A scream of frustration brought him out of his thoughts.
He rushed to the closet and asked "are you ok?"

"No I am not okay. This freaking saree is so complicated. I am getting late for the party and my hair is wet.I am freaking miserable kunj.bebe is gonna kill me for being late" Twinkle ranted her troubles to him and all she heard was a laugh from the other side of the door.
"Shut up kunj. I swear either help me right now or I promise I will forget that damn challenge and kill you before kissing you."
Kunj immediately controlled his laughter.
Kunj slid the door open hoping to tease her mercilessly but seeing the view in front of him all jabs flew out his mind.
There she stood clad in a golden saree with red blouse. Half of the saree was lying around her feet.
It looked like she was drowning in it.
He was too distracted by her beauty that he ignored her command to help her.
She turned around her face on the verge of crying. Her red lips pouting asked wordlessly for help.
He sobered right up and shook to clear his mind. His wife needed him right now not some love struck fool who couldn't stop staring as if he had never seen a girl before.
He walked towards her slowly afraid the moment would vanish if he acted too fast.
She saw him completely ready. She had seen him in a suit before than how the hell did he always manage to make her breathless in one glance.
Dressed in a black blazer,walking towards her with that look in his eyes that made her melt told her he was as conflicted as she was.this was not just a mundane challenge anymore

He bent down and picked up her saree pallu.
Slowly he circled around her and twinkle grew concious of herself.
He didn't give her time to dwell on the conflict thoughts as he was in front of her again tucking her saree.she sucked in a deep breath. his hand brushing against her waist. She tried to breath so her head wouldn't feel so light but his warm hand on her cold skin felt like fire.it felt like the fire was engulfing her in its passionate embrace.
He draped the pallu over her shoulder.
She thought he would leave now the work was done and she would have time to compose herself but fate was not being kind to her.
He turned her around so she was facing the mirror.
their eyes met in their reflection. This was the couple who had vowed heartily to hate each other instead here they were falling for each other head over heels. Dancing around each other fighting the pull they felt towards the other.

Having helped her and nearly being tempted by his beautiful wife kunj felt it would be better if he left now.
"See you downstairs at the party."He whispered feeling if he spoke too loud the spell would be broken.
Kunj turned around to leave when he felt her delicate hand stopping him.
She held his hand and with her other one she picked up the waist chain lying on the dressing table.
"Won't you help me with this?"Twinkle said trying to put him in same situation he had put her in. The butterflies in her stomach had started a marathon despite all that she held her ground tempting him to another round of teasing.
Sensing her challenging gaze and not one to accept defeat easily he grabbed the other end of the chain and pulled it hard.twinkle crashed into him with force.
They were playing with fire neither wanted to hold onto it so they kept throwing it to the other knowing when it became too hot to handle they would crash and burn in it together.
He circled the chain around her waist,his fingers brushing every now and then sending her heart into a tizzy.
He knelt on his knees to clasp the lock in.
Twinkle tried to move a step back,maybe that would stop the butterflies. He just moved forward not Helping her in the slightest.
Her delicate waist adorned with the silver chain sent all kinds of sinful thoughts in his mind. He saw her hand clutching her saree trying not to hold on to his shoulder for support.
Infact she was trying not to touch him.with a click the lock was in place.
He got up and moved back admiring his saree clad goddess.
She truly was the epitome of beauty and sexiness.
Her hair still wet was slightly curly. The minimum jewellery enhancing her long neck and wrists.
The waist chain only added to his torture.
It was ridiculous that he was jealous of a piece of jewellery but honestly he hated and envied that chain. How he would love to be the one caressing her,loving her,kissing her.
"You go ahead I will join In a minute."she said breathlessly.
Kunj nodded and went outside.

Barely 10 minutes had passed when twinkle went out. She headed for the stair case when she found him leaning against the bannister.
"Are you waiting for me??"she enquired touched that he didn't go alone.
"Ofcourse I was.i thought the power couple of amritsar should make a entry together.no?"Kunj raised his eyebrows.

She nodded smiling.she tucked her arm into his."shall we?"

He shook his head confusing her. He removed her arm from his.she tried to hide the slight pang of hurt. Ofcourse he was just trying to put on pretenses for the world.stupid of her to think other wise.
He broke her train of thought with his next action.
He held her hand tightly, entwining his fingers around hers
"You are not something I want to flaunt on my arm,like all those high and mighty snobs do at such parties,we are equals in this relationship I don't want anyone to think differently."He explained staring into her eyes and she felt her heart soaring at his thinking. He had vocally accepted her as his wife something she had done in her heart since ages. Today would be the official start of their relationship. He wanted to declare it to the world too.
She gripped his hand and acknowledge his act. They glided down the stairs as all eyes turned towards them.
They made a perfect couple,she was draped in a golden & red saree and he was complimenting her in his black tux.
Hand in hand they walked down the steps declaring their unity. There were hushed murmurs of awe and some jealous whines by the ladies.
They didn't even need to do anything romantic but the whole room was forced to silently acknowledge the sizzling chemistry they oozed just by being in each other's presence

Precap for chapter 3b:

Jealous kunj. Dance floor romance and we get to know who finally wins this challenge...


Okay people this chapter got too out of hand. I never thought it would be so long so dividing it into two parts.next one will be posted later.
How was it??please do comment ur thoughts.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Loved the whole part.
Every single bit.
Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Awesome update ,loved it 😳
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
super amazing update Ian

eagerly waiting for part 2
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Ian i can't even type properly. Your update had me so lost in it. I'm even ready to kill to see such a thing on screen... It was beautiful...
Can't seem to get hold of the right words to express how i feel at the moment...
I have a party to attend and right now all i am able to do is sit and smile like a total idiot.
I can't stop gushing over the fact that there is a part b... Although k don't ever want this to end..
Kunj protectively hid her behind himself.. That bowled me over.. Loved the whole thing.. Can't decide what to mention and what to leave out
Edited by .Ragini. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Loved the whole part.
Every single bit.
Plz continue soon.
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Thanx dear

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